[quote=DeathstrokeSW]
History: A soul who has lived in the Rukongai for most of his life, Kaien comes from low class beginnings, suffering beatings from those around him for no reason other than survival of the fittest. Growing up, he was an angry kid; living in the hellish time near the end of the previous Soul Society. The beatings soon stopped, but the life of violence grew worse; hollows took over a quadrant of the Rukongai, backed by the enemy the soul reapers of days past could not defeat. Soon, the regular Soul Reapers pulled back and Captains and Lieutenants, sometimes 3rd seats patrolled the quadrant. 

One by one they all fell, not to the hollows, but to the Enemy no normal soul dared look upon, for fear of death. While he was still a boy, hiding from the Enemy, he came upon a man who would come to be his idol: The (now deceased) Captain of Squad 11. Their meeting was by chance, and it followed like this: Kaien was hiding from the Enemy in a house, hidden in a closet, raging at himself and his predicament when he felt an unusual, massive amount of spiritual pressure. Crawling on the floor, he peeked over the window. There stood the Captain of squad 11, decimating his opponent in a matter of minutes. When the bloodshed was over, the captain noticed Kaien, and walked over, introducing himself. He immediately noticed the kid's rage and decided to take him in, formally adopting Kaien in an effort to harness the rage Kaien felt into a constructive weapon instead of a destructive path. The dead captain loved Kaien as if he was Kaien's biological father, even leaving the Haori to Kaien in his will. Kaien was brought to the Seireitei, living in the Captain's quarters as he grew. 

Unfortunately, this peace was not to last; Kaien's adoptive father fell to the Enemy, right before Kaien's eyes. This resulted in the permanent tremor in Kaien's right hand and the resurgence of his rage. In an effort to protect Kaien, he was sent to the Academy, where he spent a longer amount of time than any other graduate; the only time he left the grounds was for his adoptive father's funeral. Kaien was given the Haori and per his wishes, it still hangs in Squad 11's barracks, both a reminder of their fallen leader and a promise. However, a piece of the bottom was stripped off and fashioned into Kaien's glove. [/quote]

I have an issue with this History:

- For one, the Captain's and seated members couldn't handle a few enemies in the Rukongai? I highly doubts that.
- The Squad 11 Captain wouldn't be so friendly nor would care about anything or anyone other than his own Squad members and killing the enemies, more so killing the enemy. He wouldn't act that way towards a hiding child, if anything, he'd tell the child to be brave and quit hiding like a weakling before he'd walk off to defeat the rest of the enemies.
- If the Captain took him in and he lived in the Squad 11 quarters then why is he waiting to join the Squad? Doesn't make sense. 

owo