Hello drewccap,

I also agree with Garrison's view on your ability/power. It just entails more than it implies. 

Most of the rest seems fine but a little bit in your history.

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It was at this point she caught the attention of the government as they noticed that it would have taken someone with some extraordinary abilities to hunt down someone that from extensive background checks was a trained assassin.
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I believe, especially from her being of a high level family of assassins, she would have a good knowledge in tracking your target and etc. I do not really see this kind of ability to hunt someone down, even though also an assassin, as requiring an ability to track down and warrant government attention in that way. I think the way to warrant the government's attention should be something more evident. Unless, to say, she tracked someone else who had some sort of ability too, and killed them, hence the government's attention.
Most of your CS is good, just a few small things to fix.

Now then Toaw, I don't see anything really wrong with your cs, but, he doesn't bring much to our escape. Also your "skills", I am uncertain about contacts from underground gangs and such. In Purgatory, you wouldn't have access to contact people outside, maybe some of the people from underground gangs and such were also Evols in Purgatory too, but you wouldn't really be able to use that to much of an advantage.