The opener says each character can only carry 2 extra items while the pre-approved bios have 3, so which is it? Also are those your own characters or will they be used by someone else? Completely unrelated, but you should probably specify how many powers each class starts out with in the model bio, since you mentioned 3 and 2 from the Cleric list for Clerics and Paladins respectively but no such distinction was made for Bards or Mages. Something like "pick X powers from Y list" depending on the class would do I suppose.