@Forsythe: It looks good. I just want you to be a bit more specific about what moon powers she has. I don't want the moon to become a deus ex machina that can get her out of literally any situation. To what extent does her healing magic work? Exactly what offensive abilities does she have? What defensive abilities does she have?

@Zombehs: Looks good, and nice back story. Accepted.

@BuriedComic7: I like the clan's history, but perhaps you could write a bit about Kawaru as well. What was it like growing up in a dying clan? What kind of reputation has he built in the village?

@Gokiburi7: I like the character. Just give me a bit more description in the appearance.