Hidden 5 yrs ago 5 yrs ago Post by Drunken Conquistador
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Here's my character, hopefully it's up to the task.


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Oh shit! That's three already! I was not prepared! I said I would get the OOC up when there were at least three sheets but I was not ready! On the one hand, that means you guys are awesome for getting all of this in for me. Like seriously, you have no idea how happy it makes me to have this kind of reception. I cannot say enough times how grateful I am.

@Drunken Conquistador I'm gonna give him my endorsement too with no modifications. However I will still give some critique while the opportunity is available. I am the Storm sounds awesome and I see possible uses as discount telekinesis in battle. Power of dreams is kinda already accounted for in the innate ability to speak to the conscious and unconscious mind of the chosen so I don't think that needs to occupy an ability. Feel free to toss something else exciting in there too. I would also like to see a bit more about Agabyzus while he was involved with the original Shadow Legion. These are not required for me to formally approve it but are just my feedback.

@YungTweak I'm gonna also give Lord Bale my endorsement with no modification requests. My critique would be this: A lantern as the totem is interesting, as traditionally its supposed to be something wearable, but I have no objections to expanding my interpretation. I would like to see Berzerker Rage also be a way to power up Agnon's basic magics (which it's reasonably safe to assume all Legionnaires have a basic dark aetheric prowess, in addition to whatever unique feats they're known for). He sounds like an excellent late-fight character and I'll welcome him aboard too.
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Thanks @Sierra! I made the change you requested. To clarify, her aetheric powers are meant to be very weak, little more than parlor tricks - the idea I was going for was that the nobility hoarded these small secrets more as prestige than anything else. Definitely won't be anything too notable in the story unless/until she trains them.

Edit: also extended upon Giselle's backstory by adding 2 paragraphs at the end, ideally giving her more personality and gumption
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Wow, how can people write such big history sections so quickly? I'm not in Casual any more lol

I'll try and get mine done sooner rather than later. Do our characters all have to be important?
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Hidden 5 yrs ago Post by Silver Carrot
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I hope this is okay.


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Little update:

Progress on the character is going along nicely!
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@Sierra Made some changes on the CS replaced the dream thing and added a small blurb about Agabyzus during the good old times.

Also, man, I'm just trying to imagine how utterly dysfunctional our little Dark Lords were back in the day with so many clashing personalities and differing agendas :p
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I imagine the legionnaires took turns holding each other back lol.
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@Isotope For a minute reading that description I thought you were going for a half-breed, which would have been really interesting though the role comes with a lot of challenges to it. I really like what I read and I'll endorse it. I would like to offer some optional critique as I have other people, but I'm a little strapped for time preparing the materials to get the main thread up hastily.

@Silver Carrot That is a very interesting path you've chosen to go down. It's not something I would have thought of and I do like where you went with it. I look forward to seeing you expand on the notions of forbidden knowledge over forbidden power and the merger of sorcery and chemical warfare. That brings some awesome new ideas to the table.

@YungTweak I like to think it was something along the lines of "Okay, let's focus on taking over the world now and we can fight over who gets what parts of it after."
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I imagine the legionnaires took turns holding each other back lol.


"How are we losing to these guys?!" Asks the leaders of the Free Peoples as Lord Bale and the Crone stomp on Agabyzus' sand castles for the 100th time.
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It's ok @Drunken Conquistador, Akat will be his friend if he hands her the judicial system.
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@Sierra
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This RP has interested me so I made a sheet! I hope everything is in order, I'm not entirely sure if he fits the power scale here so let me know if it's a bit much. Thanks!

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Ooh, this looks really interesting. I'll try to draft up a character sheet in the next few days.
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At last we have her! The last RP I joined was my first stab at playing a truly terrible person, and this time shall be my first attempt playing a character of dubious morality that also happens to be female! Huzzah.

Let me know if there's anything I ought to adjust. Especially whether or not the power level needs to be scaled up or down.

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Wowzers, we might actually get to the player cap haha.
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@Isotope Well it is seven, eight if you count Sierra's character. And what delightful company we're all bringing to the table!
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@Isotope Well it is seven, eight if you count Sierra's character. And what delightful company we're all bringing to the table!


A lot of people from the Free Cities though

#FREECITYREPRESENT
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I... may want to throw my hat into this ring...
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