[quote=Molach]
Sorry for the delay, and Ignore the lack of appearance and bio for now. My computer crashed for no good reason while I was working on this and I had to redo everything.I hope this gives you a general idea of what I was going for anyway. (I know it may seem random, but there is an actual idea behind it, I promise.)I will finish it soon, but feel free to look it over for now. 
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Everything looks good except your jump stat. I just don't know what the 5/0 means or if it's a typo. Other than that, sweet character!