Perhaps in addition to the foreign regiments, the planet is also where a lot of refugees have ended up which also feeds into the local discontent.
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Sorry, I dozed off lol. So maybe a place that was settled thousands of years ago. Major hive cities grew from the industry driven by it's mineral wealth. However now that the planet and it's neighboring world's have been depleted, there's nothing backing it so it has started to fall into decay. Many of the noble houses have pulled out. Much of the population has stagnated into poverty, even by Imperial standards which is already very low. The only reason why it is even on a map is because of a large space station in orbit which is used as a refueling and resupply point for starships. But overall the station itself has more strategic value than the planet itself.
I really do think that at its heart, 40k is a horror story on so many levels.
I really do think that at its heart, 40k is a horror story on so many levels.
I'm open to any ideas. I posted this more as a sample of how I like to write, rather than an actual story.
One or my story ideas was for my sister's and a naval security team exploring a space hulk
See the new kill team that came out?
It's such a rich environment with so much room for creativity.
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The following is a sample opening for a story I've been developing. Not necessarily the finished product. The story is intended to be dark and visceral. Warhammer 40,000 is the source material.
"Mankind must suffer so that mankind can survive..." In a cruel galaxy constantly besieged by the alien, the mutant, and the forces of the dark powers, the Imperium of man stood defiantly for millennia. It was an existence of endless war. The year 999 M41, was no different. On the hive world of Gelt in the Cadian sector, the massive spires of the hive cities and cathedrals of the Ecclesiarchy stood proudly as a testament to the enduring might of the Imperium. Noble houses ruled over the masses of the gargantuan cities which stretched high into the clouds, governing the daily lives of all those who resided within as the toiled for the glory of the God Emperor of Mankind. It was for His glory that they all lived to serve... Or so it was thought. Desire and temptation are insidious enemies. For the lowliest of the low, the promise of a better life can be as sweet as the finest wines of the Imperial court. For the wealthiest of nobles, the allure of power and prestige can be as intoxicating as the finest perfume. For both, they lead to heresy and damnation.
Smoke billowed up from the base of the hive city as the first explosions rocked the titanic structures. Sirens and alarms sounded as people screamed and trampled over each other in confusion. Vox casters blared out instructions from the local authorities as they tried to reestablish order. Jets roared overhead as aircraft swarmed in an attempt to put out the fires that had broken out in what was a warehouse sector in the outer ring of the lower spire, which threatened to spread into the neighboring hab sectors where many of the workers and their families lived. The first flight of aircraft began to approach from up wind, ready to drop their payload of water over the sight when a rail of white smoke erupted from down below. The trail curved and spiraled toward the lead aircraft. Confused, the pilot banked hard to the right but it was too late. The missile slammed into the cockpit and detonated instantly incinerating the crew. The remaining fireball and wreckage came crashing down into the blaze below as the remaining aircraft began to scatter. More streams of white smoke began to erupt from various alleyways and rooftops, snaking their way towards the emergency craft. It was the beginning of the end for the world of Gelt.
Near the top of one of the spires, Sister Athene stood on the landing pad and looked down at the chaos below. Her blue eyes scanned the damage and the smaller explosions taking place. Communications throughout the city had been disrupted. How and by whom had yet to be determined. As a precaution she and her sisters had been mobilized to defend the spire upon which the Cathedral was. There was a loud roar, and her white hair fluttered as the shuttle that had delivered Athene and her squad took off to make room for the next craft. She glanced back at her sisters, all clad in black ceramite powered armor. "Remove the peace bonds from your weapons," she commanded. Athene looked to one of them, a tall woman with fiery red hair and piercing green eyes. "Sister Caroline!" Athene called out over the sound of jets. "Take up an overwatch position on the upper platform of the control tower!" The woman nodded. "Yes Sister Superior!" she replied. Athene motioned to the other members of her squad to establish a perimeter around the landing platform as they waited for more forces to arrive. Athene's cool collected demeanor hid the turmoil that she felt within. Was this an accident? Or was this attack? There had been unconfirmed reports of missile fire. If it was an attach then by whom and what was their objective? Athene pushed the thoughts aside. There was time enough for analysis. Right now, she and her sisters needed to establish a beach head.
"Mankind must suffer so that mankind can survive..." In a cruel galaxy constantly besieged by the alien, the mutant, and the forces of the dark powers, the Imperium of man stood defiantly for millennia. It was an existence of endless war. The year 999 M41, was no different. On the hive world of Gelt in the Cadian sector, the massive spires of the hive cities and cathedrals of the Ecclesiarchy stood proudly as a testament to the enduring might of the Imperium. Noble houses ruled over the masses of the gargantuan cities which stretched high into the clouds, governing the daily lives of all those who resided within as the toiled for the glory of the God Emperor of Mankind. It was for His glory that they all lived to serve... Or so it was thought. Desire and temptation are insidious enemies. For the lowliest of the low, the promise of a better life can be as sweet as the finest wines of the Imperial court. For the wealthiest of nobles, the allure of power and prestige can be as intoxicating as the finest perfume. For both, they lead to heresy and damnation.
Smoke billowed up from the base of the hive city as the first explosions rocked the titanic structures. Sirens and alarms sounded as people screamed and trampled over each other in confusion. Vox casters blared out instructions from the local authorities as they tried to reestablish order. Jets roared overhead as aircraft swarmed in an attempt to put out the fires that had broken out in what was a warehouse sector in the outer ring of the lower spire, which threatened to spread into the neighboring hab sectors where many of the workers and their families lived. The first flight of aircraft began to approach from up wind, ready to drop their payload of water over the sight when a rail of white smoke erupted from down below. The trail curved and spiraled toward the lead aircraft. Confused, the pilot banked hard to the right but it was too late. The missile slammed into the cockpit and detonated instantly incinerating the crew. The remaining fireball and wreckage came crashing down into the blaze below as the remaining aircraft began to scatter. More streams of white smoke began to erupt from various alleyways and rooftops, snaking their way towards the emergency craft. It was the beginning of the end for the world of Gelt.
Near the top of one of the spires, Sister Athene stood on the landing pad and looked down at the chaos below. Her blue eyes scanned the damage and the smaller explosions taking place. Communications throughout the city had been disrupted. How and by whom had yet to be determined. As a precaution she and her sisters had been mobilized to defend the spire upon which the Cathedral was. There was a loud roar, and her white hair fluttered as the shuttle that had delivered Athene and her squad took off to make room for the next craft. She glanced back at her sisters, all clad in black ceramite powered armor. "Remove the peace bonds from your weapons," she commanded. Athene looked to one of them, a tall woman with fiery red hair and piercing green eyes. "Sister Caroline!" Athene called out over the sound of jets. "Take up an overwatch position on the upper platform of the control tower!" The woman nodded. "Yes Sister Superior!" she replied. Athene motioned to the other members of her squad to establish a perimeter around the landing platform as they waited for more forces to arrive. Athene's cool collected demeanor hid the turmoil that she felt within. Was this an accident? Or was this attack? There had been unconfirmed reports of missile fire. If it was an attach then by whom and what was their objective? Athene pushed the thoughts aside. There was time enough for analysis. Right now, she and her sisters needed to establish a beach head.
Big update to the character sheet
Intro
"An orphan fighting for the very survival of humanity"
Basic Info
Name: Athene
Gender: Female
Played by: akula2ssn
Race: Human
Deity: Emperor of Mankind
Age: 28
Body Type: fit
Height: 5'6"
Weight: 130
Complexion: fair
Hair: white (originally dark brown)
Eyes: blue
Handedness: right
Scars: left cheek, right thigh, back
Relationship Status: Single
Personality: While a fierce zealot of her faith, Athene is very calm and collected, and very much a team builder, qualities that are often attributed to the martial discipline of being a Cadian.
General
Athena is fit as a front line soldier should be. Her hair cut into a bob just off the shoulders and naturally is dark brown but is colored in the traditional white of the Adepta Sororitas. She wears black powered armor adorned with the fleur de lis and crimson livery. Tattooed in red on her right cheek is the fleur de lis.
Athena is level headed with a sharp analytical mind. As a bit of a free thinker, Athena has often found herself at odds with her superiors within the Adepta Sororitas.
Wargear
Sororitas Power Armor: A lighter version of the powered armor worn by the genetically altered, Adeptus Astartes, the Sororitas Power Armor provides protection against physical threats as well as increased strength.
Godwyn-De'az Pattern Bolter: A smaller variant of the Astartes bolter, the Godwyn-De'az was designed for use by regular humans. In addition to firing .75 cal explosive kinetic rounds, the weapon also features an attachment for a bayonet type weapon called a Sarissa.
Power Sword: A gift for her service to the Ordo Hereticus of the Inquisition.
Squad
Sister Caroline: Athene's second in command. Spirited and gruff, Caroline has been a good counterweight to Athene's often level headed and somber personality. Sister Caroline is also a Sister Retributor, specializing in the use of heavy weapons. Athene and Caroline have had a long history together going back to their days in the Schola Progenia.
Sister Rena:
Not a member of the orders militant, Sister Rena is a member of the orders hospitaller and has served as the squad's medicae for the past year. Soft spoken and timid, it is easy to mistake her slight form as weak. Rena has served along side Athene's squad in numerous campaigns and is largely considered by all to be a part of the squad.
Sister Amelia: Jovial and free spirited, Amelia has often been verbally reprimanded by Athene. Despite this, Amelia is considered one of Athene's finest warriors.
Sister Irene: Irene is the newest member of the squad. A competent fighter, Irene has yet to find her place within the team.
Sister Cassandra: Cassandra is a Sister Dominion, specializing in assault weapons. She often prefers to carry a stormbolter into battle. Cassandra is very hot tempered and zealous in battle.
Sister Ilea: Sister Ilea, is holds a special position within the squad. Her body bares the scars, not just of battle, but of the flagellation she endured as a Repentia. The nature of the infraction which led her to join the ranks of the penitent is known only to Athene and Caroline, and the two have strongly discouraged the curiosity of the other sisters. The fact that Ilea had joined the Repentia, and found redemption before death spoke enough as to her character and faith and should serve as an example to the others.
Sister Eva: Sister Eva is by all accounts, the most pious of the squad. During hymnals, her voice is often described as that of an angel proclaiming the beneficence of the God Emperor. Her knowledge of scripture is unrivalled and her faith unquestioned. She often leads her sisters in prayer, and has been granted the special honor of being designated to carry the Simulacrum Imperialis whenever the presence of such a relic graces the squad.
Sister Jocelyn:
Sister Clarice: Sister Clarice is the only member of the squad who was born and grew up on Holy Terra and led a largely sheltered life in regards to the threats that face humanity throughout the galaxy compared to her sisters. Despite this, she has proven to be a capable warrior, and has more than earned the respect of Athene and Caroline.
Sister Nadia: Sister Nadia spent most of her childhood on the ice world of Valhalla. Her parents were officers in the Imperial Guard who were killed defending the planet from an ork invasion.
Sister Lydia: Sister Lydia is a Mordian, and one of the remaining original members of Athene's squad. She is fiercely loyal to her superior and has helped shoulder the burden of many campaigns.
Sister Mjoll: Mjoll is the squad's close combat specialist. She was born on the death world of Fenris.
Sister Serana: Sister Serana was born on the planet of Baal, the home world of the Blood Angels. Her parents were serfs in the service of the Blood Angels. Both were killed during the Tyranid invasion that decimated the planet.
Sister Rayya: Sister Rayya grew up in the lower tiers of the hives of Necromunda. Where it not for the bounty hunter, Kal Jerico, she likely would have grown up to be one of the many faceless gangers who's lives would be cut short in the endless violence of the underhive wars.
Sister Njada:
Biography
Athene was born on the planet Cadia. Her father sergeant in the Kasrkins, while her mother was a sister dialogus of the Order of the Holy Word. At the age of 6, her parents were killed during a raid by a Chaos warband on the garrison where they were residing. Her parents hid her just as the traitors began to overrun the garrison. Athene witnessed the horrors inflicted upon her parents before re-enforcements arrived. The Cadian forces found the traumatized little girl, unable to speak. Given the highly martial culture of Cadian society, Athene was looked upon by many as weak and unfit within regimented confines of Cadian society. Chastised and shunned, she would have been abandoned on the streets of the fortress world, were it not for a Ministorum priest who had led the surviving troops in the defense of the garrison.
Drill Abbot Steuben a harsh and fearsome man of the cloth. It is said that the only thing that the men and women of the Astra Militarum regiments of Cadia feared more more than the Commissars, was Drill Abbot Steuben himself. The man wielded the threat of eternal damnation as a Commissar wielded summary execution. For all his martial prowess, Drill Abbot Steuben was first and foremost a man of faith. When he saw the child, Athene, Steuben did not see weakness. He saw strength and faith that had been tested to its limit. In Steuben's eyes, this meant that the child was ready to grow in both with the proper guidance. Steuben took Athene with him to the Schola Progenium on Ophelia VII. It was there that Steuben tempered the young Athene and forged her into an strong young woman. Once she was of age, Steuben introduced Athene to Drill Abbess Diana. It was Diana who selected Athene as a candidate to become a novitiate of the Adepta Sororitas.
Athene was not alone when she was transferred to the charge of Drill Abbess Diana. During her years under Steuben's tutelage, Athene met another young orphan by the name of Caroline. Like Athene, Caroline was orphaned on Cadia. Both her parents where soldiers of the Imperial Guard. The two became close while being raised under Steuben, and both would spent their time as novitiates together both in prayer and on the battlefield.
It didn't take Athene and Caroline long before they were fully initiated into the ranks of the battle sisters under the Order of Our Martyred Lady. Athena is a veteran of a number of campaigns in and around the Cadian Gate, attaining the rank of Sister Superior. While Athene has fought many of the various types of threats to the Imperium, she has seen the most action against the forces of the Ruinous Powers. As a result she has often crossed paths with members of the Ordo Hereticus of the Inquisition.
During the outbreak of the 13th Black Crusade, Athene found herself fighting for the very survival of the world of her birth. Athena faced the combined forces of Chaos under the Arch Heratic along side her sister, Cadians in the Astra Militarum, Adeptus Astartes of the Black Templar, and forces of the Adeptus Mechanicus and Inquisition. However, in the end Athena could only watch helplessly from the evacuation fleet as the planet of her birth, the fortress world of Cadia was consumed by the warp.
In recent years, Athene has found herself repeatedly working with Inquisitor Mathias Chang of the Ordo Hereticus. The first two crossed paths in the Calixis sector while Mathias was investigating hints of a possible cult of pleasure among the noble houses. Athene had been tracking down the location of a relic stolen from the Cathedral of Illumination of Hive Tarsus. Neither were aware of the other's operation. While Mathias tried to infiltrate the hidden temple of the cult, he was caught and was embroiled in a fight for his life with the cult's enforcers. Out of ammunition, Mathias was forced into melee combat. After taking a blow to the head, Mathias lay dazed and disoriented on the stone floor as the enforcer was about to deliver a killing blow when the stone wall to the temple was blown inward by a round from the battle cannon of a castigator tank. Athene, and her sisters stormed the temple. As she began to check the bodies that lay on the floor before continuing to sweep the temple, Athene noticed the rosette around Mathias's neck and helped him up. Since that day, Athene and Mathias often worked side by side whenever the interest of the Ordos and the Ecclesiarchy crossed. The two have developed a mutual respect for each other on both a professional and personal level. The two have often called upon each other for assistance with their endeavors in the name of the Emperor and the Imperium.
"An orphan fighting for the very survival of humanity"
Basic Info
Name: Athene
Gender: Female
Played by: akula2ssn
Race: Human
Deity: Emperor of Mankind
Age: 28
Body Type: fit
Height: 5'6"
Weight: 130
Complexion: fair
Hair: white (originally dark brown)
Eyes: blue
Handedness: right
Scars: left cheek, right thigh, back
Relationship Status: Single
Personality: While a fierce zealot of her faith, Athene is very calm and collected, and very much a team builder, qualities that are often attributed to the martial discipline of being a Cadian.
General
Athena is fit as a front line soldier should be. Her hair cut into a bob just off the shoulders and naturally is dark brown but is colored in the traditional white of the Adepta Sororitas. She wears black powered armor adorned with the fleur de lis and crimson livery. Tattooed in red on her right cheek is the fleur de lis.
Athena is level headed with a sharp analytical mind. As a bit of a free thinker, Athena has often found herself at odds with her superiors within the Adepta Sororitas.
Wargear
Sororitas Power Armor: A lighter version of the powered armor worn by the genetically altered, Adeptus Astartes, the Sororitas Power Armor provides protection against physical threats as well as increased strength.
Godwyn-De'az Pattern Bolter: A smaller variant of the Astartes bolter, the Godwyn-De'az was designed for use by regular humans. In addition to firing .75 cal explosive kinetic rounds, the weapon also features an attachment for a bayonet type weapon called a Sarissa.
Power Sword: A gift for her service to the Ordo Hereticus of the Inquisition.
Squad
Sister Caroline: Athene's second in command. Spirited and gruff, Caroline has been a good counterweight to Athene's often level headed and somber personality. Sister Caroline is also a Sister Retributor, specializing in the use of heavy weapons. Athene and Caroline have had a long history together going back to their days in the Schola Progenia.
Sister Rena:
Not a member of the orders militant, Sister Rena is a member of the orders hospitaller and has served as the squad's medicae for the past year. Soft spoken and timid, it is easy to mistake her slight form as weak. Rena has served along side Athene's squad in numerous campaigns and is largely considered by all to be a part of the squad.
Sister Amelia: Jovial and free spirited, Amelia has often been verbally reprimanded by Athene. Despite this, Amelia is considered one of Athene's finest warriors.
Sister Irene: Irene is the newest member of the squad. A competent fighter, Irene has yet to find her place within the team.
Sister Cassandra: Cassandra is a Sister Dominion, specializing in assault weapons. She often prefers to carry a stormbolter into battle. Cassandra is very hot tempered and zealous in battle.
Sister Ilea: Sister Ilea, is holds a special position within the squad. Her body bares the scars, not just of battle, but of the flagellation she endured as a Repentia. The nature of the infraction which led her to join the ranks of the penitent is known only to Athene and Caroline, and the two have strongly discouraged the curiosity of the other sisters. The fact that Ilea had joined the Repentia, and found redemption before death spoke enough as to her character and faith and should serve as an example to the others.
Sister Eva: Sister Eva is by all accounts, the most pious of the squad. During hymnals, her voice is often described as that of an angel proclaiming the beneficence of the God Emperor. Her knowledge of scripture is unrivalled and her faith unquestioned. She often leads her sisters in prayer, and has been granted the special honor of being designated to carry the Simulacrum Imperialis whenever the presence of such a relic graces the squad.
Sister Jocelyn:
Sister Clarice: Sister Clarice is the only member of the squad who was born and grew up on Holy Terra and led a largely sheltered life in regards to the threats that face humanity throughout the galaxy compared to her sisters. Despite this, she has proven to be a capable warrior, and has more than earned the respect of Athene and Caroline.
Sister Nadia: Sister Nadia spent most of her childhood on the ice world of Valhalla. Her parents were officers in the Imperial Guard who were killed defending the planet from an ork invasion.
Sister Lydia: Sister Lydia is a Mordian, and one of the remaining original members of Athene's squad. She is fiercely loyal to her superior and has helped shoulder the burden of many campaigns.
Sister Mjoll: Mjoll is the squad's close combat specialist. She was born on the death world of Fenris.
Sister Serana: Sister Serana was born on the planet of Baal, the home world of the Blood Angels. Her parents were serfs in the service of the Blood Angels. Both were killed during the Tyranid invasion that decimated the planet.
Sister Rayya: Sister Rayya grew up in the lower tiers of the hives of Necromunda. Where it not for the bounty hunter, Kal Jerico, she likely would have grown up to be one of the many faceless gangers who's lives would be cut short in the endless violence of the underhive wars.
Sister Njada:
Biography
Athene was born on the planet Cadia. Her father sergeant in the Kasrkins, while her mother was a sister dialogus of the Order of the Holy Word. At the age of 6, her parents were killed during a raid by a Chaos warband on the garrison where they were residing. Her parents hid her just as the traitors began to overrun the garrison. Athene witnessed the horrors inflicted upon her parents before re-enforcements arrived. The Cadian forces found the traumatized little girl, unable to speak. Given the highly martial culture of Cadian society, Athene was looked upon by many as weak and unfit within regimented confines of Cadian society. Chastised and shunned, she would have been abandoned on the streets of the fortress world, were it not for a Ministorum priest who had led the surviving troops in the defense of the garrison.
Drill Abbot Steuben a harsh and fearsome man of the cloth. It is said that the only thing that the men and women of the Astra Militarum regiments of Cadia feared more more than the Commissars, was Drill Abbot Steuben himself. The man wielded the threat of eternal damnation as a Commissar wielded summary execution. For all his martial prowess, Drill Abbot Steuben was first and foremost a man of faith. When he saw the child, Athene, Steuben did not see weakness. He saw strength and faith that had been tested to its limit. In Steuben's eyes, this meant that the child was ready to grow in both with the proper guidance. Steuben took Athene with him to the Schola Progenium on Ophelia VII. It was there that Steuben tempered the young Athene and forged her into an strong young woman. Once she was of age, Steuben introduced Athene to Drill Abbess Diana. It was Diana who selected Athene as a candidate to become a novitiate of the Adepta Sororitas.
Athene was not alone when she was transferred to the charge of Drill Abbess Diana. During her years under Steuben's tutelage, Athene met another young orphan by the name of Caroline. Like Athene, Caroline was orphaned on Cadia. Both her parents where soldiers of the Imperial Guard. The two became close while being raised under Steuben, and both would spent their time as novitiates together both in prayer and on the battlefield.
It didn't take Athene and Caroline long before they were fully initiated into the ranks of the battle sisters under the Order of Our Martyred Lady. Athena is a veteran of a number of campaigns in and around the Cadian Gate, attaining the rank of Sister Superior. While Athene has fought many of the various types of threats to the Imperium, she has seen the most action against the forces of the Ruinous Powers. As a result she has often crossed paths with members of the Ordo Hereticus of the Inquisition.
During the outbreak of the 13th Black Crusade, Athene found herself fighting for the very survival of the world of her birth. Athena faced the combined forces of Chaos under the Arch Heratic along side her sister, Cadians in the Astra Militarum, Adeptus Astartes of the Black Templar, and forces of the Adeptus Mechanicus and Inquisition. However, in the end Athena could only watch helplessly from the evacuation fleet as the planet of her birth, the fortress world of Cadia was consumed by the warp.
In recent years, Athene has found herself repeatedly working with Inquisitor Mathias Chang of the Ordo Hereticus. The first two crossed paths in the Calixis sector while Mathias was investigating hints of a possible cult of pleasure among the noble houses. Athene had been tracking down the location of a relic stolen from the Cathedral of Illumination of Hive Tarsus. Neither were aware of the other's operation. While Mathias tried to infiltrate the hidden temple of the cult, he was caught and was embroiled in a fight for his life with the cult's enforcers. Out of ammunition, Mathias was forced into melee combat. After taking a blow to the head, Mathias lay dazed and disoriented on the stone floor as the enforcer was about to deliver a killing blow when the stone wall to the temple was blown inward by a round from the battle cannon of a castigator tank. Athene, and her sisters stormed the temple. As she began to check the bodies that lay on the floor before continuing to sweep the temple, Athene noticed the rosette around Mathias's neck and helped him up. Since that day, Athene and Mathias often worked side by side whenever the interest of the Ordos and the Ecclesiarchy crossed. The two have developed a mutual respect for each other on both a professional and personal level. The two have often called upon each other for assistance with their endeavors in the name of the Emperor and the Imperium.
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