[quote=Forsythe]
Ok, done some refurbishing. Addressing the points:
1) Magic changed. I didn't really hope to get away with it but never gonna find out until i try right? :P
2) Oversight on my part, i was removing all mentions f time and places, that one slipped.
3) Changed to her still hiding her past. It would make for an interesting arc if she's eventually rated out :D
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Can you just add a brief description (or not so brief if you want) of what each magic does and how good she is at it, then you'll be good to go.