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Well, I've seen what you're thinking and I think the character could be fun.

They are a bit too powerful for a genin and would like to remind you that you don't have to list academy jutsu (it's assumed you know them unless otherwise stated). Gentle Fist is itself, for example, something to list as a jutsu and you seem to have skipped sixteen palms and gone straight to the 32 and 64 palms. If you wanted Gentle Fist, Sixteen Palms, and your medical jutsu, I'd approve. You can build up more later, especially since you're sort of branching between two skill-sets.

Byakugan is not a guaranteed ability among the Hyuuga, it isn't unimaginable that some access the abilities of it a bit later than others. I'm not sure it would necessitate intense training. Generally, the Hyuuga have sort of focused their attention on the child with the greatest potential (see Hinata and Hanabi). Being heir is not guaranteed.

As I mentioned in the PM, Seiji Hyuuga was head of Clan until he abdicated upon becoming the Hokage. If your character's father was Seiji's younger brother or something like that, we could change potential succession lines, if it's a big part of your character, or even have the line of succession up for grabs between them. Could be interesting.

How Branch and Main House are picked in the manga is... rather nebulous, but your younger sibling isn't necessarily Branch House or only the heir would ever be Main House. I think Hizashi was chosen as Branch specifically because they were twins, not because Hizashi wasn't heir. For reference, Hanabi also wasn't made Branch (and neither was Hinata) despite both having been declared heir at various points. It's a little silly.

I'd suggest adding a basic medical kit to your list of supplies so's you can practice field medicine, if need be, give you a bit more versatility there.

Alright! Those are my notes, as of now! May come up with more later.

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✖ ‖ N a m e
Hiro Hyuuga

✖ ‖ A g e / B i r t h d a y
12 / December 14

✖ ‖ G e n d e r
Male

✖ ‖ B o d y T y p e
Thin

✖ ‖ V i l l a g e
Konoha

✖ ‖ C l a n
Hyuuga: One of the four noble clans of Konohagakure, as well as the strongest clan in the village. All members born into this clan possess the Byakugan, a kekkei genkai that gives them extended fields of vision and the ability to see through solid objects and even the chakra circulatory system, amongst other things. Members of this clan also possess an innate ability which allows them to expel chakra from any of the tenketsu in their body.

✖ ‖ F a m i l y
Father: Seiji Hyuuga
Mother: Haruka Hyuuga
Siblings: n/a
Others:

✖ ‖ R a n k
Genin

✖ ‖ S p e c i a l S t a t u s
Heir to the Hyuuga

✖ ‖ T i t l e s / N i c k n a m e s
Son of the White Eye Tiger

✖ ‖ P e r s o n a l i t y
"The leaves change and, in the autumn, fall. So it is year after year, but the change is just a color, the sun, and the wind..."

The prodigy heir to the Hyuuga, Hiro is cold and aristocratic. While a very competent leader and strategist, he appears to disregard others almost completely. His skill with the gentlefist is well known. He's adept at playing politics and, while saying little and being ever polite, is used to placing others in poor positions. To most, he can seem ruthless in pursuit of his goals, but he holds himself to the highest of standards. He has a cool head, solid judgement, and determination that have seen him consistently at the top of his class. He has never been defeated by a peer nor would he ever deign to spend effort to defeat them, if they were to challenge him.

Underneath this cold exterior, Hiro tends to be fatalistic, self-questioning, and lonely. He feels the utmost responsibility to be a shining example of the Hyuuga and the Leaf that borders on crushing and his single-minded devotion to the ideal set forth by his father dominates his existence. Hiro does not know if there is a Hiro beyond his responsibility.

✖ ‖ L i k e s
- Cold soba "Some prefer hot soba, but it ruins the buckwheat."
- Plum blossoms "The plum blossoms into a flower that is surprising and fragrant. Like the plum, they can stand a grain of salt."
- Poetry "A single misplaced word is like a single misplaced strike: Fatal."
- Cool days "Wind brings with it many things."
- Shogi "I don't play Shogi."

✖ ‖ D i s l i k e s
- People who do not know their place.
- Being so weak as to need to expend effort.
- Dreaming.
- Naps.
- Fatty food.

✖ ‖ N i n d o
"The way is effortless."

✖ ‖ B i o g r a p h y
Born to the head of the Hyuuga Clan who would later abdicate the position to become the Hokage, Hiro grew up immersed in the political life and culture of his Clan and the village as a whole. Seiji Hyuuga was a powerful and respected shinobi and, while he never spoke to his son of his own accomplishments, Hiro was informed of them by others and was quietly proud of his father in a way that seemed fitting. But Seiji was a busy man and Hiro spent most of his time with his mother Haruka who taught him much about his culture and people.

During his time at the Shinobi Acaedemy, he kept himself separate from the other children, saying little and keeping his own council. Regardless of his solitary nature, his high scores and cool demeanor made him popular despite himself. As he got closer to graduation, he had developed a reputation for being aloof but those that found themselves in ill-favor with him also found themselves snubbed. It was rare to see him struggle with anything from written tests to field tests to combat tests. When asked about his work load, regardless of how great it might have been, his constant reply was "It is only a small matter" and would say no more about it.

Throughout his school career, he would occasionally visit his father in his office to tell him his progress. What was typical was that his father would listen and make a small comment at the end, neither praising nor condemning him and Hiro would lie in bed wondering about it. But Hiro's life was quiet and well guarded. His shinobi career would be reflect what he was: The son of Seiji the White Eyed Tiger, the heir to the Hyuuga, the boy for whom everything must come without effort.

✖ ‖ K e k k e i G e n k a i

✖ ‖ N a t u r e s
Wind/Water

✖ ‖ T a l e n t s
-Composing poems
-Shogi
-Fishing and cooking fish
-Making noodles and buns
-Taijutsu
-Iaijutsu

✖ ‖ J u t s u
-Gentle Fist: The Gentle Fist (柔拳, Jūken) is a form of hand-to-hand combat used by members of the Hyūga clan. It inflicts internal damage through attacking the body's Chakra Pathway System, subsequently injuring organs which are closely intertwined with the area of the network which has been struck. To do this, the user surgically injects a certain amount of their own chakra into the opponent's chakra pathway system, causing damage to surrounding organs due to their proximity to the chakra circulatory system. Even the slightest tap can cause severe internal damage, hence the name "gentle" fist. Hiro's mastery of the skill is exceptional for his age and he enjoys ending fights against peers without using more than a single hand (sometimes with a single blow), considering anything else beneath him.

-Eight Trigrams Palms Revolving Heaven: The moment before the Hyūga is struck by an attack, they emit chakra from all of their body's tenketsu to block it. They then spin rapidly, repelling the attack (and anything else in the vicinity) away and creating a protective shield for as long as they continue to spin. The greater the force of an attack, the greater the force with which it's repelled. Hiro's is currently quite close range, extending only a foot from his palms. And while he can create something larger, if need be, it loses its force making it highly imperfect the larger he attempts to make it.

-Eight Trigrams One Palm: Rather than focus on hitting multiple times, Hiro focuses on absolute precision, putting enough chakra into a strike to a tenketsu to render his foe overloaded. While delivered with almost no force at all, the effect can be devastating. Often used in conjunction with Body Flicker to surprise and enemy from range.

-Body Flicker Technique: A ninja can move short to long distances at an almost untraceable speed. To an observer, it appears as if the user has teleported. It is accomplished by using chakra to temporarily vitalise the body and move at extreme speeds. The amount of chakra required depends on the overall distance and elevation between the user and the intended destination. Hiro leaves plum blossom petals in his wake.

✖ ‖ W e a p o n s A n d T o o l s
Standard ninja gear

✖ ‖ F i g h t i n g S t y l e
Hiro has a relaxed style and rarely falls into even a formal fighting stance. He moves easily, flowing from side to side and picking his shots. He wants every blow to end the fight and sometimes puts himself at a disadvantage when fighting what he considers to be trash.

✖ ‖ T h e m e S o n g
Link to your themesong. (Optional)

✖ ‖ P l a y e d B y
Desdamin

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✖ ‖ N a m e
Jin Kani

✖ ‖ A g e / B i r t h d a y
12 / July 4th

✖ ‖ G e n d e r
"I'm a man!"

✖ ‖ B o d y T y p e
"Underneath this armor is a paragon of manliness, and I'm still but a boy. The Great Jin Kani has honed his body into a machine worthy of the powerful sting of the mighty crab, from which he claims his name. Ladies, if you feel yourself swooning as he removes his shirt, do not fear. That is normal."

✖ ‖ V i l l a g e
Konoha

✖ ‖ C l a n
Kani Clan: Originally from the Mist Village, the Kani were involved in a clan civil war between themselves and the Soft Shells, a group of dangerous radicals, and a clan war against the Kurage. Framed for treason by the treacherous Kurage, the Kani fled the Mist and defected to the Land of Whirlpools for a time and then to Konoha proper. The Kani follow the way of the Crab, they are proud and honorable, known for being strong of limb and intractable of will.

✖ ‖ F a m i l y
Father: Gendo Kani
Mother: Jinko Kani
Siblings: Genjin Kani (older brother)
Others: Genryu Kani (Uncle-Missing Nin)

✖ ‖ R a n k
Genin

✖ ‖ T i t l e s / N i c k n a m e s
The Magnificent Jin Kani, The Wonderous Brave Hero Jin Kani, The Fierce Crab of Konoha, The Handsome Crab of the Leaf, and more!

✖ ‖ P e r s o n a l i t y
Loud and pompous, Jin spends most of his time striking poses and hitting on women. Though very short-tempered, it is difficult for him to identify that anyone is insulting and/or making fun of him. It is as if the concept doesn't even enter his head that they may be. He tends to leap before he looks, often becomes quite gung ho about something, and isn't easily dissuaded by anything at all. He's actually smarter than he seems, but he is so set in his outlook and his way of doing things that even if he feels there may be a smarter way, he will forgo it in favor of the more manly way. He is brave to the point of foolhardiness and self-confident to the point of insanity. He'll take up almost any challenge and, even if he is terribly over-matched, will never give up until the end.

✖ ‖ L i k e s
- Himself
- Girls
- Himself and girls
- His older brother
- Making an entrance
- Being complimented
- Relating things to the mighty crab
- Training

✖ ‖ D i s l i k e s
- Dishonorable approaches
- Cowardice
- The Kurage
- Cunning plans that aren't cunning like the mighty crab
- Being insulted
- An overabundant proportion of vegetables

✖ ‖ N i n d o
My will is stronger than anything you've ever seen. I AM THE GLORIOUS JIN KANI!

✖ ‖ B i o g r a p h y
Jin's the second son of Gendo Kani and Jinko Kani, Jin was raised on stories of the Kani's greatness and his father's and older brother's great deeds. As a result, he grew up idolizing his clan (and developing a seething hatred of his clan's rivals, the Kurage Clan) and particularly his brother, who he was certain would definitely be the next Hokage. Jin's boundless confidence and energy, far from making him lazy, encouraged him to work harder than others. After all, he had a legacy to live up to.

Unfortunately, his pride and confidence often got him into trouble and his brash ways and flashy entrances could sometimes put other kids and even teachers off to him. Luckily for Jin, he never saw it this way in the least. The other kids were definitely far too intimidated by his extra cool persona to approach. After all, if he turned down their friendship, they might never recover. But the path of the marvelous was often a lonely one and Jin accepted the burden of ultimate cool. He'd bear it.

✖ ‖ N a t u r e s
Water/Earth

✖ ‖ T a l e n t s
✦ Presentation
✦ Creative Writing "Every teacher has commented upon my most amazing gift for superlatives and greatness."
✦ Boundless Confidence
✦ Amazing grip
✦ Incredible Endurance and Tenacity
✦ Fantastic Physical Strength
✦ Dancing
✦ Often too dumb to fail.

✖ ‖ J u t s u
Kani Basic Techniques

✦ Crab Claw- Through extensive chakra training, the limbs of the Kani become extremely powerful and difficult to injure. The more training, the harder to injure they become. Additionally, their grip becomes something fierce, able to crush rocks, bone, even rend metals, eventually. At this point, Jin's limbs can handle a few blows from a katana before they begin to bleed and can crush rocks with relative ease.

✦ Dance of the Crab- By training their footwork, the Kani become both elusive and much quicker than their fellows, graceful to the point that watching them fight often seems like dancing, particularly Tango dancing.

✦ Taste of the Sea- The Kani can spit copious amounts of sea water from their mouths. This increases in power and volume as the Kani becomes more adept and powerful with their chakra.

Hard Shell Techniques

✦ Crab Fiddle- The dominant hand of the Kani enlarges to roughly the size of the Kani's torso, particularly the forearm, granting the arm roughly ten times its normal strength. Unfortunately, the arm is also ungainly and requires quite a bit of strength to move around with it, let alone wield effectively.

✖ ‖ W e a p o n s A n d T o o l s
✦ Kani Shield: A large tower shield, traditionally gifted to Kani upon becoming Genin. Like all Kani equipment, it is a training tool, eventually replaced with jutsu.
✦ Kani Battle Helmet: A battle helmet gifted and modified throughout a Kani's career, eventually shed when the Kani learns a clan jutsu that makes the helmet unnecessary.

✖ ‖ F i g h t i n g S t y l e
Forward moving and powerful, Jin is a bullish fighter who makes a splashy entrance and will slug it out longer than anyone would expect. He has trained his footwork so his movements can appear almost dance-like when he isn't laying the smack down, but rather than avoid his enemies, he's more likely to charge right through them. He thinks sneaking is cowardly and would much rather announce his presence and demand a formal duel. At this time, he refuses to hit a woman.

✖ ‖ T h e m e S o n g

✖ ‖ P l a y e d B y
Desdamin

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✖ ‖ N a m e
Jin Kani

✖ ‖ A g e / B i r t h d a y
12 / July 4th

✖ ‖ G e n d e r
"I'm a man!"

✖ ‖ B o d y T y p e
"Underneath this armor is a paragon of manliness, and I'm still but a boy. The Great Jin Kani has honed his body into a machine worthy of the powerful sting of the mighty crab, from which he claims his name. Ladies, if you feel yourself swooning as he removes his shirt, do not fear. That is normal."

✖ ‖ V i l l a g e
Konoha

✖ ‖ C l a n
Kani Clan: Originally from the Mist Village, the Kani were involved in a clan civil war between themselves and the Soft Shells, a group of dangerous radicals, and a clan war against the Kurage. Framed for treason by the treacherous Kurage, the Kani fled the Mist and defected to the Land of Whirlpools for a time and then to Konoha proper. The Kani follow the way of the Crab, they are proud and honorable, known for being strong of limb and intractable of will.

✖ ‖ F a m i l y
Father: Gendo Kani
Mother: Jinko Kani
Siblings: Genjin Kani (older brother)
Others: Genryu Kani (Uncle-Missing Nin)

✖ ‖ R a n k
Genin

✖ ‖ T i t l e s / N i c k n a m e s
The Magnificent Jin Kani, The Wonderous Brave Hero Jin Kani, The Fierce Crab of Konoha, The Handsome Crab of the Leaf, and more!

✖ ‖ P e r s o n a l i t y
Loud and pompous, Jin spends most of his time striking poses and hitting on women. Though very short-tempered, it is difficult for him to identify that anyone is insulting and/or making fun of him. It is as if the concept doesn't even enter his head that they may be. He tends to leap before he looks, often becomes quite gung ho about something, and isn't easily dissuaded by anything at all. He's actually smarter than he seems, but he is so set in his outlook and his way of doing things that even if he feels there may be a smarter way, he will forgo it in favor of the more manly way. He is brave to the point of foolhardiness and self-confident to the point of insanity. He'll take up almost any challenge and, even if he is terribly over-matched, will never give up until the end.

✖ ‖ L i k e s
- Himself
- Girls
- Himself and girls
- His older brother
- Making an entrance
- Being complimented
- Relating things to the mighty crab
- Training

✖ ‖ D i s l i k e s
- Dishonorable approaches
- Cowardice
- The Kurage
- Cunning plans that aren't cunning like the mighty crab
- Being insulted
- An overabundant proportion of vegetables

✖ ‖ N i n d o
My will is stronger than anything you've ever seen. I AM THE GLORIOUS JIN KANI!

✖ ‖ B i o g r a p h y
Jin's the second son of Gendo Kani and Jinko Kani, Jin was raised on stories of the Kani's greatness and his father's and older brother's great deeds. As a result, he grew up idolizing his clan (and developing a seething hatred of his clan's rivals, the Kurage Clan) and particularly his brother, who he was certain would definitely be the next Hokage. Jin's boundless confidence and energy, far from making him lazy, encouraged him to work harder than others. After all, he had a legacy to live up to.

Unfortunately, his pride and confidence often got him into trouble and his brash ways and flashy entrances could sometimes put other kids and even teachers off to him. Luckily for Jin, he never saw it this way in the least. The other kids were definitely far too intimidated by his extra cool persona to approach. After all, if he turned down their friendship, they might never recover. But the path of the marvelous was often a lonely one and Jin accepted the burden of ultimate cool. He'd bear it.

✖ ‖ N a t u r e s
Water/Earth

✖ ‖ T a l e n t s
✦ Presentation
✦ Creative Writing "Every teacher has commented upon my most amazing gift for superlatives and greatness."
✦ Boundless Confidence
✦ Amazing grip
✦ Incredible Endurance and Tenacity
✦ Fantastic Physical Strength
✦ Dancing
✦ Often too dumb to fail.

✖ ‖ J u t s u
Kani Basic Techniques

✦ Crab Claw- Through extensive chakra training, the limbs of the Kani become extremely powerful and difficult to injure. The more training, the harder to injure they become. Additionally, their grip becomes something fierce, able to crush rocks, bone, even rend metals, eventually. At this point, Jin's limbs can handle a few blows from a katana before they begin to bleed and can crush rocks with relative ease.

✦ Dance of the Crab- By training their footwork, the Kani become both elusive and much quicker than their fellows, graceful to the point that watching them fight often seems like dancing, particularly Tango dancing.

✦ Taste of the Sea- The Kani can spit copious amounts of sea water from their mouths. This increases in power and volume as the Kani becomes more adept and powerful with their chakra.

Hard Shell Techniques

✦ Crab Fiddle- The dominant hand of the Kani enlarges to roughly the size of the Kani's torso, particularly the forearm, granting the arm roughly ten times its normal strength. Unfortunately, the arm is also ungainly and requires quite a bit of strength to move around with it, let alone wield effectively.

✖ ‖ W e a p o n s A n d T o o l s
✦ Kani Shield: A large tower shield, traditionally gifted to Kani upon becoming Genin. Like all Kani equipment, it is a training tool, eventually replaced with jutsu.
✦ Kani Battle Helmet: A battle helmet gifted and modified throughout a Kani's career, eventually shed when the Kani learns a clan jutsu that makes the helmet unnecessary.

✖ ‖ F i g h t i n g S t y l e
Forward moving and powerful, Jin is a bullish fighter who makes a splashy entrance and will slug it out longer than anyone would expect. He has trained his footwork so his movements can appear almost dance-like when he isn't laying the smack down, but rather than avoid his enemies, he's more likely to charge right through them. He thinks sneaking is cowardly and would much rather announce his presence and demand a formal duel. At this time, he refuses to hit a woman.

✖ ‖ T h e m e S o n g

✖ ‖ P l a y e d B y
Desdamin

Hana Bohi"Precision is nearest to perfection!"
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The classroom was set up in a semi-circle, the teacher's podium in front of the black board, the focus of the class. The desks, situated on an incline with each higher than the last as they went back, assured that no student would miss any part of Bohi-sensei's lectures. The Bohi-sensei herself currently stood in the front of the class, her back to the students. She had, cradled in her left arm, a binder and in her right, a simple white piece of chalk that was on its last legs. So far, almost the entire chalkboard was covered with precise boxes, each categorized "Team 1" or "Team 2" and so on.

What was so remarkable about this was that every single one of the boxes and every single character on the board looked as if it were typed and printed. Further, if it weren't for the fact that it was obviously in chalk and it was obviously a blackboard, one might have thought that what they were looking at was some sort of projection. It took her an awfully long time to set it all up, and she was just never quite satisfied. Even as she hurried to finish, because she had to finish, she knew she wasn't going to be satisfied with it when she stepped back and actually looked at it. More than likely it was at a slight slant, or perhaps the board was crooked or maybe she'd accidentally discover that the foundation of the building was a little off, a centimetre or two... and then she'd have to start all over again from scratch.

At that moment, her chalk decided to crumble into dust leaving a large white powdery ball on the board where the name "Yuzuzoshi" had once seemed so pristine. She froze. Her eye twitched. She reached for the eraser, choking the poor thing in her grip. She was going to have to write it agai-

The very loud school bell indicating the few minutes until the beginning of class interrupted her small conniption fit and brought her back to the real world... the world that didn't have numbers and checks and balances and patterns that must MUST be satisfied... well... there were fewer, anyway. She turned quite suddenly, a mild, but displeased look upon her face. She looked around the room to see who was already there and who was yet to arrive. She couldn't imagine any of them would arrive late. What sort of shinobi would be late to see what team they'd been selected for?!? She took a few breaths and tried to calm down. It helped, but she still had the urge to get her chart just so... She told herself she'd do it later, once her other duties had been taken care of. In fact, she wrote it in her binder, three times before finally turning back to the class, clearly satisfied with the arrangement and much calmer as a result.

The bell rang.

She had to remind herself it barely mattered now; if she didn't get started explaining the student's team selection, she herself very well stood the possibility of being late to start class! This was exactly why she never used the chalkboard!

"Goodmorning class", she began pleasantly, finally getting her footing, "today's a very big day for y-"

She heard murmuring which interrupted her speech. Her eyes snapped from gentle to deadly like a flip of a switch and she glared around the room, finally resting her gaze on a group of students talking among themselves, one who had clearly fallen asleep. His body lay prone across his desk while a thin stream of drool leaked out of the corner, onto the desk and down the side. Hana scoffed and straightened her posture. They obviously weren't taking their future very seriously at all! She fumed, but then bit it back. If they wanted to miss out on their instructions, then that was their decision.

"On the-"

But then the prone boy snored and in the span of a second, he found his head smashed into the wall behind his desk. He looked around confused for a moment while the eraser that Bohi-sensei had thrown at him dislodged itself.

"Chotzu! This is your future we're discussing here! You might wish to stay awake for it", yelled Hanna, who drew her small body up still straighter. Chotzu rubbed his forehead and whined, but straightened up too. The display of Bohi-sensei's eraser prowess seemed to have whipped the other talking students into attention too... and yet this didn't please Hana one bit.

"Now class, behind me is a chart of each of the teams, complete with their number and members", she said at a slightly faster clip. She was annoyed, and now quite determined to get through this without any further interruptions. She marched over to the board and pointed to a perfectly square box labelled "Team 8" and continued, "Now, for example, Chotzu Akimichi? you are here, on... Team 8 and your sensei is Jounin Instructor Yamcha Yamanaka."

She took a deep breath and finished with a wide smile, "Now, please come and see where you are listed and pick up your schedule at my desk. After that, you're all dismissed! Congratulations on your accomplishment and good luck on your ninja journey!"

She bowed politely and crossed her way over to her desk, where she began arranging paperclips just so.

Hana Bohi"Precision is nearest to perfection!"
_______________________________________________
The classroom was set up in a semi-circle, the teacher's podium in front of the black board, the focus of the class. The desks, situated on an incline with each higher than the last as they went back, assured that no student would miss any part of Bohi-sensei's lectures. The Bohi-sensei herself currently stood in the front of the class, her back to the students. She had, cradled in her left arm, a binder and in her right, a simple white piece of chalk that was on its last legs. So far, almost the entire chalkboard was covered with precise boxes, each categorized "Team 1" or "Team 2" and so on.

What was so remarkable about this was that every single one of the boxes and every single character on the board looked as if it were typed and printed. Further, if it weren't for the fact that it was obviously in chalk and it was obviously a blackboard, one might have thought that what they were looking at was some sort of projection. It took her an awfully long time to set it all up, and she was just never quite satisfied. Even as she hurried to finish, because she had to finish, she knew she wasn't going to be satisfied with it when she stepped back and actually looked at it. More than likely it was at a slight slant, or perhaps the board was crooked or maybe she'd accidentally discover that the foundation of the building was a little off, a centimetre or two... and then she'd have to start all over again from scratch.

At that moment, her chalk decided to crumble into dust leaving a large white powdery ball on the board where the name "Yuzuzoshi" had once seemed so pristine. She froze. Her eye twitched. She reached for the eraser, choking the poor thing in her grip. She was going to have to write it agai-

The very loud school bell indicating the few minutes until the beginning of class interrupted her small conniption fit and brought her back to the real world... the world that didn't have numbers and checks and balances and patterns that must MUST be satisfied... well... there were fewer, anyway. She turned quite suddenly, a mild, but displeased look upon her face. She looked around the room to see who was already there and who was yet to arrive. She couldn't imagine any of them would arrive late. What sort of shinobi would be late to see what team they'd been selected for?!? She took a few breaths and tried to calm down. It helped, but she still had the urge to get her chart just so... She told herself she'd do it later, once her other duties had been taken care of. In fact, she wrote it in her binder, three times before finally turning back to the class, clearly satisfied with the arrangement and much calmer as a result.

The bell rang.

She had to remind herself it barely mattered now; if she didn't get started explaining the student's team selection, she herself very well stood the possibility of being late to start class! This was exactly why she never used the chalkboard!

"Goodmorning class", she began pleasantly, finally getting her footing, "today's a very big day for y-"

She heard murmuring which interrupted her speech. Her eyes snapped from gentle to deadly like a flip of a switch and she glared around the room, finally resting her gaze on a group of students talking among themselves, one who had clearly fallen asleep. His body lay prone across his desk while a thin stream of drool leaked out of the corner, onto the desk and down the side. Hana scoffed and straightened her posture. They obviously weren't taking their future very seriously at all! She fumed, but then bit it back. If they wanted to miss out on their instructions, then that was their decision.

"On the-"

But then the prone boy snored and in the span of a second, he found his head smashed into the wall behind his desk. He looked around confused for a moment while the eraser that Bohi-sensei had thrown at him dislodged itself.

"Chotzu! This is your future we're discussing here! You might wish to stay awake for it", yelled Hanna, who drew her small body up still straighter. Chotzu rubbed his forehead and whined, but straightened up too. The display of Bohi-sensei's eraser prowess seemed to have whipped the other talking students into attention too... and yet this didn't please Hana one bit.

"Now class, behind me is a chart of each of the teams, complete with their number and members", she said at a slightly faster clip. She was annoyed, and now quite determined to get through this without any further interruptions. She marched over to the board and pointed to a perfectly square box labelled "Team 8" and continued, "Now, for example, Chotzu Akimichi? you are here, on... Team 8 and your sensei is Jounin Instructor Yamcha Yamanaka."

She took a deep breath and finished with a wide smile, "Now, please come and see where you are listed and pick up your schedule at my desk. After that, you're all dismissed! Congratulations on your accomplishment and good luck on your ninja journey!"

She bowed politely and crossed her way over to her desk, where she began arranging paperclips just so.


Player Characters


Here, I will list the Player Characters and link to their profiles in this thread.

Konoha Teams


Here, I will list the teams and link to the profile in this thread. I will add more as needed.







Bijuu


Here I will list all Bijuu taken and link to their jinchuuriki's profile. If they aren't listed here, they aren't taken.

Shukaku: Tomoyuki
Matatabi: Ami Uzumaki
Sanbi: -Taken-
Gyuki: -Taken-
Kurama: -Taken-

Seven Swords


Here I will list all Seven Swords taken, what they are and do, and link to their owner's profile. If they aren't listed here, they aren't taken.



Profile Skeleton


Exactly what it sounds like. Below is the Profile Skeleton. Please use the correct formatting. Send it to me or post it in the OOC. Once approved, I'll ask you to post it in the Profile section.

I expect people to observe power levels, which are not super high in this.

Genin: I will assume your character knows all the academy jutsu (since they're mostly required to graduate). Aside from that, 2 to 4 unique jutsu of not incredible will be the norm. Maybe a few more, if you're using non-chakra related taijutsu. Maybe on the lower side if your jutsu are particularly powerful and specialized.

Chunnin: Around 4 to 8 unique jutsu seems appropriate. Chuunin get to participate in jounin missions and genin missions (especially as substitutes for jounin away on their own missions), though they don't have a regular role and shouldn't expect to have one, necessarily.

Jounin: I'm not setting a hard limit here, but know that I will moderate your power level. I'll also expect jounin level players to take some measure of responsibility for plotting, some of the higher end story stuff and they may even run their own missions with their genin or others, if they like. With power comes great blah blah blah...

[center][img]YOUR CHARACTER IMAGE[/img][/center]
[center][color=slategray]╔══════════════════════╗[/color][/center]
[indent][color=slategray] ✖ ‖[/color] N a m e
[indent][indent][indent][color=yourcolor]Insert name[/color][/indent][/indent][/indent]
[color=slategray] ✖ ‖[/color] A g e / B i r t h d a y
[indent][indent][indent][color=yourcolor]Insert age / Birthday[/color][/indent][/indent][/indent]
[color=slategray] ✖ ‖[/color] G e n d e r
[indent][indent][indent][color=yourcolor]Insert gender[/color][/indent][/indent][/indent]
[color=slategray] ✖ ‖[/color] B o d y T y p e
[indent][indent][indent][color=yourcolor]Skinny, tall, short, muscular? Up to you.[/color][/indent][/indent][/indent]
[color=slategray] ✖ ‖[/color] V i l l a g e
[indent][indent][indent][color=yourcolor]Insert village[/color][/indent][/indent][/indent]
[color=slategray] ✖ ‖[/color] C l a n
[indent][indent][indent][color=yourcolor]Insert clan name and description[/color][/indent][/indent][/indent]
[color=slategray] ✖ ‖[/color] F a m i l y
[indent][indent][indent][color=yourcolor]Father:
Mother:
Siblings:
Others:[/color][/indent][/indent][/indent]
[color=slategray] ✖ ‖[/color] R a n k
[indent][indent][indent][color=yourcolor]Insert rank/team (Ex: Jounin//Battalion 1)[/color][/indent][/indent][/indent]
[color=slategray] ✖ ‖[/color] T a i l e d B e a s t
[indent][indent][indent][color=yourcolor]Insert tailed beast (Delete section if none.)[/color][/indent][/indent][/indent]
[color=slategray] ✖ ‖[/color] S p e c i a l S t a t u s
[indent][indent][indent][color=yourcolor]Insert any special titles, or if you are apart of some organization (The seven swordsman of the mist, and which sword, for example.) Delete Section if none.[/color][/indent][/indent][/indent]
[color=slategray] ✖ ‖[/color] T i t l e s / N i c k n a m e s
[indent][indent][indent][color=yourcolor]Insert any nick names or Title your character may go by. (Ex: Kakashi of the Sharingan , Pervy Sage.)[/color][/indent][/indent][/indent]
[color=slategray] ✖ ‖[/color] P e r s o n a l i t y
[indent][indent][indent][color=yourcolor]Insert Personality.[/color][/indent][/indent][/indent]
[color=slategray] ✖ ‖[/color] L i k e s
[indent][indent][indent][color=yourcolor][color=slategray]✖[/color] - Insert likes in a list, you don't have to fill them all out, but some would be nice.
[color=slategray]✖[/color] -
[color=slategray]✖[/color] -
[color=slategray]✖[/color] -
[color=slategray]✖[/color] - [/color][/indent][/indent][/indent]
[color=slategray] ✖ ‖[/color] D i s l i k e s
[indent][indent][indent][color=yourcolor][color=slategray]✖[/color] - insert in a list, you don't have to fill them all out, but some would be nice.
[color=slategray]✖[/color] -
[color=slategray]✖[/color] -
[color=slategray]✖[/color] -
[color=slategray]✖[/color] - [/color][/indent][/indent][/indent]
[color=slategray] ✖ ‖[/color] N i n d o
[indent][indent][indent][color=yourcolor]Insert your character's Ninja way.[/color][/indent][/indent][/indent]
[color=slategray] ✖ ‖[/color] B i o g r a p h y
[indent][indent][indent][color=yourcolor]Insert biography, at least a paragraph.[/color][/indent][/indent][/indent]
[color=slategray] ✖ ‖[/color] K e k k e i G e n k a i
[indent][indent][indent][color=yourcolor]Insert Kekkei Genkai, describe if made up, send naruto wiki link if canon, though you may be questioned as to why your character has a specific Kekkei Genkai. (Delete section if none.)[/color][/indent][/indent][/indent]
[color=slategray] ✖ ‖[/color] N a t u r e s
[indent][indent][indent][color=yourcolor]Insert nature release(s). You will be limited to a maximum of three here, but please be reasonable, I don't want to see everyone with more than two. If you have any question, please ask me.[/color][/indent][/indent][/indent]
[color=slategray] ✖ ‖[/color] T a l e n t s
[indent][indent][indent][color=yourcolor]Insert any natural or trained talents or skills that aren't summed up within specific techniques. Such as swordsmanship, enhanced hearing, or an impressive affinity for cooking.[/color][/indent][/indent][/indent]
[color=slategray] ✖ ‖[/color] J u t s u
[indent][indent][indent][color=yourcolor]Insert all of your jutsu here. No Wiki Links, make your own descriptions[/color][/indent][/indent][/indent]
[color=slategray] ✖ ‖[/color] W e a p o n s A n d T o o l s
[indent][indent][indent][color=yourcolor]Insert any special or common tools that your character carries with them.[/color][/indent][/indent][/indent]
[color=slategray] ✖ ‖[/color] F i g h t i n g S t y l e
[indent][indent][indent][color=yourcolor]describe fighting style[/color][/indent][/indent][/indent]
[color=slategray] ✖ ‖[/color] T h e m e S o n g
[indent][indent][indent][color=yourcolor]Link to your themesong. (Optional)[/color][/indent][/indent][/indent]
[color=slategray] ✖ ‖[/color] P l a y e d B y
[indent][indent][indent][color=yourcolor]Insert your username.[/color][/indent][/indent][/indent]
[/indent]

Fire from Ember


Konoha is enjoying a time of peace under the watchful eye of Hokage Hyuuga Seiji whose stewardship began after end of the Third Shinobi World War and which saw the end of the Nine-Tail's rampage across the land twelve years prior. But while they've achieved a fragile peace, seeds of its destruction have already been planted and must be weeded out. The Leaf's alliance with the Village Hidden in the Sand is unsettling to some of the other villages who view this pairing as an unbalancing of power. Some have even made overtures of arms-building, just in case the Ninja of the Leaf turn their great power upon them. Meanwhile, a former Missing-Nin from the Leaf has founded their own rogue village in the Land of Sound where they host criminals and other rogue shinobi for unknown purposes. Still more unnerving is the rumor of a group of elite shinobi wreaking havoc in several high-level outposts leaving not even the most powerful alive. Can the fire of Konoha survive?

A Bit About What You Can Expect


Welcome to Fire from Embers! I'm your host, Desdamin, and I absolutely hate summaries, so I'll get right to what you can expect. I generally have a very simple framework, but have a whole heckuva a lot of plot going on behind the scenes, which I allow characters to become privy to or not. It's my intention to give you guys a good mix of plot and freedom to do as you please and create your own stories. This means that what you see in the above description of the plot is going to necessarily be a thin veneer covering only what I can without giving anything away. Okay! Let's get on with it!

An Alternate Universe


This is an Alternate Universe RP that begins at the beginning of the Naruto Timeline and, which while it shares many similarities with the original, is not the same. There are, for example, very few canon characters aside from historical figures and the even then events may not have proceeded in the same way nor ended in the same way.

Some important things to note...

-Power Levels will not reach the ridiculous heights that the originals got to. Not even close.
-No Rinnegan. Sharingan is limited to its abilities from the beginning of the show pre-Shippuden.
-The Swords of the Mist aren't exactly the same.
-The Uchiha Massacre hasn't happened.
-Most of the power canon moves were developed by and are being used by characters other than who had done so originally.
-I will not allow any Genjutsu that would essentially be an instant kill. If you want Genjutsu, be warned.
-The origin of Chakra is the cycle of life and death. There are no moon men.
-Any specific question can be directed towards me, the thread lead, and I'll update as needed.

Rules


I'm not going to spend a lot of time making a lot of rules. I'd rather treat y'all like adults, so...

-Keep your posts readable, grammatical, and thought through. Certainly don't ignore other players' posts or character agency.

-Don't cause drama, obviously. If you've a problem with the rp or a player, take it up with me before you cause some big thing.

-I vet kind of hard and you can expect me to be critical of almost everyone's profiles, at first. This is to save trouble later. I'm willing to work with you, usually, to find something that can work. If, for some reason, you want to play a canon character, you'll be held to a higher standard.

-I don't expect one liners or novels. Give people enough to actually respond to and try for a bit of meat. If you really can't think of much, perhaps do a collaborative post to get a lot out quickly. Try to keep collaborative posts from a single perspective for readability.

-I reserve the right to kick out anyone for any reason whatsoever. My rules aren't technical and I won't be rules-lawyered into changing my mind. Act right.


Player Characters


Here, I will list the Player Characters and link to their profiles in this thread.

Konoha Teams


Here, I will list the teams and link to the profile in this thread. I will add more as needed.



Bijuu


Here I will list all Bijuu taken and link to their jinchuuriki's profile. If they aren't listed here, they aren't taken.

Seven Swords


Here I will list all Seven Swords taken, what they are and do, and link to their owner's profile. If they aren't listed here, they aren't taken.



Profile Skeleton


Exactly what it sounds like. Below is the Profile Skeleton. Please use the correct formatting. Send it to me or post it in the OOC. Once approved, I'll ask you to post it in the Profile section.

I expect people to observe power levels, which are not super high in this.

Genin: I will assume your character knows all the academy jutsu (since they're mostly required to graduate). Aside from that, 2 to 4 unique jutsu of not incredible will be the norm. Maybe a few more, if you're using non-chakra related taijutsu. Maybe on the lower side if your jutsu are particularly powerful and specialized.

Chunnin: Around 4 to 8 unique jutsu seems appropriate. Chuunin get to participate in jounin missions and genin missions (especially as substitutes for jounin away on their own missions), though they don't have a regular role and shouldn't expect to have one, necessarily.

Jounin: I'm not setting a hard limit here, but know that I will moderate your power level. I'll also expect jounin level players to take some measure of responsibility for plotting, some of the higher end story stuff and they may even run their own missions with their genin or others, if they like. With power comes great blah blah blah...

[center][img]YOUR CHARACTER IMAGE[/img][/center]
[center][color=slategray]╔══════════════════════╗[/color][/center]
[indent][color=slategray] ✖ ‖[/color] N a m e
[indent][indent][indent][color=yourcolor]Insert name[/color][/indent][/indent][/indent]
[color=slategray] ✖ ‖[/color] A g e / B i r t h d a y
[indent][indent][indent][color=yourcolor]Insert age / Birthday[/color][/indent][/indent][/indent]
[color=slategray] ✖ ‖[/color] G e n d e r
[indent][indent][indent][color=yourcolor]Insert gender[/color][/indent][/indent][/indent]
[color=slategray] ✖ ‖[/color] B o d y T y p e
[indent][indent][indent][color=yourcolor]Skinny, tall, short, muscular? Up to you.[/color][/indent][/indent][/indent]
[color=slategray] ✖ ‖[/color] V i l l a g e
[indent][indent][indent][color=yourcolor]Insert village[/color][/indent][/indent][/indent]
[color=slategray] ✖ ‖[/color] C l a n
[indent][indent][indent][color=yourcolor]Insert clan name and description[/color][/indent][/indent][/indent]
[color=slategray] ✖ ‖[/color] F a m i l y
[indent][indent][indent][color=yourcolor]Father:
Mother:
Siblings:
Others:[/color][/indent][/indent][/indent]
[color=slategray] ✖ ‖[/color] R a n k
[indent][indent][indent][color=yourcolor]Insert rank/team (Ex: Jounin//Battalion 1)[/color][/indent][/indent][/indent]
[color=slategray] ✖ ‖[/color] T a i l e d B e a s t
[indent][indent][indent][color=yourcolor]Insert tailed beast (Delete section if none.)[/color][/indent][/indent][/indent]
[color=slategray] ✖ ‖[/color] S p e c i a l S t a t u s
[indent][indent][indent][color=yourcolor]Insert any special titles, or if you are apart of some organization (The seven swordsman of the mist, and which sword, for example.) Delete Section if none.[/color][/indent][/indent][/indent]
[color=slategray] ✖ ‖[/color] T i t l e s / N i c k n a m e s
[indent][indent][indent][color=yourcolor]Insert any nick names or Title your character may go by. (Ex: Kakashi of the Sharingan , Pervy Sage.)[/color][/indent][/indent][/indent]
[color=slategray] ✖ ‖[/color] P e r s o n a l i t y
[indent][indent][indent][color=yourcolor]Insert Personality.[/color][/indent][/indent][/indent]
[color=slategray] ✖ ‖[/color] L i k e s
[indent][indent][indent][color=yourcolor][color=slategray]✖[/color] - Insert likes in a list, you don't have to fill them all out, but some would be nice.
[color=slategray]✖[/color] -
[color=slategray]✖[/color] -
[color=slategray]✖[/color] -
[color=slategray]✖[/color] - [/color][/indent][/indent][/indent]
[color=slategray] ✖ ‖[/color] D i s l i k e s
[indent][indent][indent][color=yourcolor][color=slategray]✖[/color] - insert in a list, you don't have to fill them all out, but some would be nice.
[color=slategray]✖[/color] -
[color=slategray]✖[/color] -
[color=slategray]✖[/color] -
[color=slategray]✖[/color] - [/color][/indent][/indent][/indent]
[color=slategray] ✖ ‖[/color] N i n d o
[indent][indent][indent][color=yourcolor]Insert your character's Ninja way.[/color][/indent][/indent][/indent]
[color=slategray] ✖ ‖[/color] B i o g r a p h y
[indent][indent][indent][color=yourcolor]Insert biography, at least a paragraph.[/color][/indent][/indent][/indent]
[color=slategray] ✖ ‖[/color] K e k k e i G e n k a i
[indent][indent][indent][color=yourcolor]Insert Kekkei Genkai, describe if made up, send naruto wiki link if canon, though you may be questioned as to why your character has a specific Kekkei Genkai. (Delete section if none.)[/color][/indent][/indent][/indent]
[color=slategray] ✖ ‖[/color] N a t u r e s
[indent][indent][indent][color=yourcolor]Insert nature release(s). You will be limited to a maximum of three here, but please be reasonable, I don't want to see everyone with more than two. If you have any question, please ask me.[/color][/indent][/indent][/indent]
[color=slategray] ✖ ‖[/color] T a l e n t s
[indent][indent][indent][color=yourcolor]Insert any natural or trained talents or skills that aren't summed up within specific techniques. Such as swordsmanship, enhanced hearing, or an impressive affinity for cooking.[/color][/indent][/indent][/indent]
[color=slategray] ✖ ‖[/color] J u t s u
[indent][indent][indent][color=yourcolor]Insert all of your jutsu here. No Wiki Links, make your own descriptions[/color][/indent][/indent][/indent]
[color=slategray] ✖ ‖[/color] W e a p o n s A n d T o o l s
[indent][indent][indent][color=yourcolor]Insert any special or common tools that your character carries with them.[/color][/indent][/indent][/indent]
[color=slategray] ✖ ‖[/color] F i g h t i n g S t y l e
[indent][indent][indent][color=yourcolor]describe fighting style[/color][/indent][/indent][/indent]
[color=slategray] ✖ ‖[/color] T h e m e S o n g
[indent][indent][indent][color=yourcolor]Link to your themesong. (Optional)[/color][/indent][/indent][/indent]
[color=slategray] ✖ ‖[/color] P l a y e d B y
[indent][indent][indent][color=yourcolor]Insert your username.[/color][/indent][/indent][/indent]
[/indent]

Fire from Ember


Konoha is enjoying a time of peace under the watchful eye of Hokage Hyuuga Seiji whose stewardship began after end of the Third Shinobi World War and which saw the end of the Nine-Tail's rampage across the land ten years prior. But while they've achieved a fragile peace, seeds of its destruction have already been planted and must be weeded out. The Leaf's alliance with the Village Hidden in the Sand is unsettling to some of the other villages who view this pairing as an unbalancing of power. Some have even made overtures of arms-building, just in case the Ninja of the Leaf turn their great power upon them. Meanwhile, a former Missing-Nin from the Leaf has founded their own rogue village in the Land of Sound where they host criminals and other rogue shinobi for unknown purposes. Still more unnerving is the rumor of a group of elite shinobi wreaking havoc in several high-level outposts leaving not even the most powerful alive. Can the fire of Konoha survive?

A Bit About What You Can Expect


Welcome to Fire from Embers! I'm your host, Desdamin, and I absolutely hate summaries, so I'll get right to what you can expect. I generally have a very simple framework, but have a whole heckuva a lot of plot going on behind the scenes, which I allow characters to become privy to or not. It's my intention to give you guys a good mix of plot and freedom to do as you please and create your own stories. This means that what you see in the above description of the plot is going to necessarily be a thin veneer covering only what I can without giving anything away. Okay! Let's get on with it!

An Alternate Universe


This is an Alternate Universe RP that begins at the beginning of the Naruto Timeline and, which while it shares many similarities with the original, is not the same. There are, for example, very few canon characters aside from historical figures and the even then events may not have proceeded in the same way nor ended in the same way.

Some important things to note...

-Power Levels will not reach the ridiculous heights that the originals got to. Not even close.
-No Rinnegan. Sharingan is limited to its abilities from the beginning of the show pre-Shippuden.
-The Swords of the Mist aren't exactly the same.
-The Uchiha Massacre hasn't happened.
-Most of the power canon moves were developed by and are being used by characters other than who had done so originally.
-I will not allow any Genjutsu that would essentially be an instant kill. If you want Genjutsu, be warned.
-The origin of Chakra is the cycle of life and death. There are no moon men.
-Any specific question can be directed towards me, the thread lead, and I'll update as needed.

Rules


I'm not going to spend a lot of time making a lot of rules. I'd rather treat y'all like adults, so...

-Keep your posts readable, grammatical, and thought through. Certainly don't ignore other players' posts or character agency.

-Don't cause drama, obviously. If you've a problem with the rp or a player, take it up with me before you cause some big thing.

-I vet kind of hard and you can expect me to be critical of almost everyone's profiles, at first. This is to save trouble later. I'm willing to work with you, usually, to find something that can work. If, for some reason, you want to play a canon character, you'll be held to a higher standard.

-I don't expect one liners or novels. Give people enough to actually respond to and try for a bit of meat. If you really can't think of much, perhaps do a collaborative post to get a lot out quickly. Try to keep collaborative posts from a single perspective for readability.

-I reserve the right to kick out anyone for any reason whatsoever. My rules aren't technical and I won't be rules-lawyered into changing my mind. Act right.
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