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Welcome back freaky scorpion robo! Approved!
@Valor Just a few nitpicks, but I will start out by saying that she looks solid and is about 90% to an approval from me, just have some questions. First, nomads actually do have a fast healing ability similar to what you described in your passive by default, and I think both passives could be folded into your fighting style description to leave room for special moves. Your special moves themselves are a bit out of left field, but it seems that you have a limited amount of uses for your special moves, and your super is a move that reloads them? Just want to make sure any balances I suggest will be accurate. ^^

@Lmpkio Just two nitpicks; magnet boots doesn't really fit the formula for a super move since it's not an attack or an obvious utility move, so it could probably be put into fighting style, and as much as I like the gorey finisher you have, I would like to tell you that against another nomad-calibre fighter, that move would probably not be as graphic as it is written (though the damage would still be the same).

Either way the nitpicks don't impact your character negatively, love the backstory, the moveset, and the connections you set up. APPROVED.

In other news, as a general announcement, me and my fellow dictators co-gms are trying to get all the WIPs approved as soon as possible, so if you're still waiting for approval from someone please feel free to harass us in case we missed you. ^_^
@Roughdragon1 Approved! Just don't tell your love interest about your feelings about sand. ;)

@Valor Technically I already approved but since you made some substantial tweaks I shall re-confirm cause I'm just a swell guy. Approved!

@dragonmancer Approved! Good to have you back dragon. ^_^

@stoneString Fun concept, solid play-style with well-defined strengths and weaknesses. Some tags need fixing but I can't say anything negative about the guy himself. Rack em up, you're approved!

@Pirouette Welcome to the team you woobie death fairy! Approved!

@A Lowly Wretch I did check the changes you made, and I think they work a lot better now then before. Nicely done, your approval stands. ^^

This must be how Oprah feels. "You get an approval, and you get an approval!"
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@Dead Cruiser Hmm...I like the concept of over the top power but I think it goes a little too far. You do define her weakness, ie surviving long enough to easily counter, but I don't really see a way to outlast her given her versatile moveset and having her speed and strength so high. The concept is still pretty fun sounding but I think you should tune up the weakness to match the strength.

I don't want to dictate how you make the character, but I would suggest adding to the weaknesses that she telegraphs her moves really obviously (like with over the top windups and loudly calling out her attacks). Your call in the end though, still excited to see what she can do!

@Pirouette What a woobie. I like her a lot but I'm shaky on the permanency of her Death and Decay super. I'm fine with debilitating effects on moves like Acid Bomb since they can still do short term damage without the long term effects implied, but you specify that the damage is permanent, which doesn't really work for this genre. If you want to have it work that way on regular non-Nomad opponents that's fine but I'd rather it not do that long term damage against other PCs.

Otherwise her moveset is just peachy and I'll accept her once the change is made. ^^

@DracoLunaris No complaints here, he looks great! Though I personally would have moved Embrace Ancestry and Ancestral Mantle to the fighting style section, since it's more talking about his style then actual special moves, that's more on my style then on you. Accepted!
Alright time to review a little bit before I chill for the night!

@Lmpkio Calis looks great, you fleshed out his strengths and weaknesses nicely and I trust you enough based on this charsheet to get over any nitpicks I may have. You're approved!

Also corporations that breed mutant dinosaurs gets a big plus from me just for being so far out there. I'm interested in seeing what you do with it.

@Valor OUR PEOPLE ARE AWAKENING, AND SOON ALL OF THE GALAXY SHALL BE OURS ONCE MORE.

Hehe, but seriously, approved. Your backstory will be fun considering what we're planning. >:3

@A Lowly Wretch Formatting could use some cleaning, but that has no bearing on the character and I like what you're setting up here. You're approved!
Hello and welcome all! Can't wait to see our colorful cast in action! :D







@Darkmoon Angel She looks solid, has a very nice main character feel to her!

*gives the Kaiser stamp of approval*
@Lmpkio Calis looks pretty neat so far! My one quibble is that his weakness feels like more of a character flaw, and while what you have there is perfectly acceptable, in the weaknesses section we are specifically looking for weaknesses as a fighter. If it helps, try explaining what an enemy fighter would need to do to beat your guy.

Keep it up though, I'm hype to see the whole thing. ^^
Sounds pretty awesome, can't wait to see the whole character!
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