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@Ezekiel

Shall I edited those parts into my char sheets then and be good to go?


Edit them in and just say when you have, I'll read over them again before I accept them just to make sure.
@Sini

Frey:

1) My mistake, might have written wrong there.
2) Longjustice in a way, while kind and honorable has a deep sense of law - basically 'either you do it, or I do it for you'. Basically he threatened the young one and told much of the smallfolk what has happened. Thus punish or risk justice by mob rule.

Joanna:

1) I suck at bio, sorry.
2) Hmm. That could work. Perhaps she might swordplay in secret?
3) Perhaps ward to some other minor or major house then?


Frey:

1) -
2) I suppose that makes sense, while I don't think mob justice would amount to much given how untouchable the nobility can be to the Smallfolk, public knowledge is certainly a way to ensure justice is done.

Joanna:

1) Don't we all
2) Perhaps she could, but, a noble lady has very little secret time to herself, doing so might make her far more dangerous than your average lady but it won't make you 'that' good.
3) A wardship could work, although she's quite old for that to be the case. I could imagine she'd be forced to accompany another relative to King's Landing to seek a suitable match, with the punishment of her not playing along being the Silent Sisters.

Sorry that feedback took so long, I've had struggles with my health the last couple of weeks.

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Thanks! Yeah of course

Part of the reason I put in the other children was because the next Lord Tyrell apparently isn’t born till 129ish. I was a bit confused by that, since Matthos has been a Lord since at least 101 (and why would he have an heir so late). I’m happy to put in a young’un though!


I actually keep forgetting how much time 'before' the Dance I set this game, it wouldn't actually be necessary for the next Lord Tyrell to be born, just, canonically, most of your Tyrells are set for short existences! So, yeah, totally ignore my early feedback. You'll have to excuse me my ear was trying to explode.


Here's my lot finally!


Hey, sorry to take so long to get back to you.

I'm happy with the direction you're taking House Tyrell, even if it is a drift from canon (the next generation of Tyrell's is regency due to lack of heirs and your's don't seem to have that issue).

The only alteration I'd ask to be made is either the addition of an infant son or the ageing down of one of the children to fill that role, just so we have a character that could be the next canonical Lord Tyrell. This is a request rather than a demand, either way the sheet is accepted and you can post em up.
Aylara Tewoe. Galactic Times Complex



"No farcking way did the Herald get this."

Aylara was still in the process of tying up her hair as she practically threw a datapad down onto the desk before her. To his credit, editor Jen Surve, a Zabrak with an almost permanently mild expression, managed to not react to the piece of expensive tech being thrown 'loosely' at him with all the care of an 'eyed up' cargo transfer. He took a moment to finish typing the end of a thought process before he inevitably lost it, before looking up.

Aylara Tewoe had a certain mastery of the 'well?' expression that put even trained actors to shame. Now both her hands were busy with the process of subduing her cascade of auburn hair up into the usual ponytail she wore, but that didn't stop her eyebrow from being raised in such a manner that he suddenly felt under interrogation for something far beyond his control.

"Right place at the right time, you know the way, one of their interns happened to be at a party nearby." He exhaled at her, anticipating another dramatic standoff with his best, if painfully aggravating, member of staff.

"Jace Malcom gets blown out of his own flat on CORUSCANT and we don't have ONE reporter within a mile, and the HERALD gets the scoop? Pfaask, Jen, they're barely better than a gossip archive." Her hair remained in place for now. It was still slightly damp, which was impressive given the speed at which the staff facilities could dry even the hairiest of the team after a soak in the showers. She'd clearly bolted over right from the fitness suite after some poor fool had decided to show her the article. Perhaps he should be thankful she wasn't in a towel.

"They're our main competitor, Ayla, I hardly think that's a fair-"

"Exactly! Coooooome on Jen how can we hope to win the-"

"Listen, Tewoe, just because I'm not shouting and screaming the office down doesn't mean I'm not bugged out either, but what are we going to do? Far as I'm aware neither your or me has 'quite' worked out how to distort time and space to work on a story. if you want, there's a spot on the team to go probe the Security teams for answers tonight." He finally lost a degree of his cool, a slight raise of his voice that would shock most of his team but barely had an impact on the human woman whose attention seemed barely on him by this point.

"Can't."

"Why the frack not?"

"I've got a date."

"Tewoe, I've known you for the last three years and I've never once heard you call anything a 'date'," His incredulous tone hid the moment of frustration behind her dismissively turning down what many others in the building would consider a fairly prime opportunity. Even his usual composure broke away and he permitted himself to rub his face with a building sigh.

"Fine, I have a lead."

"What's this on? What's more important than the Supreme Commander of the Republic's little sojourn through the skies?"

"Not sure yet, I've got a good feeeeeling though. See you Jen." She'd already turned to leave. It was some time after the door shut behind her that Jen permitted himself to lob a fairly sizable desk sculpture at the space Aylara Tewoe had previously been occupying.

Aylara Tewoe. Iko District



There are two types of Senatorial families. The first kind are those that will never leave the Spires high above, mostly out of choice, what could they want from the lower levels? But also out of safety. Those who believe in the honesty of their work, who simply don't have enough influence or any other myriad possibilities that might put them at risk in the underbelly of the Republic's capital.

Then there were those who could go where they please. Attached or related to Senators who had all the strings to pull in the galaxy, making their spoiled heirs all but untouchable to even the most desperate of Coruscants' gangers. These were the types that lounged in their sense of untouchability, all bought by the Galaxy's finest. It was a sorry state of affairs, but not one Aylara wasn't willing to take advantage of.

Not that she was even remotely thinking about that right now, not that she was thinking about anything. When you're moving at a speed where observation becomes retrospecting, at best intuition, to think is to die, and end up a very pretty smear on a wall. Everything around her was a blur, a featureless rush of colour and sound that existed for mere nano-seconds as she blasted past them. The speederbike beneath her screamed into the night. It was hot. Not in the temperature kind of hot, in the don't even buy my dinner first kind of hot. The panelling was a bold harlequin green, combined with a deep black for the exposed mechanics and durofoam seating, it was very much a statement race bike. The whole thing 'roared' when she pushed it to the max, it road corners like a dream and the controls responded without a hint of lag. It was state of the art and a dream come true, beneath her helmet, coloured to match the bike, she laughed.

With a twist of her wrist, she turned the bike horizontal, riding 'just' above the blurring ground as she powered beneath the hovering shape of a street-freighter. She was going too fast, even if the engine of the bike and the protection of her helmet would have made it impossible, to hear the cursing of the workers above the larger vehicle turn to stunnned appreciation of the piece she was riding. They had further choice words for the gaggle of bikes which shortly pursued her, kicking up a storm of rushing air as they powered down the tightly woven streets of the district. None of the bikes in the race were worth any less than anyone actually living on these streets could afford to buy in ten years of hard work, despite that, they were a regular sight down here. Influential gangers, the spoiled brats of the wealthy, anyone with a head for unnecessary risks and speed, they could all find themselves down here, far from Coruscant Security, pushing each other to new heights of thrillseeking.

Ayla had done this before, countless times, but never on something as nice as this. It wasn't even fair, she'd back her chances to beat any of those racing today even on her own bike, garaged far away, but on this monster of a machine, she was unbeatable. All she had to do was not die.

That moment almost came on the final turn. The street rose and she was already riding the bike low, close to the ground. She'd turned off the proximity alerts and correction intelligence, safety features that could kill you with their own precautions when you were pushing corners or weaving through traffic, but now she had little way to tell the metal of the floor beneath her was rising. There was a hiss of sparks, not from the bike itself, but the metal, melted away by a fine shield that she didn't even know the vehicle had. The kickback, however, pushed the nose of the bike up into the air, and for a moment she was dramatically higher than she had anticipated. Once again she had to shift the bike horizontal to avoid being crushed into a cab above her. It was a close thing, the bike rebounding off the prepulsion system of the other vehicle, pushing her back towards the ground. She righted the bike just in time, and coasted over the finish line set out in blinking red lights, twisting the bike to a stop.

She was still laughing as she pulled her helmet free from her head, her hair tumbling out. Still her thighs squeezed around the speeder as it continued to growl in active power, barely contained within it's chassis. She was panting, laughing, panting again. As the rest of the racers pulled up over the line, two figures began to approach her, and she beamed them a smile. With almost palpable resentment, she swung herself off the speeder, exhaling deeply as the two males arrived within ear shot over the continued, if cooling, roar of engines.

"How did you find her?"

"Stars have mercy, she's gorgeous." Ayla beamed a genuine grin, placing her hands on her hips and blowing a strand of hair away from her eyes as the first man laughed in amusement. Tevo Knicks was the son of one of those aforementioned untouchable senators. She'd met him down here racing a while back, not knowing who he was at the time. He still had no idea who she was, and that was perfect. Before she turned to regard the second male, she allowed the young, blonde man to catch her biting her lower lip, a flicker of her eyes at him, before she refocused.

"Alright, the bike's a stud, but, showing it off to me with Little Miss here on it's hardly fair, she'd make a Tantooine scooner look first rate." The other male was a shorter, immediately less appealing man, but one Ayla had known for far longer. Caylo was short for a Nautolan, with a skin shad that could be described as a dirty blue and was the wrong side of slightly overweight. Still, he was closer to her than family by this point. The man was a dealer of all things engines and revs down in the lower districts, and had been looking to buy a racing piece for an unnamed client. She'd needed a set piece to draw Tevo in, and done a favour for a friend at the same time.

"You won't find a finer bike for the price I can give you, Caylo, you know that. Maybe she could make anything look fast, but she's not stopped smiling, that should sell it for you." Tevo smirked at Ayla, who did a very good job of not relinquishing that smile, turning into a private laugh as Caylo looked at her, rolling his eyes whilst the Senatorial heir was focused on her.

"Alright, we'll go take shop and get the details down, don't dawdle." Caylo shook his head, tendrils rolling about, before treading his way back towards the curb, leaving the two humans standing beside the bright speederbike.

"I'm giving your friend too good of a deal."

"Aw, you're too kind." Ayla practically pouted at Tevo, who took more than a step towards her. She didn't reciprocate the motion but didn't fight it either, running her fingers through an errant strand of hair as their forms moved closer together.

"I think that means you owe me."

"Does it now..." Ayla let the words slip from her lips, barely unpursing them, before her hand moved forwards, reaching into the man's pocket to pull back with his comms device. As he exhaled sharply from the contact, she grinned at him, before offering the device back. "Let me put my details in, and we can 'see' about me owing you...If you've got more bikes like that."

Aylara Tewoe. Personal Apartment



"Farcking Stoopa." Aylara breathed, almost a sigh, as she sat at her home desk, flicking through the files currently streaming before her. The tasty bit of malware she'd dropped into Tevo's comms had opened up his father's personal files to her, just as soon as she'd made her way home. The lowlight of her small, if not neatly maintained, high-rise apartment cast into a blue glow by the screen she was watching. She had to trawl through a lot, mostly dull even when it was scandalous, but here it was, the big fish.

Resolution 4-1138-95

All she did was shove a copy in a message to Jen with two other words neatly slotted above.

Run This.
Name: Aylara Tewoe

Occupation and Affiliation: Journalist. 'Lead Procurement Specialist' for The Galactic Times.

Description:


Tall, but not 'too' tall, with a frankly enormous cascade of hair, Aylara is hardly the 'blend in' sort of journalist, she's the type that could have looked the perfect princess if she'd allowed it. Instead, stints reporting in the nastier districts of Coruscant, time spent in the gym and a penchant for hobbies more than a little on the side of dangerous, has built her into the kind of girl that turns heads for more than one reason. Despite sometimes going for the 'tough girl' look, there's more than a side of vanity and pride to her appearance, a smootheness and blemishfree-ness of skin that pertains to actively caring for such, and well-kept features aside. Whether this is purely due to the nature of her work or her own personal choice is something that she never quite confirms or denies.

Background:

Aylara has always been something of a rebel, at least for one who grew up in the sparkling heights of Coruscant. She fell in with the wrong crowds, but without letting them drag her down, made the wrong friends, raced speeder-bikes, generally made her well-to-do family's life a misery, in all ways except her Academic record. She was unapologetically bright and unapologetically interested in how the world she had grown up on worked, not just how it was meant to work. She blew through school and university, although the latter she didn't quite ace to the same extent as the former, not adjusting so well to her own freedoms. It didn't truly matter, by that point she had already impressed the right people and earned herself a place at The Galactic Times.

At first, she was writing at a desk, researching leads in a sterile way, about sterile subjects. She put up with that for a few months, swearing to herself it would be worth it. She didn't last quite as long as most before she was banging on the doors of Senior Leadership asking for something else. It came out of wanting to do what the rest of her peers didn't want to. The Times has always taken itself seriously, to challenge the mindsets of both readers and those it reports on. When gang violence increased dramatically in several of Coruscants lower levels, they didn't want to toe the line or report through intermediaries, they wanted to send someone down. of all their best and brightest graduates, only one had any contacts down that lower, only one had made friends with the 'wrong crowd' and the wrong crowd hadn't forgotten her. When the Times' scope on the troubles ultimately blew their competition out of the water, Aylara had secured her place and she never got put back on that damn desk.
@Shizuochan @Dusty

You're both approved :) feel free to post those up.
Much interest.

I was originally going to play this as Theron Shan, but he's been sent to Corellia itself, so I'll have to rustle up a different character.
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So basically sister to Celena I guess?

Also. According to lore Brightroar, the Valyrian Sword of the main branch House Lannister was lost King Tommen II of the Rock. Namely before Aegon' Conquest.

awoiaf.westeros.org/index.php/Tommen_…
awoiaf.westeros.org/index.php/Brightroar


Oh yup, that is correct, not sure why I'd mixed that one up. Still, I'd rather if someone were to reclaim something as major as Brightroar that they do that in the course of the RP rather than just have it as a part of their background.

You'd have to talk to Ruby about the specifics of any family bonds.


Is it possible to have Joanna as head of House Lannister? Or would that be too much, during this time?


There's a fair few issues with the sheet but I'm sure these changes can be made. I'd suggest making her a Lannisport Lannister rather than from the main family if you want to play an adventurer. I'd highly doubt the Casterly Rock Lannisters would accept their only daughter training like this, let alone allowed back after running off. She also has two brothers so she wouldn't ever be head of the household.

Finally, Brightroar hasn't yet been lost in this time period, so she can't have found it in Valyria/Volantis.
@Ruby @Jorick

A cousin for you both to add to the sheet!

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