[quote=Origin]That was the point to address the things that seem OP in your character for you too reply and explain how your character is indeed balanaced, I assume he will get stronger if there is a part two to this RP and lose some weakness which I have no problem with, it's only natural :)[/quote] :P He actually has a lot of weaknesses. Just as a side note; as the story progresses, he will reveal more of his backstory and flaws. [quote=Origin]The only thing you didn't adress was the acquiring of mangekyou still doesn't make a little sense to me, and how you acquired EMS. If you wan't to keep a few things secret at this pint that's fine considering I made you show us why your character is actually balanced.[/quote] I intend to reveal how he acquired the mangekyou and EMS as the story progresses. This is to build up the intent to know how he got it; and when I actually reveal how he obtained it, it would be a lot cooler than just displaying it out in the open. :3 [quote=Origin]In his unexplained state where we didn't know the weakness of his jutsu etc. Your character was by no means stronger than his, he could demolish most if not all characters in the RP but with his explanation it provided me with insight into his weaknesses which proves that while he does have insanely strong techniques they have weakness and major disadvantages, I hope his normal techniques don't have such drawback.[/quote] lol :P I'll explain other weaknesses throughout the story.