[b][u]Mary Ciercelt[/u][/b]

[*]It more or less glorifying things like greatswords and stuff. Nothing like lifting a car, or a school for that matter. She'd be using greatswords and other larger weapons.[/*]

[*]I can remove the tankiness then.[/*]

[*]Realistically body mastery acts as a reiteration of the fact that [i]god-modding is against the rules[/i]. I'd be more cautious of allowing a blood-bender or mind-controller in than analyzing body mastery. Think of it as the abiltiy to direct your body to do anything you can think of, and anything your body can [i]feasibly do[/i]. Her strength is no more than was described beforehand, and body mastery does not increase it.[/*]

[*]Tracking opponents, identifying them, and being able to fight them is a big step away from "seeing through an opponent".[/*]

[*]Others put in little tid-bits into their Weaknesses section as well. Weaknesses that have nothing to do with combat.[/*]

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[b][u]Avelynn Ciercelt[/u][/b]

[*]Mana was simply just not mentioned. She needs it. It's an energy source. Mana is essentially just the same as stamina is for physical activity; the more you exercise magic, the more mana you use. She doesn't have an infinite well of it.[/*]

[*]In any case, I've decided to rework her anyways. The other concerns have become moot now.[/*]