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Can I make a rebel to join the fight? and if so, can he discover that he is force sensitive with the progression of the story?
Interested :)
any news on the GM?
Yamimaru Okasawa / / Shiroi Umō (White Feather)



For a few days now people had be whispering around weird disappearances in the Senkaimon but no one had properly addressed the matter. On that they the Captain had assembled a meeting with all ranks to inform everyone about the subject.

From what the Captain had said it seemed that the disappearances where actually murders but there was still no information about the assassin, he could be an Hollow, which was the most likely option but it could also be someone else, even a shinigami. After the instructions given a few shinigami rushed towards their rooms where each of them would receive specific task for that day. While walking back to his room Yami was hoping that we would be able to work alone because, firstly he liked it better that way, not that he did not like to work with other people, but while working alone Yami did not need to be concerned about his teammate's safety, and secondly while working alone he could call his shikai in full power. He knew well that his Zanpakutou hated when it was called in his incomplete form and Yami cared about his Zanpakutou thoughts.

When he arrived to his room the task was already there, so Yami took a seat on his bed and started reading through it.
Can I have it?
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Alright, good changes so far. Only a few more details and we're good to go. Firstly, as I've said with the other kido based characters, at this point in the roleplay no-one will be able to cast Kido above 50 without incantation so we can change that. Add a kido spellbook as well so we know what you're capable of using as well. The arrows are fine as long as they're physical constructs after being summoned by the reiatsu, and the final change I'd like you to make is regarding the character age. 32 is exceptionally young, so maybe bump it up 20-100 years if at all possible to make it more realistic to the sccenario. Once you've made those changes, just let me know and we'll be good to go.


Done, also added added inner world and spirit pictures.
I finally managed to make the changes I was asked to in my CS, sorry that it took so long. Tell me if I can paste it in the Characters tab and jump in the IC

@Artymis
I hope that there has still space. I had a concept in mind and wanted to know if it fit the story.

basically I was thinking of making this fallen angel that fell because when he learned the devil was starting the end of the world he asked god to let him go help humanity but god did not allow, so the angel made himself fall so that he could go help the humanity.
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