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Jen's lookin' clean! Go on and get her into characters :)
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Does my app need to be reworked?
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Not a GM, but I'll chime in (hopefully helpfully).
To preface. The GMs have been a little busy, but I've got the go-ahead to offer some advice. Most of the RP activity is in the discord server presently, so I've been privy to viewing the musings and concerns regarding your character. The TLDR, I suppose, to preface, is that Szarlota doesn't so much need an outright rework as she does a fair bit of expansion in several areas.







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There's a discord server?

Anyways, I'll see what I can do to expand the backstory and trigger event. I was a bit confused on that part.

Do trigger events have to physically violent in nature to force enough stress on the mind or body to activate the powers?

As for the powers, I guess I can change it
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There's a discord server?

Anyways, I'll see what I can do to expand the backstory and trigger event. I was a bit confused on that part.

Do trigger events have to physically violent in nature to force enough stress on the mind or body to activate the powers?

As for the powers, I guess I can change it


Yee, there's a discord. Although, I guess someone will need to poke a GM about inviting you at some point.

Nice! Can't wait to see how the expansion turns out.

Trigger events can be physically violent, but not always, just commonly. Pure mental distress works just as well for certain power types.
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Worked some of this out with Mintz, and some invaluable help from Yosh in the power department. Took a while to get prepared and ready due to holidays and such thus far, ut here it is! The final product of a lot of days of work dangit! XD

Just say the word on anything that needs to be fixed or changed or edited or nerfed or whatever else! And it shall be fixed. o7


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Alright, I'm finally running through and reviewing the stragglers to get this started. Not much to say about Alman here, except, uh...Isn't this just his original power? Y'know, the one we had ya change? xD. Point is, though, firing several hundred-feet spanning heat beams of death is a tad extreme. If what we came up with last time isn't to your liking anymore, we can figure something else out, but this one can't run as-is.

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This looks promising, but let's touch base on a few things; firstly, backstory. The main thing that strikes me as odd is how, er....Emotional his spiders come off as? That was my best way of describing it, but my point being this. End of the day, they're still spiders, so beyond being piloted by his intents (which is what some of this could be viewed as, but it's put forth in a kinda odd way), they're still very simplistic creatures. As for his power, the ability-copying needs to last for a far shorter frame; I'd say at most is perhaps 10 minutes, to prevent him from simply having access to a massive collection of powers of his choosing that can last him for potentially a whole hour lol. Oh, and also, how exactly do these 'power transfusions' work when it comes to giving him multiple Parahuman abilities at once, or when (theoretically, given this is not dismissed in the Power section itself) granted to other Parahumans? Does it simply not work? Or does he gain those multiple powers, perhaps at some cost, like the duration, potency, or control of said abilities? Some things to think on that I'd like to see handled before I fully accept him, but overall, it's lookin' good. :)

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I honestly don't have a ton to say here, which is a good thing, cuz it means the sheet is really solid lmao. Accepted! Bring Fuse on board. It's not directly mentioned, but I suppose he's going to be apart of the Redline Guardians, correct? If so, no complaints here lol

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Aight Crus, apologies for the wait, but Luna is accepted!...Unsurprisingly, I mean ya personally worked with me for like 3/4ths of this sheet xD
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I honestly don't have a ton to say here, which is a good thing, cuz it means the sheet is really solid lmao. Accepted! Bring Fuse on board. It's not directly mentioned, but I suppose he's going to be apart of the Redline Guardians, correct? If so, no complaints here lol


Yes he will be apart of the Guardians, the boy has been moved over. ^-^
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Alright, I'm finally running through and reviewing the stragglers to get this started. Not much to say about Alman here, except, uh...Isn't this just his original power? Y'know, the one we had ya change? xD. Point is, though, firing several hundred-feet spanning heat beams of death is a tad extreme. If what we came up with last time isn't to your liking anymore, we can figure something else out, but this one can't run as-is.

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This looks promising, but let's touch base on a few things; firstly, backstory. The main thing that strikes me as odd is how, er....Emotional his spiders come off as? That was my best way of describing it, but my point being this. End of the day, they're still spiders, so beyond being piloted by his intents (which is what some of this could be viewed as, but it's put forth in a kinda odd way), they're still very simplistic creatures. As for his power, the ability-copying needs to last for a far shorter frame; I'd say at most is perhaps 10 minutes, to prevent him from simply having access to a massive collection of powers of his choosing that can last him for potentially a whole hour lol. Oh, and also, how exactly do these 'power transfusions' work when it comes to giving him multiple Parahuman abilities at once, or when (theoretically, given this is not dismissed in the Power section itself) granted to other Parahumans? Does it simply not work? Or does he gain those multiple powers, perhaps at some cost, like the duration, potency, or control of said abilities? Some things to think on that I'd like to see handled before I fully accept him, but overall, it's lookin' good. :)

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I honestly don't have a ton to say here, which is a good thing, cuz it means the sheet is really solid lmao. Accepted! Bring Fuse on board. It's not directly mentioned, but I suppose he's going to be apart of the Redline Guardians, correct? If so, no complaints here lol

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Aight Crus, apologies for the wait, but Luna is accepted!...Unsurprisingly, I mean ya personally worked with me for like 3/4ths of this sheet xD


Oh I see. I'll just use the old one then XD
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This rp is still continuing? Going to have to switch to a different idea now.
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Unfortunately, the RP is full at this time. It is why we encouraged everyone early on to get their profiles in so we had time to look over everything and approve or work with the creators to balance out powers and any other problems within the profiles before the start. If I remember correctly, we provided suggestions and even multiple people who were already approved tried to help with your profile. When we did not hear back from you, we all assumed that you had given up interest and provided others with the reserved slot.
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Thats lame. This went silent for 20 days straight. I thought this died. And no one said anything at all till now. Only one person gave help and that was it.
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The honest truth of the matter is that you never asked if this was dead or not, you assumed and slots got filled. I know more than one gave advice. We offered to help and you didn’t seem open to any of the GM suggestions. I believe Destiny was working with you the most but as I recall, she said you ghosted her or never replied back. It was why we thought you had decided not to give interest. It can’t all be on us because as you just said, you had 20 days to ask or complete/submit a new profile. I’m not trying to be rude but we aren’t mind readers and with a huge cast, we were bound to cut off applications at some point.
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Apologies, I guess someone else asked for Destiny help.

Either way, again, you also had 20 days to ask and work on this. You can ask Mintz if they are willing to open up another slot but I know they have been nervous about the amount we already have.
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Destiny? Who? What message did she send in the first place? I never got any notification in my PMs or anything. Not even an invite to teh discord. I didn't ghost anyone. The last PM was from 12 months ago in my rpguild inbox. As far as I know, only one person gave advice and that was he copying what the GM had said.
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Maybe read my second message. I just apologized for the confusion.

Again, ask Mintz if he is willing to add another slot but being sassy with me isn’t really helping you here.

I know it sucks to miss out because of assumptions but that is the chance that gets taken if you don’t ask. We don’t give out the discord link until approved because we don’t want to have messages or important questions missed about profiles and having to do group DMs.
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This looks promising, but let's touch base on a few things; firstly, backstory. The main thing that strikes me as odd is how, er....Emotional his spiders come off as? That was my best way of describing it, but my point being this. End of the day, they're still spiders, so beyond being piloted by his intents (which is what some of this could be viewed as, but it's put forth in a kinda odd way), they're still very simplistic creatures. As for his power, the ability-copying needs to last for a far shorter frame; I'd say at most is perhaps 10 minutes, to prevent him from simply having access to a massive collection of powers of his choosing that can last him for potentially a whole hour lol. Oh, and also, how exactly do these 'power transfusions' work when it comes to giving him multiple Parahuman abilities at once, or when (theoretically, given this is not dismissed in the Power section itself) granted to other Parahumans? Does it simply not work? Or does he gain those multiple powers, perhaps at some cost, like the duration, potency, or control of said abilities? Some things to think on that I'd like to see handled before I fully accept him, but overall, it's lookin' good. :)


Ah. Uh, so I most definitely appreciate the feedback, those are all legitimate concerns to have and I agree they're in need of fixing when brought to light like that. That said, some stuff has changed since I last updated the sheet. I honestly thought this rp was dead, so Webber's been submitted to a different rp. Due to a personal rule about one rp per character - last time I didn't follow it, I got some stuff mixed up - I'll need to withdraw his app and possibly start over on a new character. Given some other changes in my life circumstances, I'm not certain how plausible this will be. I'll try, but certainly don't wait on my behalf is all I'm saying.

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Hi there, I know that you guys are already full and all. I’m just now seeing this thread and I just wanted to say that I really enjoy the layout as well as how you two are running this rp so far. I’m not sure if you planned on having new people fill in empty spots incase someone were to drop but I’d love to be apart of what you have going on here. If not I understand completely and will watch from the sidelines.

Thanks in advance!
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Hi there, I know that you guys are already full and all. I’m just now seeing this thread and I just wanted to say that I really enjoy the layout as well as how you two are running this rp so far. I’m not sure if you planned on having new people fill in empty spots incase someone were to drop but I’d love to be apart of what you have going on here. If not I understand completely and will watch from the sidelines.

Thanks in advance!


Hello! Given RBY's predicament spoken of above, I think we'd be more than happy with a potential addition to the roster, if you'd like to come up with something. If you need help, feel free to ask anyone around, though I'm typically always around :3

In general the forum is closed, but I'm willing to make an exception when someone shows this much interest and asks so politely lol
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