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4 yrs ago
I DON'T LIKE'EM PUTTING CHEMICALS IN THE WATER THAT TURNS THE FRICKIN' 1X1 SECTION LEWD.
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4 yrs ago
Oi JOSUKE, I logged on to my personal desktop computation device and went to ROLEPLAYERGUILDDOTCOM, now I'm trapped in the one-times-one section! Ain't that wacky?
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4 yrs ago
I didn't steal your meme, I colonized it.
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4 yrs ago
Rush RPG, cyka blyat
4 yrs ago
John Table. The man. The myth. The furniture.
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Sorry about the weird split in the entries. Guild was giving me a "Server Not Found" error when I tried posting it all in one section.
by @Exit

by @Vocab


Non-Participating Entries




by @SleepingSilence




Some seriously good stuff here, everyone. Good job, and thank you all for participating!
by @Calle

@PlatinumSkink

by @Silver

Beware The Metal Age

Voting and Critique




Behold! The vote-ening has arrived!

I encourage everyone that cares about the Contests(and if you don't already, I encourage you to begin now) to read through all of the wonderful entries submitted in the past two weeks, and cast their vote for their favorite! The submission with the most votes will be posted in a stickied "Trophy Case" thread where it will be displayed for all to see, and its author added to the list of Meritorious Writers at the very top!

Of course, this thread is also for critiquing. Note I said critiquing, not shitslinging. Constructive criticism only, please. Feel free to go through any one or all of the entries and give your two cents in helping your fellow writers improve! Those that have entered this contest are absolutely allowed to critique each others' works, contestants can absolutely vote, though not for their own, obviously.

Needless to say, using multiple accounts to vote more than once is NOT ALLOWED, and if an author uses alts to vote for their own work, they will be disqualified on the spot and disbarred from entering any future Contests.

Please vote based on the merits of the work, not for the sake of a clique or just because the author happens to be your friend. And mostly certainly do not attempt to have an author falsely disqualified because you don't happen to like them, because I'll fucking find out and it won't be pretty.



by @Rosenrot

by @BrokenPromise
Due to how my own schedule works, and also because I prefer to have a bit of a grace period for entries, I usually have a soft deadline and a hard deadline. Soft deadline being what's in the OP of each Prompt and Entry thread. The "hard" deadline is typically sometime the day after(usually when I get off work, lel).

Speaking of, I believe the hard deadline for this contest has been reached. Thus, I shall close the Prompt and Entries thread and put together the voting thread!

Oh, and I will admit the rules for my specific contests are more like guidelines. Staying within them would be nice, but if you believe your entry can be made to be truly exceptional by bending them, then by all means, go ahead.

Though of course some rules are non-negotiable, such as the entry having to be in line with the prompt, obviously.

I do apologize to anyone that joins my contests in the future expecting some kind of rule-lawyered bloodsport where the losers' souls are fed to the user with the winning entry to gain their powers or something. Just isn't how I generally run stuff like this.
Pendants, armor, even clothes for Mara's sake, all made out of sparkling gold. Sagax never in his life had even imagined such opulence, not even in the chambers of the Emperor himself. In truth it was almost blinding, reflected light assaulting the Imperial's eyes from every conceivable direction. He was stuck somewhere between awe and disgust at the fat bastard's collection of riches, though Sagax would be lying if he said he didn't think about having a bit of it for himself, and that's when he spied a glistening robe hanging above a small pile of jewellery. He didn't need any of it...but...

To Oblivion with it, he was going to get something out of this suicide mission. Sagax swiped the robe and two rings out of the pile below it and stuffed them in his pack. It was a snug fit, but the locking strap had just enough length to be secured shut by the buckle. Well, at least it wasn't stealing. Not really, anyway. Only a little bit...technically. Besides, hadn't Sagax earned this? All he had given in his life, taking one or two pieces of gold shouldn't paint him as greedy. What had the Sload done to earn any of their riches, anyway? It wasn't theirs to begin with.

Then came the rumbling. Thunder? No, Sagax knew what he was feeling. Too well, as far as he was concerned. The airship was starting to come apart, geysers of flame erupting out of the massive balloon above and all across the hull of the vessel. When he reached the end of the deck closest to the Tear, the snapping of wood could be heard as the airship was starting to pull itself apart.

"Damn...!" Sagax muttered to himself with a weariness. The chains connecting the airship to the Kyne's Tear had broken off, that left him and the other mercenaries with one choice: jumping. The only sane choice was into the sea; he'd shatter every bone in his body trying to land on the deck of the Tear. But his bag would inhibit his ability to stay afloat...though what if Sagax were to send it to the Tear while he himself jumped overboard into the water? It was definitely worth a shot.

Gripping his bag tightly in one hand, Sagax backed up as far as he could for a running jump off of the airship. At the end of his run, he used a railing to propel him further upwards, hoping it would give him a better chance of hitting both of his marks simultaneously.
After lifting off, Sagax tossed his bag as hard as he could in the direction of the ship below. After that, it was in Kynareth's hands. Thinking of a short prayer for luck, the Imperial curled into a tight ball as he descended.

Back on the Kyne's ear, Piper had just barely held on enough to keep from being thrown overboard. A fortunate turn of events, given her armor, though not so fortunate for the others, though being brutally honest she didn't care much about those that did get thrown into the water. Besides, she wasn't exactly equipped for a search and rescue. She would need to stay on the ship.

Suddenly, something caught her attention. Flying through the sky towards the ship was a bundle of what looked like leather. When it landed just a few feet from her, she saw clearly that it was in face her brother's travel bag. Piper's heart sank when he looked up and saw the airship being torn apart, explosions ripping it asunder. Behind her helmet, tears washed across her face as the Imperial woman first searched the waters near the Tear, then looked back to the sky. There she saw another figure, clad in leather racing down from above into the sea, meeting the surface with a crash before disappearing. Gripping the railing of the deck, Piper's breathing stopped as she stared at the spot her brother landed, waiting for him to come back up. He would. He had to.

Cold as ice and black as sin was the water that engulfed Sagax. He was frozen in shock for but a moment before breaking free of the paralyzing grip of the ocean and finding his way upward. Small streaks of light breaking through the waves guided Sagax to the surface, where he was greeted by fire, debris, and most importantly, air.

"SAGAX!"

Above Sagax was the heavily-armored figure of his sister. He was glad to see she looked relatively unharmed after her scuffle with the werewolf. He waved over at Piper to signal that he heard her. "I'm over here! Hey, was I able to get my bag onto the ship?"

"Wha-your bag...FORGET YOUR STUPID FUCKING BAG, YOU TWAT! GET YOUR ASS BACK ON THE SHIP!" As she spoke, Piper's voice became higher and higher pitched. Her throat had begun to lock up on her from anxiety, and she was still fighting to get the tears to stop even though Piper saw with her own eyes that Sagax looked fine. What was he thinking, asking about his bag? How the hell was that important!?

"R-right...! Don't worry, I'm coming over now! I can still swim just fine!"

Though the waves kept beating him back, Sagax was eventually able to make it back on board the Kyne's Tear with the help of a couple of sailors and some rope. He barely had time to take a single step before Piper ran over to him and jerked him over to her in a tight, almost crushing embrace. Sagax could hear that his sister was breathing quickly and heavily, and he thought he heard sniffling from within her helmet as well.

It was a rare display of emotion Piper was going through, and Sagax didn't really know what to say. So instead he remained quiet and simply returned his sister's hug as the others began pulling more people back onto the ship. He could check on the others later.
@Frizan So I decided I just wasn't satisfied with my entry that I was working on. Can I still 'submit' an entry that isn't apart of the voting/selection process? Basically, just for those that were passingly interested. Wouldn't mind the critiques, though I'm basically acknowledging I hadn't gotten to the editing stage/unfinished product.


Sure, just put a disclaimer at the beginning of your entry that signifies it is not part of the voting process.
@Frizan Is the metal age defined in any way? Like is this based upon anything? Or can somebody construct this world, its technology, setting and the behavior of these "red-eyed" constructs in basically anyway they wanted?


In this instance the "metal age" is defined as an invading force. It could be a literal army, or it could even be a metaphorical "invasion", showing the change from a "natural" existence to an automated/industrial one.
Feel free to direct any feedback or questions here! Please keep discussion relevant to the associated contest. All other Guild posting rules also apply.

And whew, sorry this took so long to get out, guys! My brain's been seizing up a lot lately.

Also shut up a guy with a Thief avatar hosting a contest called Beware The Metal Age is just a coincidence don't talk to me or my wife's son ever again
Beware The Metal Age




Clink

Clank

Ding

Pssssht


Do you hear it? The sounds of the metal-men. The rumbling of their steel contraptions and the hissing of pipes, the buzzing of electricity traveling across vast networks of thin wires. The Metal Age has come, and none can escape its grasp. They are already chipping away at the stone foundations of the past and replacing them with iron-plated monstrosities that cover whole villages and even cities. The green fields of yesterday now flattened by smog-bloated factories, with red-eyed faux-humanoids watching their new slaves toil away.

So, will you lie down and obey, and hope to gain a few privileges along the way? Or will you go against the unstoppable and fight, content with death over servitude? Perhaps you will master their contraptions, know more about these invaders than they know themselves, and turn it all against them. That is up to you.




Contest Rules

1. There aren't really any major stipulations for this prompt, the only one being that obviously the "metal age", whatever it might be for your entry, should be the main focus. With that said, please set your entries to be during or after the arrival of the "metal age"

2. Please title your entries!

3. The metal age is a force to be reckoned with. Show the struggles between them and your characters! No win buttons please.

Grounds for disqualification

1. Plagiarism.

2. Your entry having no clear connection to the prompt.

3. Gratuitous violence or gore.

4. Explicit sex scenes. Fade to black is fine.




Please submit your entry here in the Prompt and Entries thread by Tuesday, August 28th. Direct all questions and feedback to my PM box or the associated Discussion thread, and I will gladly answer them.

Please hold off all votes and critiques until the proper thread has been erected for this prompt.
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