You could at least address him coming towards her, something I can work off of. Unless you just want him showing up next to her and poking her with a stick to see if she's dead.

Of course, that's not how it would happen, but y'know. Metaphorically.

Edit: This is as cheesy and Chester Cheetah. 
But I made a promise to my mom years ago to never make the mistakes she did. Took to drugs young, almost died because of a very bad trip, got off of them but got into smoking. She became a bad alcoholic before she met my grandfather. (I was adopted by my grandmother, I called and still do call her my mother.) She got off of drinking but smoked until she was 58. She stopped smoking after that. 

I have never touched a cigarette, never tried drugs, and I've never liked the taste of alcohol. I'm a man of my word if nothing else.