[quote=Mateotis]
Age added.I've edited the post, removing (hopefully) all the references to high-tech stuff and also, changing the size of the platform to "medium", so to say. Is that okay to have the fancy acrobatics that way? :PThanks for the heads-up and do tell me what I need to fix!
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That's a little young... Alright, but be wary you're gonna have a hard time getting into bars or such.

Anyway, everything else is good save one thing: Whenever you refer to a continent or the planet, all caps. RUNE, IGNIS, so on. NON-NEGOTIABLE.