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I should point out a few things about your CS:

1) You should probably describe your derangement with detail, right now your Malk just seems generally crazy (and borderline Fishmalk, not joking look it up it's a term in the VTM community) but we need to know how they are crazy. What makes them tick? 
2) I think you should increase your humanity number, at 2 you are more or less an animal which wouldn't work with the initial start of the story (i.e. working for the prince, a vampire with humanity 2 would probably live outside society). I recommend 4 for your concept, inhuman but still relatively coherent.