[quote=PhoenixEye9]
 Milo Cash Johnny, Phoenix, Hawkeye (see who catches that joke) 32 – Warrant Officer Grade 5 Pilot American – Milo dreamt of the stars, dreamt of flying, dreamt of everything except staying on the ground, the ground represented normal, boring, worthlessness to him. He was always active working hard to get into the military to do his original dream of flying. That dream was more than fulfilled when he was opted into the test flying, between the variety of the flight-testing of jets and helicopters his experiences out matched most, including many experiences of crashing that should have killed him but did very little permanent damage. After his many fiery crashes, pullouts, and landings he earned the name of Phoenix (You know that legendary burning bird). Eventually in his testing alien ships were brought to him, including the Wraith Dart, Goa’uld Troopship, and eventually a Puddle Jumper/ Gateship. After actually being able to start up the Puddle Jumper (showing he had the ATA Gene), and flying these ships oddly well he was pulled into the SG program. Once on the team he was sent to Atlantis, which was then brought back to Earth a few years after his drafting.Since then he was on standby for more missions as needed, stuck on Earth again. Now he has been assigned to space once again, “Space: The Final Frontier”(It is a little short I couldn’t think of what else to put, if I have to put more for acceptance let me know.) Loyal, Caring, can be quiet and brash, at times may seem my care even though he's listening - -two of his callsigns are bad jokes, one based off name the other appearance -loves flying-not exactly the best order follower-
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I have a couple of notes.
-More information on his test-pilot years working up to the point of being enlisted for Stargate work. 
-Remove the Troopship part as those things would never be able to be taken by Force.
-How long did he spend on Atlantis(Do you know what season?)

I will recommend that you also make another char. Medical/Science/Military for something to do when not flying as you won't be flying all the time though I will often try and make sure there is something for you to do.

For your rank.

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