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Gotcha. I like it. With your permission, I kind of like the idea of it being the informal name for a series of related dialects common from southern Perrence, through Crisia, Enth, Eastern Kerremand, and Northern Helbahn: maybe a sort of creole language spoken in rural areas (hence the name).

Like, Enthish and Crisian people have distant Eskandish roots (as to Holmanians and Kerremans), but they're culturally closer to Perrence at this point.


Bruh go for it I think it's a great idea
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Hidden 9 mos ago Post by Force and Fury
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Dorothea is approved! Just one small thing: looks like you've got a broken 'bold' text in there. Fix that up, post her in the Character tab, and welcome aboard!
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Hey all! This is just an update on the direction of this RPG. I'm going to give our current round one extra week, since I know that some collabs are on the way and some people are busy with life until the weekend. I've got a few points of consideration below that I think should be covered:

1) We've had a lot of very long posts and I think we need to reel these inn unless they're collabs and they're going somewhere. I'll be doing the same. I don't want anybody to feel the pressure to post a novella each time. One or two paragraphs are fine. Post in response to somebody. Post with a simple description of your character's thoughts, actions, or surroundings. Don't feel the need to take on a high burden.

2) After the current day's events (one or two more rounds of posting), we're going to be doing a bit of a time jump and there will be an event that brings all PCs together for a more linear plot progression. Basically, you're all going on an adventure!

3) From people who haven't posted yet or for at least three weeks, I am going to ask that you post this week or you'll be considered inactive. We're going to be going to some very interesting places soon and things will quicken and shorten up, so I need to see that you're on board and ready. Here's hoping that you all are.

Happy posting!
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Hidden 8 mos ago 8 mos ago Post by Th3King0fChaos
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So I made some new bullet ideas. I put my original Inferno Bullets and Quicksilver Bullets in here, then I also made a few more using different spells to create and form them.

I also added how they are made and how the spell is used. I would like to hear some feedback on the ideas I put here.

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Hidden 8 mos ago 8 mos ago Post by A Lowly Wretch
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Here is my CS. Hope it looks good. I only have the image to craft.

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So my dumbass had major motivation in some fighting styles, that could be created because of the Gift. A few had some IRL inspiration, others were just some ideas I had.

Let me know what you guys think of them.

Way of the Tornado



Way of the Boar



Way of the Phantom



Way of the Storm


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So I made some new bullet ideas. Now taking in the idea of "Kill things Deader" is not the best method, I had made a good portion of these having a non-lethal/less-than-lethal effects, different effects, and making them for them to not just be bullets that "Kill things Deader".

I also added how they are made and how the spell is used. I would like to hear some feedback on the ideas I put here.

This will also now include all my old Bullet designs.

Safe-T Bullets



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Hidden 8 mos ago 8 mos ago Post by dragonpiece
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Hello! This is the character I would like to put up for review.


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Hidden 8 mos ago 8 mos ago Post by Force and Fury
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@dragonpiece

Okay, so I like Ingrid quite a bit. Below is my feedback.

1) Personality: I dig it. I get a clear vision of what she is and what she's like. Remember caps for all traits.

2) Character Appearance: I like the little details in here. Awesome job.

3) Languages: Well explained and makes sense. As a side note, learning one language within a family (Avincian, Belzaggic, Inipori, Drudgunzean, Eskandish, etc.) makes it easier to learn the others.

4) The Gift: To quote, "Her current RAS is 8.4" Just an FYI that RAS is kind of an immutable thing. 8.4 also puts her in the range of being a true prodigy. I might remove the 'current' and just pay a bit more attention to how exceptional that RAS score would make her. There are no more than a couple hundred people in the entire world with RAS scores that high. I also like the way that you handled her dive into Atomic. It's nice to see someone making an atomic mage who isn't an idiot. As an aside, at some point, just give me a list of her official primary, secondary, and tertiary schools of magic she'll me focusing on at the academy.

5) Background: Digging this overall. I like the conflict between motive and reality and how that'll have to come to a head sooner or later. In terms of that brief mention of her family's past struggles, I might leave out the literally 'starving'. They're nobles after all. They were probably humiliated and broke, but not the point of literally not having enough food. Maybe they just had to - *gasp* - cook for themselves or eat 'peasant food' or even... skip some meals. Just having to worry about food supply would literally be humbling.

6) Motivation: Thumbs up here. Idealism mixed with some doubt.

7) Inventory: Love it! Remember to delete my original text at the end there. Also, 'Neskal' as opposed to 'Neskel'.

8) Strengths & Weaknesses: looks good and makes sense. Just double checking that 'capable in a bow' means she can bow/curtsy well?

Overall, well done. Feel free to make those handful of small adjustments and post her in the Characters tab! Welcome aboard.
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I've done something I shouldn't have, but now it exists.

This is Desmond's Fighting skills, his style, and the 'Martial Arts' he knows.

Kind of giving myself and you guys a better understanding of how Desmond fights when put in different situations and with different weapons.

If you could, let me know what y'all think. Or don't it's understandable to not want to read a 20K character post on ramblings on how Desmond hits things good.


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Hey, I was wondering if right now was a good time to join the roleplay? Are you guys in the midst of a big arc or anything that would make joining an issue?
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@VolcanicLaval Hey, happy to hear about your interest. We've just kicked off a three or so posting cycle mini-arc. If you can jump in quickly, you can still get in for the first cycle. Otherwise, you can take your time and join once the mini-arc is over. Regardless, unless we're at 12 people (currently at 10), the RP is always accepting! I'd recommend joining our discord to keep up to date and get help from the community in making a character. We're especially looking for anyone to play a Hexaic character, Torragonese, Belzaggic, or yasoi right now. Regardless, feel free to hop into the chat!
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Awesome character, @pantothenic, and I'm seriously digging the religious angle, which hasn't really been focused on as much as I'd have hoped so far, and his use of the Tethering. He'd have unusually fine control and very long drawing and casting range. His progression of the disease is also considerably on the low end of where most people would be by sixteen, as he's still ambulant, so perhaps some sort of remark about how some people maybe even believe that his fervent faith is pushing back against the disease, delaying it?

I also imagine, given his personality, that he might want to explore binding at some point, genuinely for the sake of healing as opposed to most others' ulterior motives. In any case, he's great and I look forward to having him in the RPG. Pending whatever little tweaks you see fit to make based on this advice, feel free to pop him into the characters tab and do an introductory post. We can discuss a way to slip him into the current arc if you like, either with the groups or staying back with Hugo, Jocasta, and a few others.
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Zarina Al-Nader


"O' Dreamer, guide my mother through her endless night. Guide my sister to your grace she has lost. And perhaps I may one day be guided to my dreams once more."


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Character for GM review.


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Pending a few small grammar and spelling edits, she's approved. I love her angle as a performer. Looks like Leon has some competition!
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