I'm back y'all and saw the review. Very helpful and here is my responce in order. 1: dark void is not mind control and mainly relies as an illusion attack. Basically to throw off guards when my character swoops in. Like in the final battle fighting against xemness in KH2. How where he looks like he is going attack with an after image but it was just a ruse just to throw the adversary off his foot. With structures add to even go more to fake an appearance (maybe if he needs to retreat will most likely use it.)But I'll let you guys judge that. 2: Power of decay, you guys are right and I should have been more specific. Before I make the change I'll let you guys know what I'll be putting in it as the change. I will put weapons lower tiered to him will be effective. But other magical weapons or items will required preoperation, according to their level of their ability. But holy weapons make a major exceptions since it's basically a weapon against demons. So yeah I'll let the peer see that as well. 3: Black plague would have to be inhaled.(will put that detail in there.) it would take a fair amount of time til the plague takes its full effect. (Unless inhaled large doses.) this ability is ment to wear down adversaries in a slow death if not treated properly. It will take three days for inhaling a puff but will show symptoms of it as time flies. Which the days will lessen depending on how urchin one breathes in. 4: regeneration is noted and will be changed. No head regeneration.( if chopped off. It stays off) 5: transformations, I'll let more people Jude that. If more agrees then I'll change it. 6: noted and will be taken off. No final form(or any forms if more decided to vote no on metamorphous) 7: pure dark. Noted and it's not like I can tell right away from an illusion or not. Orderly it becomes slightly obvious. Like for example pulling a rabbit out of a hat. My character would easily tell there is a hidden compartment were the animal is stored in. So to make this explanation short. This ability makes him more aware of what's real or not. 8: sinner ability noted. Will take it off and will replace it with hades soul. Since stealing his soul, he is basically using his power as his own. Though us into much will tire him out will be put in as well. 9: preps will be made for summoning. I'll get to work on Cerberus' minor sheet 10: will put stats on physical attributes. (Tiresome but it makes te world go round ^w^) Phew. Anyways here's my responce and hope to get more reviews to further help with my sheet.