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Name: The Soldier of Love, Nick
Age: 20. Ish. 
Magic: Secret, GM’s Know
Magic Level: A
History: Nick grew up in a distant city with his parents until one day he discovered he could use magic. He kept it a secret from his parents, and most everyone, until the day he decided to leave. After admitting it to them, he traveled and eventually grew strong enough to control it. He went in search of a guild, and found the Pheonix Wing. He asked to join the guild, and was accepted into it by Guild Master Jamie.
Personality: Kind, charming, an all-around nice guy. 
Team Members: 
Three Strengths: 
1. Not easily angered 
2. Good at making friends (for the most part)
3. Not afraid to admit defeat
Three Weaknesses: 
1. Sometimes headstrong
2. Gets emotionally attached 
3. Is secretly afraid of women
Greatest Love: Cats. Duh.
Motivation: … Cats.
Appearance: Tall, Kinda muscular, charming
Additional Details: Any questions? Ask the GM’s. They should know. Or better yet, ask me.
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Your magic that we discussed is fine, you need a longer history, a more detailed appearance (or a picture), and a motivation that makes sense.