Asaraen Physiology: 800 lbs lifting weight, 20mph running speed, capable of flight at how fast? Specify how fast he can fly and you're good. This is low tier stuff though.

Flight and Aerial-Terrestrial Combat: In flight course correction, high speed mobility, enhancing one's jump height without actually flying? Yeah this is acceptable. This would also be considered low tier.

Light of the Devene: What's this magic do, exactly? You didn't specify what it does. 'Light magic' doesn't cover what Light Magic is, I can list a shit ton of Light Magic. Like if it's a long list of magic he can do, that's totally cool. But I need some specifics on this. 

Swordsman of Asara: Yeah, this is acceptable. Although skill is actually determined by the quality of the writing, rather than just saying they're skilled. 

Asaraen Armor: The increased hardness is acceptable, but only make it like, maximum twice as hard as iron or steel. Flexible but hard armor is a good trait, and as long as you maintain a reasonable hardness for it, I say it's acceptable.

Maelstrom: I need a temperature on the bladed bits and this should be good to go. This ability would also be considered intermediate at best, depending on the temperature.

Blade of Rhay: Totally acceptable as is. Remember that sword thing in my tag though. That's important.

Cloak of Air: Completely acceptable suit.

The Ship is fine, but never the central focus of combat. Acceptable as is.