Nintendo Directs are constantly hyping me up. --- [quote=liferusher] Apperance: Green eyes, black hair in pigtails, wears black hoodie with a grey shirt under it and black shorts with black sneakers, 120 lbs, 5,4 ftName: Liam RossAge : 18Gender: FemaleSpecies/Race : ZombiePowers : Necromancer: A necromancer could heal her and make her look like her old self again and repair fallen of limbs and such.(could be filled in by another person if he/she wants to)Super Strength: As a zombie, she is not limited to the amount of muscle power she uses as a human, as humans cannot use 100% of their muscle power. She is able to use 100%Immortality: She just lives on and can't die for a second time by ageing, She can however be killed by destroying the brains.Infect: Can make someone a zombie by biting them.Weaknesses:Fire: She is very flameable.Rotting: She rots sometimes because her body isn't working that well.Sun: Her body dries up by the sun after a while making it skinny.Personality: She doesn't like to go out when it's day she mostly sleeps by then and does her things in the night. She likes to be around other people and wants to make it clear that she is with them(shouting and stuff like that)Background: When she was 18 she got hit by a car making her instantly dead. A necromancer came to bring her back alive, What the necromancer exactly did is unknown but She wacked up near the school Athalia. Her body was cold and she couldn't hear her heart beating anymore. The necromancer explained everything and left and gave her a number to call on her phone if she needed help repairing her body. The necromancer send her to a special college for people that were not that normal to most of the people and had already made a call to the school that she would be studing in this school from now on. She didn't have a choice the Necromancer saved her life she couldn't just walk away and try to pick up her old life again It would be pretty difficultStudy: She only takes math because of her sleeping times. And she likes to watch scary movies with people. [/quote] Zombies! :D Strange choice of species. I'd like to provide some feedback. --- [b][u]Liam Ross[/u][/b] [*]The zombie bite is overpowered. As much as how awesome zombies biting [s]idiot[/s] humans is, it is a generally unhealthy ability to have in this kind of player-centered roleplay. I recommend you to either delete it completely, or replace it with a different, unique ability that won't exactly guarantee stuff like zombification.[/*] [*]I personally think Liam's super strength kinda conflicts with the apparent fact that her limbs can, indeed, fall off. Are the limbs also strengthened by default, and fall off in certain circumstances? Or is there a certain system to it? I highly suggest that you compare those two traits again and come up with a decision.[/*] [*]I usually don't point out things in the [i]Personality[/i] category, but this is something that you really need to consider. Most of the characters will let their characters sleep at night, meaning that [u]many characters would wind up being inactive until a timeskip to the next day[/u]. This means that there will be a severely limited amount of characters to interact with, and that usually means that Liam would not be used as often as other characters. It's just something I'd like you think about, and if it's fine with you, I'll accept the personality.[/*] --- With that said, I'm gonna go improve my Totem CS. I'm gonna show HylianRose how awesome it could be.