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So I hate to do this, but I'm changing characters. I feel like I jumped into a character without a story, and now I'm struggling to really formulate one.

But I'm working on something else, so I'm not dropping out of the game all together or anything. Sorry for the trouble, but I'd feel bad establishing a character like Batman only to get stuck at the beginning and screwing over other people who are dependent on me.


Both of the following characters have been accepted:
Batman as submitted by @HenryJonesJr
Hawk & Ant, The as submitted by @alexfangtalon


Gracias! Heads up...I *may* be adding Robin as a PC'ed character as well.

I dunno. I'm on the fence.

Also, do we have a ETA on the IC?
I have a feeling that I'm not ever going to really get away from this sort of game, and that I'll be playing characters like this from now...


*sigh*

Sample will be done tomorrow. Had a CAH Post that needed to get finished off tonight.

But will for sure have my sample done for tomorrow.


Mozart tossed and turned in his sleep. Through the fog of his dreams, visions came and went, making real rest impossible.

He saw Director Dyer and his glowing, mind-controlling headband part through the mists of dream. The red lights were not the dull, glowing red they were earlier in the night. No, now they were pulsating spotlights cutting through the dark, causing Mozart to shield his eyes. His head throbbed in coordination with the red lights. He could hear the scientists words echo through his mind, even if Dyer's lips didn't move. Yet, the "words" were unintelligible. He could tell the scientist was trying to give him orders. Orders he felt compelled to follow.

He dropped his hand to stare into his tormentor's eyes. He cut through the blinding, painful light in time to see the smile of the man. It was hungry and desperate, though the words Mozart continued to hear were unlike any language he was familiar with.

As Art tried to concentrate on the words he heard, a set of claws ripped through Dyer's enormous head, and a hurricane of black, inky darkness swirled from inside. As it twirled around Mozart it whispered to him. The words were still unintelligible, but began to morph into something more recognizable. The voice too changed, first from something harsh and commanding to something more feminine and reassuring as it continued.

"The awakening...has begun...the interloper stirs...the gates will fall."


The swirling blackness began to form into something more tangible, and before long took the visage of a snarling jackal-human hybrid. The void behind it began to take the shape of San Maria, but Art could see ti was burning. The smoke and the flames mixed with the darkness of the dream, giving the frog the thought that he was in hell.

Before he could completely despair however, a light emerged from his chest. He looked around and saw that there were four other lights just like it floating beside him. All five sped towards the carnage, and in a flash it was wiped away. In its place was a gigantic frog, almost like a God.

"Chosen,"
it said in the same voice he heard before.
"This burden falls on you all. Protect the gates, or everything will be lost."


With that, Art woke with a yell.

**********


The knife sliced through the man's throat with ease. His comrade attempted to raise his weapon and fire on her, but instead she flicked her wrist and tossed the knife his way, embedding itself in his throat. He choked on his own blood as he clawed the weapon out, before falling to the floor.

She snarled as she recovered her knife, wiping the man's blood on his black cloth face covering. It wasn't worthy of touching her weapons. These fake warlords were nothing more than children playing pretend in a sandbox the rest of the world didn't care about outside of what comes out of the ground. The could have their caliphate. But what they found in this ancient chamber was hers.

It had taken her so long to find it. The Medjay had done their jobs well for all this time. Even as Egypt transformed itself over the years, they had moved the sarcophagus across the globe. They had fulfilled their mission the Pharaohs had given them all those years ago. It was worthy of respect, she had to admit. Her own bloodline had failed at the same time they were so devoted.

Outside she can hear the gunfire of the warlords. They clearly believed in vain that they could repel her men. They could not, of course. The soldiers of the All-Seeing Eye were the best of the best. Trained across the world but brought together by their combined faith, they could stand against any foe.

She wound her way through the stone passage way, running her fingers over time-worn glyphes and paintings. This tomb was not originally meant for its current occupant. Whoever it originally housed had been moved long ago, of course. Taken by one explorer or colonizer or another. It seemed like the Medjay had been using such already-plundered tombs to hide their charge. She discovered dozens of past hiding places. It took her a while to find this one, but this was it. Her search was over.

In the end, the Medjay were undone by panic, as most fools were. They knew the All-Seeing Eye had opened and was searching for its master. They came here, in the middle of a warzone, and that brought the attention of the warlords. They killed the Medjay guards and took their prize, though they did not know what they had obtained.

The woman crossed into the final tomb chamber, and in the middle, the black, gleaming sarcophagus stood. She felt herself drawn to it. For years she had searched, and finally it was in her grasp.

Footsteps approached from behind her, and she turned to find Koga, her lieutenant.

"Kemsit," he nodded to her before laying eyes on the tomb and smiling. "So here it is after all this time."

"Yes," she smiled broadly, "prepare the ritual."

She watched as the mystics set up and began the chant. Her heart rose to her throat as the sarcophagus began to vibrate, and the lid cracked open. From inside flowed a black, viscous fluid that looked like oil but smelled of death. The vibration stopped just as the lid was pushed off from inside the coffin.

Two strongly built, caramel-colored arms thrust out of the liquid, and pulled up the body of a man that looked more like a statue than a human. He stood at near seven feet tall, and his bald head reflected some of the faint light in the chamber. Scars from countless battles covered his skin, and even after all this time he strode powerfully and confidently out of the grave.

He opened his eyes and looked down on her and the other men of the Eye. Without thinking, she took a knee in front of him, "Grandfather."

His eyes narrowed before a smile crept across his face, "Granddaughter. It has been that long, then."

Kemsit looked form side to side and hesitated, "Uh...yes. It has been...longer than you had anticipated. Our bloodline has failed you for too long. But now your crusade can start once again."

"Rise, child," the Jackal said to his descendant. "I desire to breathe the free air once more."

She walked next to her ancestor, in awe of his power. As he passed his new followers, he was handed a black cloak, which he donned. Looking down on her, he said, "What is your name, child?"

"Kemsit, Grandfather," she responded dutifully.

"Ah, like my queen," he smiled. "Like your grandmother."

"...yes," she nodded.

Before long, they were outside, and the Jackal got his first look at the modern world. He shielded his eyes as he was bathed in a spotlight from one of the Eye's circling helicopters. In front of him, a row of all terrain vehicles surrounded the tomb, all of them manned by armed foot soldiers. As his eyes swept over them, they all dropped to a knee, reflecting his presence.

The moment clearly moved him. But not just the show of devotion, but the vast technological marvels he now witnessed. The Jackal knew he had slept long. He felt it in his bones. He could never have guessed at the true length of his slumber, however.

He looked down at Kemsit, "How...how long has it been?"

"Thousands of years," she responded with a combination of venom and shame. "Your descendants before me turned the Eye into a simple cult. Used its followers to feul their own greed. Until I discovered your texts. I redeemed the All-Seeing Eye and began looking for you to fulfill my birthright."

"And for that you are blessed, my child," he smiled at her. "And the key?"

"We have some leads."

**********


Angel woke with a gasp. Her head pounded and her mouth was dry as if she had the worst hangover of her life. But she knew she hadn't drank
last night. Hell she was at work until late and then came right home.

She worked late. The words rattled around in her head for a while before it came rushing back. She had been jumped by frogs. Giant, mutant frogs. There were a few of them. They took her ID to get into the IDRG building.

"Shit," she muttered to herself.

A wave of panic spread through her. What if something had gone wrong there? What if she would be blamed? No one was going to believe that a bunch of big frogs had taken her card from her. What was she going to do?

Feeling herself beginning to hyperventilate, she rushed to the window to get some air. There, on the fire escape right outside, was her key card.
Should have a post up tomorrow.
@Lord Wraith

Don't worry, I hear you. I edited my post to exclude Starfire and the rest. I'm leaving it open because I have no idea who to use, nor do I have much desire to use anyone other than the OGs. It would just feel odd to me. But with that said, I really don't mind not having the Titans around. I actually have an idea as to why they're gone when she attempts to make contact.

So I updated my CS with a timeline that includes Robin, so if you want to use him feel free. I'll be having him pop up in my stories as well.

In other news my sample post will up tomorrow
Okay here's most of what I had before. I went a little lazy on the concept because I didn't want to write it again. If it needs to get beefed up let me know. I should have the sample done tomorrow-ish. Maybe Tuesday.

C H A R A C T E R C O N C E P T P R O P O S A L
T H E B A T M A N


B R U C E W A Y N E E N G I N E E R G O T H A M C I T Y N O N E
C H A R A C T E R C O N C E P T:


"I wear a mask. And that mask, it’s not to hide who I am, but to create what I am."

We all know Bruce Wayne's story. We've seen it countless times. Golden boy of Gotham's life is destroyed when his parents are murdered in front of him after a movie. He's taken care of by his parents' butler, or in this case his father's best friend. Alfred starts the boy's training, but as Bruce matures into the genius and prodigy he is, he quickly outpaces the old SAS officer's teachings. So after college, Alfred helps Bruce fake his death so he can travel the world and get the best training he possibly can. Bruce returns to Gotham and takes on the moniker of THE BATMAN in order to play off of criminals' fear and superstition.

Only this time there is no fortune to back his endevours. In this universe, Bruce's parents' enemies conspired to have them killed. After their deaths, the criminals and corporate raiders destroy Thomas and Martha's life work. In order to pay for his schooling, Bruce sells the mansion. When he returns to Gotham he has nothing but a penthouse home he bought for Alfred before leaving. He now works for his father's old friend, Lucius Fox. Fox refused to work for Sionis Industries after they purchased Wayne Enterprises, and set out to start his own tech company. He helps Bruce with any projects needed to aid Batman.

We are three years into Batman's crusade. We start the story right after his apprehension of Carmine Falcone and the notorious mob boss's arrest, leaving a power vacuum in Gotham City.

Timeline
-3 Years Ago: Bruce returns to Gotham incognito, staying at Alfred's penthouse and not allowing anyone to know he is still alive yet. The Batman appears in Gotham, terrorizing low level criminals. Co missioner Loeb, who is on the mob's payroll, sets up a nominal task force to catch the vigilante led by Lieutenant Jim Gordon.
-2.5 Years Ago: Bruce Wayne reveals he is still living to the world. The Batman's crusade is starting to take a toll on the mob's profits. Dick Grayson's parents are killed by Tony Zucco and his men, members of the Maroni Crime Family. Bruce takes the teenager in and begins training him to be a partner in crime-fighting, against Alfred's better judgement.
-2 Years Ago: Batman and Dick, now known as Robin, put Zucco behind bars with the help of Jim Gordon. The loss of one of his top lieutenants sends Maroni into a full on panic. He calls for a truce between the families of Gotham in order to kill the Batman.
-1.5 Years Ago: Due to the prolonged pressures of Gotham's declared war on the Batman and Bruce's changed demeanor because of it, Robin leaves and strikes out on his own.
-1 Year Ago: Batman puts Sal Maroni away, again with the help of Jim Gordon. Gordon is promoted to Captain.
-.5 Years Ago: Bruce's best friend, Harvey Dent becomes Gotham's DA on a platform of restoring order in the City. Batman sets his sights on Carmine Falcone, the head of Gotham's crime cartel.
-Now: Batman makes his final move against Falcone

C H A R A C T E R M O T I V A T I O N S & G O A L S:

It's been a while since I played Batman, and I want to revisit some ideas I had the last time I did. Chiefly, this Bruce doesn't have unlimited resources at his disposal. He's much more of a normal guy, and will have to rely on his skills even more than usual. In a world where Tony Stark exists, I don't think we need 2 billionaires with fancy suits and double lives.

C H A R A C T E R N O T E S:

Supporting Characters
Alfred Pennyworth - Bruce's mentor and surrogate father, the two live together in a Gotham City Penthouse. Alfred helps Bruce when he can.

Lucius Fox - Bruce's boss and his father's old friend. Lucius allows Bruce free reign of FoxTech's R&D department after hours in order for Wayne to construct his tools for his crusafe.

Harvey Dent - Bruce's oldest friend and current Gotham City DA.

Dick Grayson/Robin - Bruce's former protege and adopted son. Dick lost his family at the hands of Tony Zucco. Currently off on his own.

Captain Jim Gordon - Batman's liaison with Gotham PD.

S A M P L E P O S T:

Gotham was a dark city in general. Something about the mix of gothic and art deco architecture made the city dimmer even in the brightest of sunny days. But at night Gotham was a veritable black hole with only the neon of signs and streetligts seem to pierce the inky blackness like stars in the night sky. Alleys were like black holes that too many people never returned from.

That thought made Bruce wince as he stood on a rooftop overlooking his city. It had hit too close to home, but of course his mind was never far from his parents. He had been trying to move on. His crusade against the scum of Gotham had consumed his life for the most part, but the memory of their death still crept back into his mind now and again.

Alfred tried his best to dissuade him from dwelling on it. Bruce figured the old spy was remorseful for sending his charge down the path he was now on. Alfred wanted Bruce to leave Batman and Gotham behind. He never mentioned it outright, but Bruce knew. Alfred had seen Dick as a way out of the life, at least until Bruce brought him into the vigilante life as well. When the young man walked out on Wayne, Alfred figured all hope was lost. Batman was all there was now.

And Batman was about to catch his biggest fish.

Across the street from where he was perched was Carmine Falcone's nightclub. At least it was normally a nightclub. As of now it was a fortress, manned by every gun left in the Falcone Crime Syndicate. Carmine knew the Batman was coming for him, and he believed he was saef holed up in there. He was wrong, of course, but that's what he believed.

"Are you ready for this?" Alfred's voice came through the comms system in the cowl. "Because this is basically suicide. I just want to make sure you realize that."

Bruce smiled faintly, "You're so confident in my abilities."

"I'd be more confident if you were Superman," the Englishman responded dryly.

"Well that would take all the fun out of it," Batman shrugged. "Besides I look terrible in blue."

"Drole," Alfred sighed. "I can turn off the power whenever you're ready. Outside of that, you're on your own."

Bruce took a deep breath. He had worked so hard to get to this moment. They had put away Zucco and Maroni, sure, but Falcone was the linchpin of organized crime in Gotham. Batman had the evidence to leak to the press. Once that was in the wild Carmine would have nowhere to hide. He had bled and punished himself to get here. He watched Dick walk out on him to get here. But finally, one of the main men responsible for his parents' deaths would be behind bars.

"I'm ready. Do it."

With that the lights on the whole city block went dark. Alfred had patched himself into the city's grid, which was far easier than it should have been. Gotham was woefully unprepared for a real cyber attack.

Not wasting any time, he fired a grapnel towards the roof of the building. Once he felt it secure, he swung towards the building before landing softly on the roof. He had breach about a hundred hostile areas before in his life, but he had to admit this was the first time he could remember being nervous. Nervous might not have been the best word. Maybe it was anticipation.

As he approached a skylight for the building, he centered himself. Emotion, no matter what it was, could get him killed. Especially in a situation like this.

Bruce pushed on the skylight gently at a pressure point and felt the glass pop away. He pulled it out and laid it on the roof.

His cape fluttered lightly as he dropped down into the building silently. As his feet touched the floor, however, heavy metal shutters closed up around the skylight above him.

"Well, well, well," a fat, confident voice came over the intercomms of the building, "Batman. Funny you should drop in."

"Falcone," Batman growled.

"In the flesh," Carmine Falcone responded. "Well, no. Not actually. But my men are there. All of them. Tell them I said hi."

Bruce heard a stampede of footsteps coming his way, and cursed under his breath.

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