@Kenshi Brett

Very nice! I must ask, is this your first time RPing or just new to the site?

Anyway, I'll get on to giving feedback...

~Powers~

His powers are a bit... strange. 
1) I don't think we're accepting anymore 'healing' characters. We already have quite a few with that ability, my own included.
2) I'd be interested in hearing details about this 'Luck' power and how it would be applied in the RP. We've already denied a character with a power very similar to this.
3) Welsh. Now, words spoken in another language in an English RP are interesting. I have a format I'd like you to use just so it's easier for everyone to understand. 

"[Insert Non-English Language Here]" [i][Insert English Tranlastion Here][/i]

Make sure you use the italics tags to signify that it is the translation. 

Being able to calm animals is an interesting ability. I like it!

We'll adjust weaknesses once we iron out powers. It's important to have a well balanced character. ;)

Everything else is fine though, if you want to be a better writer over all, I'd try to get more variety in your sentence structure. How can you make the sentences flow more easily with little of those awkward pauses? You don't always have to start each sentence with 'He...' It sounds very awkward after a while.

Make some changes and then try again. ^-^