[hider=The Story of Prisca Glover]... I almost feel bad for being amused. Such a poor woman. You have my plus-points for having amused me and for being a fairly good writer. Though, at the length of this, it is a fantastically lengthy piece which inspires few emotions and just makes the reader draw out minor feelings of amusement. I wasn't exactly taken with it. The middle part where she actually left felt like it had been cut really short in favor of other things, which threw me off a bit before that conversation started. I was more like, looking for errors because the story didn't absorb me. The entry is fine, and well written. I hope to see you in the future too. I could possibly vote for this one, but you'll know why if I don't, alright?[/hider]

[hider=Itta]Hm. The sole unnatural entry this time, eh? Very well, then. You have my compliments for trying something out of the ordinary, and for entering, thank you very much. I have to say, though, the writing here could use some work. There were several times when the sentence sounded weird or something was simply misspelled. You're not a lost cause, though, you've written plenty here which makes for a readable enough text, but these numerous distracting occasions combined with a not-so ground-breaking plot didn't do it for me. Why did that girl make so much of an impression on the big bad bandit if he thought she was dead? But thank you very much regardless, feel free to enter the next. Haha.[/hider]

[hider=Thursdays]... Such a tiny little piece about such a subject... Welp. I hope not too many children go through the same things this girl is. Hm, all the main characters are female, huh? Oh, well. This entry was the only one of these that succeeded with the emotional aspect. I started to care about what happened and became somewhat immersed in it, well enough for me to disregard some of these spelling and sentence errors which I have seen. While the story isn't exactly ground-breaking either or particularly unique... Eh. Actually, I didn't have anything to follow up on that. Compared to the entries I have read over my time at WOTM, this is really lacking, really. I think Kaga detailed why pretty well above. But, for the ones that are here, I suppose it is the best one, huh?[/hider]

[hider=Vote]I vote for Thursdays.[/hider]

I do hope we'll be able to see a few more voters on this thing.