Character Review: Alex 

I'm going to be reviewing these powers in order, these are not out of order and I will be missing none of them. 
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[*]Age: I forget, but I'm older than 10. Off to a good start.[/*]
[*]If we're going by Judeo-Christian hell, it's only 445-ish degreees Celsius. As it's descirbed as a lake of brimstone. Brimstone boils away at 446 degrees, so it would have to be below that. Which translates to 833 degrees Fahrenheit. Also, they have to be able to be extinguished otherwise they're too OP. Period. There is no such thing as a permanent, instant, or unavoidable attack in T1. Seriously, Beta had a shitfit because he had one that was accepted by the GM because he didn't actually clarify what the powers do. So no effects like that. Mind you, without the permanent effect, it simply an intermediate ability.[/*]

[*]Explain more about how this works. You're awful nonspecific here.[/*]

[*]Explain further on the Shadow puppet thing. That needs more explanatio overall. How strong are they, how fast do they form, are they material or do they work some other way?[/*]
[*]As long as this is only on Zero tiers this is totally fine, but Zero tiers are totally useless in combat.[/*]
[*]This is a low tier ability at best, that said. Like the previous flame based ability, it cannot be permanent. However, this falls under grapple rules. The longer that you are capable of holding an opponent in this, the longer it burns them. [/*]
[*]As long as this remains in a 10x10 area, this is an acceptable power. Like all fog based abilities, they are hard but not impossible to dodge as long as you give it a reasonable area. Now, since not a single character in this roleplay with outright die from this. Why not change it to a irritant, causing burning in the eyes and mouth? Serving to distract from combat.[/*]

[*]This is fine, but you might want to make it so it takes one turn to actually form the wings. The flight may want to be slowed down to about 150 - 200 mph.[/*]

[*]That's gonna be a no. Because it's kind of obscure and it's also irresistable.[/*]

[*]Regeneration is an iffy topic, it cannot be instant, and it cannot be done in combat. It has to be done outside of.[/*]

[*]Nope. Period. Character control is againt the rules.[/*]

[*]This is kind of cheap, so make it a move that needs to be prepped. If the bats are caught you're fucked.[/*]

[*]The metamorphosis is something that I'm gonna have to decline, you have a remarkably long list of powers. Adding more forms that offset this list of powers even moreso would just make him OP. While each of the metamorphic forms is reasonable, his list of other abilities is so drastically long and unspecified how they are affected by these transformations that I can't accept this in good consciousness. Besides, overall these forms seem useless compared to his basic form.[/*]

[*]Where is it stated that he can create illusions? Anyway. Illusions are pretty much bunk in any normal roleplay. They're usually ignored because most characters have the consitution of a saint. Nobody uses darkness based powers in this roleplay so that won't come up but alright.[/*]

[*]Just how strong is a monster? How many tons? 150mph is a little high though, as he is he's not even able to scratch the surface of high tiers. I'm going to say nerf the speed significantly, or nerf everything else to make him exclusively speed based. [/*]

[*]The shadow puppets are counted as faction members, et cetera. There can only be one general of equal tier, and four low tier characters. [/*]

[*]Dimming the area is totally fine, but making the area totally black would take a few turns of either prep time or activation time. You either stand there and prep, or you stand there and actively make it incrementally darker. Your choice.[/*]

[*]This is the scythe from the Dante's Inferno video game. An observation based on your description. Totally don't fault you on that, great game. Mind you, this weapon is seen in the game to not immediately cut through anything. This weapon is designed to kill normal mortals, not superbeings or immortals. It will not destroy other people's weapons, I'm just telling you this now. Everyone's weapon supposedly cuts through everyone else's weapon for one reason or another. So remember that.[/*]

[*]Cerberus. Just make another Character sheet. This will be your matching tier general, have it be of reasonable strength. But it's a general, so it cannot kill critical characters.[/*]

[*]After reading through this, he could literally not scrape by as a high tier. This is intermediate tier stuff, yo.[/*]
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