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Jeez do me next! haha what do i have to fix^^ constructive criticism is good ahah.
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I like Ellie for the most part. What size bottle of Mt Dew we talking... is it Mt Dew or water? Or... does she drink Mt Dew like water? (like I do... :P )
I think for the most part it works. Paintball guns aren't very effective against zombies, but they're great for marking buildings, vehicles, targets, and so on. Mace balls might be useful for living targets and wild animals. I would recommend at least some basic melee weapon, like a bat or something.

Also, kudos for the birth control pills. They'll run out unless you can get to a pharmacy. I do like the treehouse idea. If she can keep quiet and is careful, she doesn't run the risk of zombies ramping up to it.

When you get some time, PM me, so we can talk about her dad.