My vote goes out to Thursdays, Entry #3. 

Microreviews:
[hider= #1] - Although it's well written, I find it a bit hard to connect to the character in question due to not having agoraphobia myself. At least I'm assuming that's what she has? Aside from that, there are some things here and there that I don't really know if I like them or not. For example, some of the written 'sound effects', along with what seems to be a spoken laugh and a spoken sigh. Those feel a bit weird to me. [/hider]

 [hider=#2]: There are several typoes and wrong usage of similiar words in this one, along with some strange grammar choices here and there. Also, what the hell happened to Itta in the first place? Her 'soul was forced back into her body' after being killed by a bandit, but who did this? Who is the pale white guy? And why is she suddenly so ridiculously powerful? [/hider]

 [hider=#3]: My favourite, and the one I voted for. It's a bit short compared to the rest, but it has everything it needs to be complete. In addition, I find it far easier toconnect with the character because I have found myself in a similiar situation. The only real fault I can find with it is that, if you read over the point where it says that '[the main character] had just turned eightteen' -- which I did --, it's a bit confusing when the girl in question has apparently already been in school 'for the last twelve years of [her] life'. I thought she was 8-10 or something XD [/hider]