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Ah, apparently I made my edits to a previous draft. These are the fun things they don’t tell you about when you need to do all your writing on a phone. 😐
With requested modifications! After your final approval I’ll add him to the Characters tab. Meanwhile I’ll catch up on IC posts.
Great news! Thanks for the feedback.

I’d thought brass knuckles had more of a history, but a quick google tells me they’re far more modern then I imagined. I’ll make a few adjustments, in particular Hoekstra’s affiliation with the Dusthawks. Also, I’d added the bit about a Sparkboat specifically with the Steelbrow in mind, and so if The Wyrm is onboard, it’ll be a nice built in familiarity between Hoekstra and Sabina.

I’ll have some updates done tomorrow - alas, it’s gotten late in my time zone.
Hello! My friend The Wyrm pointed me in your direction. I’m not sure if you’ve still got any openings but if so I’d love to join. Here’s an initial draft of a character; I thought this band of rogues could use a proper criminal element!

The Beirhaus was ready for a busy Friday and the staff was grateful for the rush. Their job was good when their boss was happy and nothing cheered him up like a busy drinking hall. Delicious scents wafted enthusiastically from the kitchen, inspiring more food orders. Business was good, but for once Georg’s mood didn’t rise to match. He wasn’t foul by any means, but those who knew him knew something was wrong. At the taps he was smiles and quips in French and German, but in the kitchen he had his head down and didn’t speak to the staff in his usual encouraging way. When he went down to the cellar to bring up new casks, Veronique popped in after him.

“You don’t seem yourself, Georg,” she said from the second step to the bottom. “Is everything all right? Did you get bad news from your cousin?”

The older man looked up at her from the kegs he was shifting. He had hired Veronique because she could speak unaccented German, and also fit the ‘official’ standard of beauty for so many of his German customers. She was beautiful but approachable, with a mousey nose and round face framed by appropriately long sandy blonde hair. Unlike so many of the waifish French women in Vichy, she was fit and more strongly built. If Georg was to be honest with himself, which he wasn’t when it came to women, Veronique reminded him of a younger version of his wife, who in turn reminded him of the farm girls he’d known in Westphalia as a youth.

“There are a number of new faces tonight,” he said to dodge the question. “Are there any... strange customers tonight?”

Veronique responded in the negative at first, then described an Italian woman speaking with some young men. German’s didn’t have a good ear for Italian, but the French did and the woman didn’t sound like the one described by his cousin. Georg thanked her, managing a smile, then set to bringing a cask up to the taps
Huzzah!
There it is! Sorry for holding us up!
“Sergeant Volker, what an unethspected pleasure!” The Tilean said in his usual precipitatious way. Meinhardt couldn’t help but give him a wry smile in turn.

“It appears both of us are fools who don’t know when to get out of the game, Severo,” said the Middenlander with arms spread.

Meinhardt made his mark on the paperwork with the quick efficiency of experience. The excitement of a coming campaign was all ready starting to fill him, though he didn’t really expect any action. It seemed he was never so at ease as when he was camping on cold earth or marching over harsh ground. What does that say about me? wondered Meinhardt inwardly, before pushing the thought away. He’d spend the rest of the evening with an ale in his hand, maybe try to get the Breton lad drunk as a Marienburg sailor, to see how well he could ride hungover in the morning. Then they would put boots to road for the guild and maybe pretend to be heroes for a while. Meinhardt headed for a refill.
Hey team, sorry I’ve been so late with a post, just started a new job. I’ll try to get one out tonight or tomorrow!
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