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@Virani I think that the bow looks perfectly fine, I think having a ranged weapon amongst a lot of close up weapons is a good balance!

@Aerandir Just let us know if you do

@Grnmachine Looks good!

@onenote So there is more general magic in the world that doesn't connect to any of the elements, but for the chosen to excel at it they would need to have trained with it for a long time in order to be able to use it. If you want your character to have something else in regards to magic just let me know the update in your cs and we will decide as a team if it works. It's case by case. I had my ideas approved by the other gms for Esmeray for equality too. This goes to anyone else who may want just a bit more for their character, just let us know about the change so we can look it over!
@Grnmachine He wouldn't be able to deny it, nor would he think it is a prank for many reasons. The first is that he has had that mark since he was born and there are only marks on the chosen. Second the disciples of the water goddess would be checking in on him multiple times throughout his life, not keeping it a secret at all. Third, the previous water chosen would also check in on him a lot throughout his life. Fourth, everyone and i mean everyone would know his family and him. They'd know he was the chosen of water so there is no getting around it being mentioned to him multiple times by multiple people. Plus there are occasionally meetings of all chosen ones which include previous and the new ones start going too about at the age of 5.



Location: Beach -> Homeroom
Mention: Shauna @Fabricant451

The waves were nonexistent that morning before school, leaving Marina with a lot of time to kill before needing to go rinse off and change. Most of the time was spent doing some yoga on her surfboard, enjoying the sound of waves gently crashing on the shoreline. The rest of her time was spent lying on the board staring at the sky, thinking. She was glad that she did though because her mind came up with a brilliant plan in regards to something to occupy her time and bring her enjoyment.

A small smirk spread across Marina’s face as she rolled from her back to her stomach to begin paddling the board back to land. There was still more to finalize but she could do some of that in the shower or on her motorcycle. Upon reaching the beach she hopped off her board and picked it up walking to her storage locker, enjoying the feeling of the sand beneath her feet. While California had some nice sand, she definitely missed Australia’s sand and some other things from Australia. But here in California she had a whole new sea of people to have her fun with. Which is exactly what her plan intended to make the best of.

Having gotten her bag after dropping off her board, Marina was thankful for coming in early from the water because when she walked into the locker room she was met with a hottie in the middle of changing. Quickly checking her phone, she smirked knowing she had time for a quickie. Looking back up she eyed the girl giving her ‘the look’, the girl was luckily one to swing her way and seemed to be down as the two met in the middle. A heated makeout session quickly grew even hotter as clothes were lost and the beach locker room became steamy without the showers ever having to be turned on.

Some time later, Marina exited the locker room refreshed, showered, and in a great mood. Completely changed and now ready for school she went to her motorcycle throwing her bag in the seat compartment. She may have let her fun go a little long so now she needed to book it to school. Not that she had to worry about that, a ‘little’ speeding didn’t bother the adrenaline junkie one bit.

Jumping on the motorcycle, she revved the engine before taking off. Hitting over 100mph pretty quickly as she sped towards BHHS. The closer she got, the more her mind refocused on her plan from earlier. A smirked played on Marina’s lips as she sped up, swerving between cars with ease. Soon seeing the sight of her school in the distance, which caused her to gradually get slower and slower the more it drew near. Pulling into the parking lot she hopped off the motorcycle, grabbing her bag and then continuing on her way. Marina had one goal and one goal only, get to the person this plan involved and get it rolling.

With her homeroom in sight she sped up, not caring that she was now about five minutes late to school. Marina entered the room ignoring the slight glare from Mrs. Winship as she went straight to Shauna and pulled up a chair right next to her.

“I have a proposition. A challenge so to speak. And it’s definitely one you’ll want to hear because it involves sleeping with a lot of girls.” Marina leaned forward smirking at Shauna, fully aware of the girl’s reputation, thus the reason she was the one Marina chose for her ‘plan’.
@Grnmachine Here are the things we decided should be required for the viola as we saw some ways it could be abused and we want to make sure it isn't too OP:
So a big thing is that your character will need to maintain eye contact on the beast, his full concentration needs to be the creature, if he looks away the spell breaks or if he loses sight of the beast somehow (like by attacks from other chosen) the spell breaks.
Another thing is that if there is a loud noise that interferes with the music being heard the spell is broken.
Finally and probably most importantly, it has no effect on the bigger creatures/beast especially the Hunters and Guardians(you will learn more about those when the bestiary is shared within the ooc post).

I hope that you understand where we are coming from as sometimes this could make things a bit boring when involving creatures that don't travel in packs or such. We all truly love the uniqueness of the viola and are excited to see how it plays out as long as these guidelines are followed.


Mini Party Flashback
Pushing through the crowd of people back to the deck, Matthew could feel his heart racing. He could not believe he had just done such a stupid thing with so many people around, it would be close to a miracle if no one saw and them. And if someone saw the two kiss, it was only a short time until the whole school knew and then the whole community and then his whole church and finally his parents found out. Oh boy, if his parents found out. Life would only get worse for him. They told him that if it happened again that he’d be sent to an asylum next and probably wouldn’t get to see freedom again.

Yes his own parents threatened such a horrid thing. Most people would probably believe he was exaggerating if he told them but he wasn’t in the slightest bit. Matthew’s parents would not tolerate such a ‘sinful feeling’ from their son. Constant talk of the devil being involved occuring at almost every meal. The eldest Archer sibling’s only escape was that of his sister, who seemed to be missing as of right now.

When the blonde reached the deck, he climbed onto a chair and looked across the sea of people only visible by the bonfire. He was lucky to spot the girl he was looking for standing not too far from the bonfire with her camera up to her eye, taking pictures of the fire and party. With a small wave of relief washing over him, Matt once again made his way through a crowd of people until he reached his sister.

The sound of Matthew’s quick steps pulled Miriam out of her photography trance just in time for her brother to grab her arm and begin pulling her to where they parked.

“Hey Matt! What’s the big idea. We aren’t leaving until I-” Miriam stopped talking once she saw her brother’s face and quickly sped up to keep up with him, the two making a B-line for Matt’s car. “You better tell me everything once we get in the car!”


Location: School --> Back of School
Mentioned: Topher@melissahart

Matthew had told Miriam everything when they got home the night of the party. A part of her was excited that her brother had found a guy of interest but the other part of her, the much bigger part of her, was given fuel for the growing flame of hatred towards her parents. It was their fault he couldn’t be true to himself, their fault that since the party he was nothing but a depressed mess when his parents weren’t around.

Their parents, if they could even be considered that, had turned Matt into a shell of the person he used to be and only continued to make it worse. So Miriam was going to do something about it, something to get the attention off her brother. She wasn’t quite sure what it was going to be yet, but she had been wanting to turn against her parents for awhile now and the party events only pushed the desire further. Miriam would just need to brainstorm a list of ideas later during school.

Speaking of school, the siblings were currently pulling into the parking lot. When Matt parked the car he said nothing as he grabbed his backpack and got out pulling his hood up on his jacket. Miriam quickly scrambled out of the car, her camera around her neck, tea in hand, and backpack on her back as she ran to catch up to her brother. The two walked in silence going by Matt’s locker then too Miriam’s where she watched her brother out of the corner of her eye as she put her stuff away.

Making her mind up as she looked at how pathetic her brother looked right now, Miriam stuffed her backpack in her locker and shut it looking at him as she leaned against it. “We aren’t going to homeroom.” She stated causing Matthew to look up at her with wide eyes.

“What are you talking about Mimi?” Matt asked incredulously.

“You look too pathetic to go right now, plus I know you don’t want to risk running into you-know-who from the party.” Miriam had been banned from saying the boy’s name as it just upset Matt, “So we are skipping homeroom.”

Matt opened his mouth to speak a few times, looking like a fish gasping for water. His sister? Suggesting to skip a class? That was a new one. “You’d seriously do that? For me?”

Miriam simply nodded, she looked over to the last rush of students heading towards their homeroom class as the bell was about to ring within the minute. “Come on. I know the perfect place.” Grabbing her brother’s hand she dragged him behind her through the rush of people, maneuvering through all of them the best she could until they reached a door. Pushing it open the two left the school building and were now behind the school on a grassy hill. If she remembered correctly, this is where some students came to smoke so she knew it was not a place that teachers ventured.

The two walked over to one of the few trees behind the school and sat down under it. Matt shortly falling asleep with his back against the tree, soft snores escaping his lips bring a giggle to his sisters lips. Quickly turning her camera on, Miriam snapped a few pictures of her sleeping brother before moving her camera around while looking through it. As she looked for anything else interesting to take pictures of she scanned the rooftop and had to do a double take when she noticed a boy leaning against the fence smoking. It was a perfect candid photo. She zoomed slightly and took the picture before lowering the camera and looking up at him. Curious about why he was up there and who he was. Miriam shook her head and turned her camera off, it wasn’t her business. It was just another student skipping homeroom.
@Grnmachine@Aerandir@jynmi88@onenote
Here is updated information regarding familiars

  • So basically a familiar is like a monster summon, they are specifically a creature of the chosen ones element that is almost a gift from the god in a way as it doesn't rely on the chosen ones mana or magic. Sentient magic so to speak. It has its own store. They can summon themselves and tend to stay in small, 'baby' form for the most part. It can grow to its full form when it is needed to help fight and if it was to 'die' it would just burst into smoke in a way and would then take a while before it can reappear. The familiars also have the ability to speak.

ANNOUNCEMENT!

FIRE CHOSEN ONE IS NOW OPEN!




For everyone who has their cs, wip or not, submitted. We will be getting back to you later with any notes we may have. Thank you for your patience.

Warning: Mentions of Physical Abuse




The sun rose over the horizon, shining through the fresh dew in the field of grass next to Fawn’s house. Making the grass shine as if every blade had its own personal crystal, a beautiful view she lived for. Across the field she could see the forest where the morning’s light rays were finally breaking through the leaves as a light fog rolled across the ground just adding to the beauty of her view. Staring at the view allowed her to escape from her current pain as she sat with her legs pulled up to her chest, arms wrapped gently around them.
“Your angry face is all I see
Your hand ready to strike my face
As I put my arms up
To protect myself from your harm
I don't know what I did wrong”

In the field she saw a butterfly fluttering around, the light reflecting off its beautiful orange wings. The small girl wished she could become the butterfly and just fly around like it did. Explore the world and escape hers. But she knew it wasn’t possible, for now Fawn had no choice but to deal with the hand she was dealt in life.
“All I said was no
And your hand come flying at me
Your hand is left on my face
I don't know
If this was to teach me
Or if this was just your anger”

With a small sigh escaping the girl’s lips she grabbed the shoes that were sitting next to her and slipped them on before pushing herself up. Fawn then gently pulled on a big, baggy cardigan that covered the whole length of her arms successfully also covering a single dark bruise on her right bicep. It was only one of a few bruises she had currently, she had been getting lucky recently. Her parents too distracted with their business that they didn’t notice the things she did ‘wrong’ in their eyes as much so she wasn’t as bruised as she has been before.
“Your mouth is all I see
Your words hit my ears like bullets
I plug my ears
Just to erase it all
But I still hear the cursing
It stings into my heart
And I don't know
I don't know
Who I am”

Fawn began her walk to school, she had left so she had enough time to take it slow. Enjoy the sights and not overdo it. On her way there she took a bit of a break looking in through the window of a pastry shop wishing she had money to get something but she didn’t so she eventually got moving again. Her mind wrapped up in thoughts of sweets and pastries and how good they will be when she can finally afford to spend some money on them.
“I don't know anymore
All I know is
I am a girl left in ruins
I am a girl without feelings
I am a girl without love and hope
I am a girl who was destroyed”

Eventually she arrived to the school over an hour later pausing to stare at the entrance. Entering the school and making it through the halls were always a bit hard for the girl. It had to do with the fact Fawn was so small and silent that she went unnoticed or people didn’t care if they pushed her around which just made it very difficult for her to get to her locker and classes. Taking a deep breath, the tiny girl put on her determined face, which looked a bit silly on her, and began her walk to her locker. It took about six minutes but eventually she got her stuff out of her locker and began the trek to the homeroom classroom, which took another six minutes despite being right down the hall.

A bit out of sorts, her hair slightly messy from people just pushing her around, Fawn made her way to the table she usually sits at with Henry, Min-seo, and Parker setting her stuff on the table before sitting down. She pulled her whiteboard out and set the marker on it before pulling out her math homework and staring down at it. She had only remembered she had it during her walk to school and now she had to complete it during homeroom, which seemed impossible to the young deer as math and her did not get along unless the math pertained to something within chemistry. She tried to remember what the notes given to her by the teacher said, what she read of the teacher's lips during the class, and what her special tutor 'told' her during her class that is specifically for kids with something that is hindering their learning. Unfortunately her head was drawing a blank so she simply stared at the paper hoping something would come back to her.
@onenote


that was supposed to be a part of the cs.... I can't believe that got left out of the cs....

Yes the chosen will be trained in a weapon too, one that fits well with their element.



Edit: Added it to the CS
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