[b]@Venom:[/b]

You're really going to have to go into better detail about the weapon. What does it look like? How is it used? What are the strengths and weaknesses of the weapon? How does it show their seniority? What sort of data use is going on? Etc.

And for your character's personality, I don't quite understand what you mean by "Extremes" could you be a bit more clear?

And considering his background in art and creativity, why not have that incorporated into his digital appearance? (ex: something colorful or dealing with paint and music mechanics?) Just a thought since his alias is "Ink" and all. ^^;

Overall, your character seems a bit of a loose canon, not sure how well he would work in a group situation and from the sounds of it, he might not have the time to be a Corrector on top of his lifestyle. And considered you don't want him to be part of a group already established, you'd have to tell me how/why he's being brought in at such an age where he's close to retiring. Any thoughts on my thoughts? ^^;

[b]@SanaChan:[/b]

Your first part of your background didn't make too much sense to me, maybe it was the way your wrote it,"Her whole life she’s had to endure her older brother around sixteen. It was something about painting his room and dying his hair. Possibly at the same time. As much as she may deny it, and if anyone were to ever let him in on it she would know the best places to hide your body, she does care about him. Else she wouldn't have continued to put up with his… eccentricities. However, she is at a constant point of wanting to strangle him either for his lack of decent grammar or his constant teasing of various faults that she has. It's all in good fun, or so she tells herself, otherwise she might actually get offended some of the time." but it didn't have much of a point except that (what I understood) is just that her brother is a bit weird (needs medication?) and she has patience because of enduring it at the start of a young age? How many years are they apart?

I think everything is alright. 

[b]@Everyone:[/b] 

I think what may not have been clear about the "Do you want our characters to already know each other?" is this...a group of Correctors is gathered together at the beginning of their career. Usually all newbies with one or two experienced Correctors. Soon they leave once the training wheels come off. Thus the group tends to grow and stick together for a few years, it's rare to have one person leave (if they're being transferred). So the options generally boil down to this (trying to be as clear here, as this is more for your benefit than it is mine) :

If they don't know each other you need to say why. Where has your character been living outside of Tokyo and why they're coming into the new branch after so much time?

If they do know each other, then it's as if they're already good friends in the group because they started out together and have been going on for several years.

Does that help anyone? I'm kinda concerned you're all content with being strangers because it just makes it more work in the beginning to break the ice and get to know one another. Is that okay with you guys? I can work with it though, I just wanna make sure everything's clear.