[quote=Gerontis]
@NytefallSo far I only see some problems with the custom techniques.1. She can harden her blood like steel? I think that is going too far, certainly for a genin. Lowering it would make it more acceptable. Keep in mind that harden your blood to the point of having the same strength as steel is likely A ranked. Also, a golden rule of Blood release is that you can't use the blood of your opponent. ("She can also use it on her opponents by covering them in her blood and hardening it.'')If you mean however she can latch some blood on them and try to immobilze some movement, I not sure if I am also with it. It means that she can control her blood from some distance while the range is set on ''self''. Think that you need to look back at the jutsu and maybe form a more base version.2. High speed is usually not that bad, but to crack concrete with a strong blow? I think that is going too far for a genin. In real physics, it can't really be done by a mere human. In Naruto physics, I assume it would take some good strength and the speed. Again, I would like to see it lowered down.That is it for now.
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right i'll make the changes now