[quote=Teleport]You, however, have forced me to explain the flaws of his jutsu, which I was going to hope to only reveal in the story.
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That was the point to address the things that seem OP in your character for you too reply and explain how your character is indeed balanaced, I assume he will get stronger if there is a part two to this RP and lose some weakness which I have no problem with, it's only natural :)

The only thing you didn't adress was the acquiring of mangekyou still doesn't make a little sense to me, and how you acquired EMS. If you wan't to keep a few things secret at this pint that's fine considering I made you show us why your character is actually balanced.