@Roxas. First off, you can stop being a massive prick just because I decided to disagree with the OP and give VALID reasons as to why I do not agree with him. Second, I can assure you he has for these reasons. Ahem, example 1. the name, Black Storm Barrage, Black Rock Shooter? Not exactly the strongest, but there's more to it. example 2. character appearance. Black Storm Barrage's Appearance [quote=VitaVitaAR]Very pale skin, green eyes, black hair, black clothing[/quote] Black Rock Shooter's Appearance [img=http://2.bp.blogspot.com/-V12PjL9OwGQ/TYGBgi0sxjI/AAAAAAAAIOI/iQbXILN_Mkg/s1600/Konachan.com%2B-%2B78927%2Bblack_rock_shooter%2Bkuroi_mato.jpg] example 3: Character Weapon. Black Storm Barrages Weapon [quote=VitaVitaAR]The Alternate Cannon is a massive dark gray cannon, longer than Black Storm Barrage is tall. It is nearly impossible to break, and can be used as an effective bludgeon at close range. It can fire bullets, rockets, or lasers, and the barrel can expand to fire a massive beam of energy.[/quote] Black Rock Shooter's Weapon: [img=http://brianandrew.files.wordpress.com/2011/11/blackrockshooter011.png] I rest my case Third, obviously you're not going to be fun to play with if you're going to have an overreative and irrational attitude to a well developed argument especially since the freaking GM hasn't even read it yet.