Dude, you got a long list of powers. 
A few things to note:
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[*]Character Control is a no go, period: If that first ability allows you to control the minds of those around you, it can't be accepted. [/*]
[*]The more powers they have, the less powerful the individual powers are: Take into consideration a character whose sole ability to shoot lasers out of his eyes. That ability will be stronger than anyone else's who also shoots lasers out of his eyes but has a list of other abilities.[/*]
[*]Be more specific: Being vague about things only brings up arguments and debates about your character. If something isn't common knowledge then you should probably elaborate on it further.[/*]
[*]Transformations are an iffy topic: If the transformation makes you better at your current situation but also nerfing other abilities then you should be fine. If they are just increases in power then they should be limited in how they are used. If the boosts in power are too great then it can't be accepted at all.[/*]
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