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NAOMI: Daiquiris are still pretty good; they're basically straight sugar. Can't really mess that up no matter what you do.


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*Half smiles*
You had me at sugar. I'll take two.


I would be remiss to turn down hospitality. I'll have one of the same.
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not really, something with magic would be cool, like a swords and sorcery type thing maybe
but not really picky


Just a quick heads up that you don't need quotes for character dialogue, it's assumed. And if you could add a linebreak between action symbols and dialogue, it would help. Thanks!

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just cus my character isn't bloodedge griffin the shadow ninja of the stoic monastery doesn't mean I'm not capable of seriously engaging. if anything a slightly wacky and out there character allows for a more interesting setting than "cyborg bounty hunter #47" is trying to shoot mcbad guy and he hits every shot cus I say so


Sure, there's McJRPG guy on one side of the spectrum, but I'm not totally convinced the other side of that spectrum is alien JFK.
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not really, something with magic would be cool, like a swords and sorcery type thing maybe
but not really picky


I'm sorry, I've been on a business trip. That sounds good, I plan to set it up tomorrow.
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Honestly not really, they are more of a merc, they just wont do anything targeting children, and sometimes animals depending on the situation

"You think that 'hero's' are infallible? I am standing here as proof that they are not. They came to where I was and they left us all there."


So sorry, I totally missed this comment! I have an idea. Do you want to start them in a world somewhere? Like, any preferred setting for a universe they'd be visiting?
so @DarkwolfX37 is my character good, or do i need to add/ change stuff?


I think it's pretty much fine--do you have any goals/motivations in play? I can try tying them into something going on depending on what that looks like.
Would Halius know Latin, or is Varric a new form of Latin, just curious?


I'll defer to Tank on that, but I want to point out our style again:

*Holds my hand up, fist on his chest, in a Roman Salute, and my voice carries the authority of drilled formations and battlefield command*
Marius: Amicus sum. Centurio Marius Titus, Legio XIV Gemina. (I'm friendly, I'm Centurion Marius Titus, 14th Legion of Rome, Gemina.)
*Eyes the men*
If there's a Rome still here, then I stand ready to serve it. Under what standard do you march?


TL;DR, needs to be first person, actions need to be marked with *, and quotes aren't necessary around dialogue. On the language thing, I'd probably prefer a general *Speaks in Latin* once for the character instead of doing live translation, but I probably won't enforce that unless it becomes excessive.
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I have a backstory, and also I did read the post format and the other rules


Could you provide details as well as info on how they became interdimensional?
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I was thinking they'd meet Hal. Given that Hal (and the Varroi under his command) have a vested interest in denying the data to Lucy, then I could see them bringing Marius to Cooperative Earth to assault the blacksite themselves and destroy the data.


I'm very fine with this. Darkred's latest post is roleplayerguild.com/posts/5652062 if you want to kick off.
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- These suborbital jets hit you pretty hard on ascent. Just... be aware of that.

*It's not hard to get into the terminal, and after a few letters stuffed with bills handed to the security personnel, they're through the baggage checks and screenings.*

- How's first class sound? Lucy's loaded, you know.


What better way to go undercover than undercover in style? Let's do it.
Sorry about that


No worries. @Tank o The Lake did you want to rope darkred into the current events or do you want me to take their char in a different direction?
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