Ok, done some refurbishing. [url=http://www.roleplayerguild.com/posts/969968]LINK[/url]

Addressing the points:
1) Magic changed. I didn't really hope to get away with it but never gonna find out until i try right? :P
2) Oversight on my part, i was removing all mentions f time and places, that one slipped.
3) Changed to her still hiding her past. It would make for an interesting arc if she's eventually rated out :D