Your post is fine. We just returned from the arena of episode two and dropped off jedi and wounded clones in a forward command post where we were restocked with fresh ones. We just lifted off and were making way to turbolaser defences while avoiding the major flak around our main offensive force, which includes parts of the 67th too that will frontally assault the turbolasers in order to pin the garrison and make the risky entree of the Larties in the turbolaser defences (located in those rocky outcrops and heavily defended perimeters) survivable.

The forward CP where we are collecting reinforcements for our fallen ones and depositing the jedi is relatively far from the actual combat (several hundred meters) as to make sure they're safe.

It seemed to me that you were in the middle of a firefight, so perhaps you could edit some parts to make it more feasible. You could always just say you joined our transport though if you don't care about rewriting the entire post.