[quote=Mateotis] [i]However, he would've never thought about himself getting physically involved with it and this is what just happened to him a few days ago: He found himself right in the middle of the story, basically overnight! Quickly realizing its possibilities, he adapted to the world of Ozenbuel and set out on the journey to find the monarch's assassin.[/i] [/quote] I do like it. Honestly, I read through to this part and thought that you would have to change it because I didn't want anyone to be a real world person and start off in the anime, but this is interesting. It has a lot of story possibilities. So for now, you can leave it as is if you like it. Still, even with as much as I like it, I want the story to run off of complete confusion. As in this[b]:[/b] This is just an example... [i] So after a long day of work, I went to bed. I know that a new episode for the anime was up, but I was too tired to watch it. Instead I decided to watch it tomorrow. Only problem is that I wasn't expecting what happened next to happen. Now, I went to bed, just like anyone else would, and I just laid there. It was like I couldn’t even fall asleep because I didn’t watch the anime that night. Either way, I eventually fell asleep and waited. I say waited because that’s really the only way to help put this next part into perspective. When I woke up, I found myself in an alley way in a place I had no recollection of. Down one way was a street that was as black as pitch. Not even the road lines were visible from the light on the other side of the alley. So I walked to the side with light and found people roaming the street, being polite to each other, talking about random things… one of them even passed by me and said hello in the most polite tone I’ve ever heard. I said hello back and began to think that this must be some better part of the cities. I’ve never heard of anyone in Manhattan being so polite before. The moment I thought that, I looked up and saw a big sign that read “Coming to the Ozenbuel Theater…” That was literally all I read. I remember thinking to myself, “Ozenbuel? No way in hell is this Ozenbuel. This has got to be some elaborate joke or something.” Unfortunately, I knew something was up when I noticed a group of shady looking people in cloaks walk into the alley that I just left from. I decide to walk back to the alley and grabbed their attention. This is what happened. ???: Hey! Wait up! (running down the alley) [b]The group stops.[/b] ???: Are you the guys who did this to me? If so, it’s not funny. Man: Wait a minute. Do you even know who we are? ???: No, but you’re about to tell me or I can call the cops. Man: (short pause) Cops? [b]The rest of the group whisper to each other.[/b] ???: Seriously? Man: Do you mean the guards? ???: Guards? (tone reflecting his seriousness) Man: Yeah. That’s Ozenbuel’s only form of authority, besides the monarch that is. And with that, I couldn’t believe it, but I was stuck in the world of anime. I really couldn’t rap my head around it and fainted. [b]TO BE CONTINUED…[/b] [/i] That's the best I can come up with.