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dissertation done. can actually post again. yay.
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Well, thing is that a suitably advanced species could find a way to power exodus ships like these Arks without having to dump so much material into them, not to mention most of the space the ship occupies would be dedicated to the dwarf star anyways. During the long voyage, the ships could rely namely on scoops for the intermittent material scattered in the void, and stored reserves. Since most of the inhabitants will be on stasis anyways, and you mentioned that the ships are relying mainly on their initial velocity, the only power the ships would need to expend would be on maintenance.

All that considered, they wouldn't need to be quite as large as you have them now, but could still be relatively sizeable. This is even taking into account that there would only ever be one or two in this galaxy. Bigger is not always better after all.


on top of maintenance you also need to run the stasis field generators for millions of years, so you really need some kind of long lived power-source. Also the arks are suppose to be massive unwieldy monuments of hubris, because the only reason they built them rather than, say, firing hard drives filed with brain blueprints at other galaxy using rail cannons, is their elitist focus on having your original body. That said, I agree that a spacecraft twice the size of Jupiter is excessive so how about:

An ark's primary component is the dwarf star that has sustained it's journey across the void between galaxies. these stars are so small they are on the verge of being classified as gas giants but they are incredibly long lived and stable , making them n ideal source of power for systems requiring eons of operation time. this star is surrounded in a web of energy collectors that harvest heat and light from the dull star to power the stasis units holding it's dwarven passengers, and an array of magnets and shield projectors that hold the star steady in the grasp of the ark. the rear of this rig features a large array of boosters that initial sped up the ark and will also be used to slow it down upon arrival. At the front is the only solid part of the web, a ship/station, known as the Hearth, that is about the size of Germany. the Hearth houses everything the Mayall need to start restart their society in a new galaxy, such as the stasis held Dwarves themselves, backups of Demi minds, cloning equipment, bio material for slave/food production, manufacturing facilities and a vast array of smaller vessels docked in hangers or on it's surface.

also it probably shouldn't be in the military section
@DracoLunaris Most of the app is fine, I actually think the cultural divide resulting from their biotech is pretty neat, as is their extragalactic origins. Only real point of concern is the whole "Ark" thing. Gotta dial it down man, like those things are huge, and you have them as basically military super-weapons if I'm reading it right. My personal take on it is this. The Arks would be fine being rather large(Not nearly as much as you have them now) but only defensively armed. Not equipped enough to take out planets, or fend off entire military fleets, but modestly armed enough to ward off things like pirates or small incursions.


on the fire power I agree that that description is, in hind sight, excessive and a rather un-thematic/illogical design. putting guns on it wastes time/resource that could be put into making another one or making it more lily to survive the trip after all.

as for the size, does the fact that there is only going to be one, possibly two, of them in the narrative/galaxy elevate that issue or would you rather I still shrink them down? If so by how much?
I also made a thing

The Mayall Hegemony



The Mayall Hegemony




will there be a map?
thinking of doing extra galactic nomads/refugees.


defiantly interested


Captain Piper

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day/time: day 3 - evening
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The boss really can't commit to being nice can he. There always just has to be a backhand involved in any apology or compliment he gives

”That's not what I... Ah never mind.”

At least her poor word choice ment nobody realised what she had been planning to do. Planning to do because after arriving at the fortress and hearing the odds they were up against wandering up into the mountains alone at night seemed like a bad idea, as did leaving the already small team alone to face that many laser gun welding deer hat enthusiasts and their animal themed bots commanders. Once she heard the Bosses surprising sane, if simple, plan, she silently kicked her whole solo expedition plan into the dustbin of bad ideas and focused on the task at hand.

”That's actually… yeah that'll work. Sets us up for a pincer move on the wolf too which is nice. We can figure out specific tactics once we actually set eyes on the place, seeing as no plan survives the boarding impact. Only thing I can suggest as far as overall strategy goes is that we try and focus on luring the laser gunner guys into places where our melee fighters can ambush them to get some guns of their own while avoiding places where we’d be advancing across coverless ground. This for example,“ she pointed at the crude depiction of the riverside with its long walkways and bridges ”looks like it might be awful exposed whereas this” she pointed to the varois homes and stairways leading up to the treasury house “looks like it’ll be alot better for gap closing.” She imagined this was rather obvious for everyone, the warriors themselves had certainly learned the advantage of cover, but she believed it worth repeating just incase it prevented the boss form ordering any suicidal charges.

She was pleased to hear that Azura seemed to have more tricks up her sleeve than just her enchanting singing voice and after a few moments of contemplation suggested that: “maybe if we can spot some of them from here” she pointed at what looked like some large rocks or buildings across the river from the penguin's lair “I can get their attention with some fancy marksmanship and maybe pull them down to the riverside where they’ll be in the aforementioned coverless danger zone and in rage of your, uh, magic”

She was still getting used to the idea that magic might be real.


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