[quote=VitaVitaAR]
@TimasheTiger: Okay, I think I need to clarify some things before continuing.[/quote]

Oh, please do go on.

[quote=VitaVitaAR]This is a deeply-anime styled RP[/quote]

(aka a Black Rock Shooter rip-off) 

[quote=VitaVitaAR]that is intended to take place in Japan. While this certainly doesn't prevent characters from other nationalities being involved, they would naturally be a minority.[/quote]

Which are currently...how many players? Two or three? That is if you count our scary clown friend, which I will get back to you about that at some point.

[quote=VitaVitaAR]The rules of the Dreamtime also state that these characters know each other at least somewhat well for their Alter Egos present near one another. There has to be some explanation for them knowing Kazuko, especially, given that her coma and what that means in the Dreamtime are the initial hook for the plot. Basically what I'm getting at is that characters from English-speaking countries should not be the majority given how things are set up.[/quote]

Nowadays, its not that hard to connect to other nations and countries via the internet. Even now, as we speak, millions of minds are connecting to each other via the internet, even what we are doing right now is connecting our minds.

[quote=VitaVitaAR]Your character... lacks all of that.[/quote]

Currently you have been proven one on one of your points, so to correct you, my character lacks many things, which I will soon prove wrong to you as well.

[quote=VitaVitaAR]In addition he's an optician at only 19 years old, after dropping out of college? I don't think that's really possible. I'm pretty lenient with young ages for professions but this seems a bit extreme to me.[/quote]

I never said he was an optician, just following the path, and I'm actually gonna stop here and educate you on this. It is not impossible for a young adult to take a job at...let's say any lenscrafters, get hired and somewhere along the line, ask management about registering with the government, in my case, the state, and get an apprenticeship license. Depending on what your government's rules for qualifying as an optician are, in my case, 3 years and 3000 work hours, you can then take a test and receive your license. My mom started at age 15, guess who became an optician at 18?

[quote=VitaVitaAR]The biggest problems seem to be in his Alter Ego, though.[/quote]

Go on.

[quote=VitaVitaAR]To begin with, the name doesn't fit. Keep in mind that Alter Egos have names that have no relation to anything a human could ever be called. Stuff like Black Storm Barrage, Riot Lily, Red Star Vermilion, Rise Heart, Resolve, it has no relation to human names. The extent of his powers aren't explained at all, as well.[/quote]

That's because I intentionally made it not fit with black rock shooter and technically his name is only half human. While Aloros is a traditional Babylonian name, Adad is the name of the Macedonian god of storms, and honestly dude, it shouldn't even matter what his name is, its a roleplay, you should be allowing at least some room for creative freedom. As for the extent of his powers, clearly if you did not understand the line where he picks up a sword, made from a nuetron star folded upon itself 1000 times (literally the densest thing in the universe next to a black hole), through sheer willpower, then you clearly don't know how strong he is. As for the fire and water, should I have said that he can create flaming shockwaves from his sword? How every time he hits something it sounds like a cannon going off? Should I have said that he can split the red sea with a single swipe of his sword?

Food for thought

P.S. In case you didn't know, likes/dislikes are literally a sub point of a human's personality, I see nothing wrong in Faygote's character sheet.