[quote=Rtron] I have arrived! And completely forgot my original character!Oh well.SIREN IT IS! [/quote] Considering your character was a dwarf I think, you have successfully made exactly the opposite. Well done! [quote=Rtron] Name: Dirae (Die-ray) [/quote] Alright, first some neat little facts about Sirens that don't have anything to do with your character, but are cool nonetheless. 1. The Siren capital city exists in an alternate dimension, to access it one must simply visit one of the six Siren villages (one on every continent) and be allowed entry. 2. Sirens from the capital tend to be susceptible to diseases and toxins, as they live in an environment free of those things. It's a great excuse if anyone asks about the mask. 3. Sirens are not any less susceptible to sonic attack, but it is a common myth that sound-based things have little effect on them. 4. Ah, I forgot to mention ages in various racial profiles. Sirens age similarly to how Lyn does (Up to twenties, then stops). They live to be around 400 years on average before they succumb to age. Next, a point or two on gods: 1. Gods can't get drunk. Adon was just being a cock. he does that. 2. Those with divine blood are no more powerful than those without. While you can get oddities, this isn't Greece, having god as your dad does not make you Hercules. Luckliy, she isn't significantly stronger than others, well done. 3. As Greece however, gods do tend to get bored and start having babies with mortals for the lulz. Yes, they do it on purpose, no they have nothing better to do. In fact, gods don't have much direct influence. Feel special, Auna likely used all the power she had for a year just to make Dirae miserable. And finally, the one problem I have: There isn't much in the way of prejudice in RUNE I'm afraid. The only exception is NOVA and Demons/Devils. In fact, NOVA would be awfully hospitable since she is a daughter of their deity. Servants of Auna however? they wouldn't much care for her. Maybe a workaround for the mask is she doesn't want all the baggage that comes with being half-divine? I can't imagine she would very much like temples locking her up in the name of 'keeping her safe,' or for Auna's followers to find her. But the public at large wouldn't be inclined to give a shit. Aside from that well done! That's a great way to write a divine character. Also, is the dragon modeled after a particular dragon? The thing about dragons is only twenty four exist, and they may as well be demigods in terms of power. There's three in each continent, and I'll give descriptions later. Actually, there's twenty three. One turned itself undead, chopped it's arm off, and replaced it with an excavating drill.