[OOC] Dragon School

[camlin]

A private RP for @svpernxva and me! The first IC post will be up soon-ish.

The title, Dragon School, is a working title and I want to replace it as soon as something better comes up. I should probably start by naming the school...off to the random name generator!

[DuperOrdi]

@camlinWould you mind if I were to develop Asnye and Tonor instead? While you take on Frithe, Camemare and Dra Snil? I figured my character is from Asnye so I might as well focus on building it ^^ Also, the shopkeeper could make a memorable NPC.

[camlin]

Sure, sounds good! :3 And yes, I shall carefully craft the shop and shopkeeper. I don't want to steal quite so blatantly from Harry Potter this time.

[camlin]

With Mr. Lindhall out of the way, you can go into as much or as little detail as you want with the rest of Ellie's clothing purchases, and maybe start browsing other things too if you want. Then Lindhall and the boy (who's one of the new students btw) will show up, you'll be introduced, and the guided purchases can continue while the boy browses for clothes. Sound good?

I also want you to know that I'm trying to write my replies so that we only see into Ellie-Mai's head, for the time being. She's the only important character here right now, for all that I hope to make Lindhall memorable, and stories tend to read better when they only stick to the main characters' thoughts or the most important thoughts of others. So basically I'm trying to describe only what Ellie can see, hear, and perceive until someone else's thoughts are important enough to share. Are you okay with that approach? I should still be able to keep most of my posts nice and long, or at least medium-length.

The above note is in reference to this post.

[DuperOrdi]

Sounds fine with me. Also, I believe it'll be so much better if we let any solid interactions between Ellie and the other boy be at the southern gate, and I can make Ellie try speaking with him but he doesn't notice she's there because he's too focused grabbing his stuff, or something along the lines of that.
And yes, I noticed that was the approach you were trying to make, and I don't mind it. Lindhall is still gonna be an unforgettable character for me :D