[quote=Tearstone]
So yeah, only two general questions... Wrong writing POV.. that's about it. Now, I know things will get shorter as we go along, so I'm not griping about the length, just telling you how it is as far as it's been written. Length is good and encouraged. The more people have to work with, often gets better results. As a note to others: Only the length is advanced.
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Posts will probably get shorter when we start interacting with each others characters. Its very hard to write a longer sequence of events as all the introductory posts are, when you have to include the responses of characters especially in a shorter, or more tenuous situation, eg. a fight between walkers or another group of survivors.I know that for myself it will probably be hard to constantly write 2-3 word page documents asa post once the group of 6-7 people are all interacting at the prison.