[quote=0AngeldeviL0] Uhm, I don't ALWAYS go online. On summer vacation, I go online alternately, or sometimes even twice a week. On school days, I go online once a week, because of certain academic reasons. Is my schedule reasonable and excusable enough so you won't "accidentally" erase my character? [/quote] Very, very, very strange. This CS was buried underneath our crazy antics, and I'd like to finally go over this one. (ty HylianRose for [s]begging[/s] telling me about this CS) --- The way you described time-travelling is, by far, one of the stranger abilities I've seen in this roleplay. Of course, feedback is a drug that helps anyone. -I... am not sure what to think about her changing her past. Sure, I think it's acceptable for her to do so a few times in her life, but if she is able to change her own past fairly frequently (even around present time), then that means she [i]is[/i] somewhat capable of changing the pasts of others, making her pretty overpowered in a way. This is one of the few sketchy things I see in this CS. It's not specific enough- at least, not yet. -How is it revealed that the uncle knows about Keath's powers? Actually, does he still meet Keath when her father's friend takes her in? -Is time-travelling the only power she has? Powers are not limited to only supernatural abilities. Just pointing that out. -Her personality may not get many people to have their characters interact with Keath in some way, but judging by your schedule, it might seem to be a logical thing to give her that persona. This one's personally up to you for modifications if you want to. --- She's looking good! I just want more details, as well as some clarifications.