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@clanjos

I don't mind that you don't have a speed or turbo deck, but I do expect that filled out in the future. I'll give you one of them for free but the other one will cost points. There will be penalties in-character for not being able to participate in events.

@Satoshi Kyou

To some extent I really don't like your character but to another extent I sorta do. I feel like I'm viscerally opposed to "gamer girl" types and I also don't think you'll do very well in portraying the role- no offense. Other than that though, I don't see anything particularly wrong about your character. Go ahead and post it.

@Azure13

What was the reason she wanted to play the deck in the first place? Is the alternate personality schizophrenia or just something she does? Choose a funner gimmick.

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@clanjos

Are you sure you wouldn't rather have Pre-preparation of Rites? I know Revendread Origin technically doesn't list a ritual monster, but it does include the name "Revendread Slayer" which should be enough for Pre-prep.

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@clanjos

I get you wanted the zombies, but why not make the deck a HERO deck like your history pointed out you wanted it to be? You could've had the whole alliteration that the old Destiny HEROes had before KoA decided that it was too lame.

Think about it.

DESTINY HERO DANGEROUS DUDE.

Also do you mind cutting Releaser to 1? The current decks are fairly reliant on Special Summoning and I feel like having four chances to lock you opponents out of it would be too unfair. After that, your character is accepted.

@Azure13

I still feel like the whole Zarc theme is a little forced.

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@Azure13

Geminis.

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@Azure13

But wouldn't you rather play something like Harpy Lady to suit your character better? Rather than a big beater?

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@Azure13

I don't know if you've read the OP, but Zarc in this setting is like Zushin the sleeping Giant, where it's powerful relatively speaking but also very common.

@Shortcake

I also wanted a few NPCs so that the players weren't all fighting one another.

@Satoshi Kyou

You mean a duel disk?

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I was hoping for at least ten people so we could have a proper tournament.

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@Ammokkx

Yes. Thank you. I get that you're trying to be helpful, but please let me do my job.

@Pleek

Looks fun, though you've got some coding issues in the history section of your profile.

For you Master/Speed Duel ability, you may want to say "From the deck", perhaps alluding to the old tutor turtles UFO and Pyramid. Of course, it might be hand, graveyard, or maybe even all three, though I think either from the deck, the deck and hand, or the hand or graveyard would be the best options, possibly speeding up your deck as the motors turbo charge your character.

Once you get that fixed, you're good to go.

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@Scarifar

Oh right. I forgot to say if I gave you the okay or not. Uh. That's fine. I feel like maybe you could put in something to make the deck somewhat stronger, maybe add in the Superstar retrain I have in the second post for filler since you don't have much of an extra deck.

@StarInaBox

I'm actually fine with prodigies. It's just that your history doesn't have a lot of personality to it and that doesn't lend very well to the character itself and certainly does not set very high expectations for later on in the game where we may perhaps discover more about your character, going by what sort of world he came from.

Does he just like dinosaurs because the deck is fun? What if he's actually a genius archeologist who happened to study the game the ancients had played on stone tablets? What if he's actually the son of Rex Raptor, raised in order to seek revenge against his old nemesis, Joey Wheeler?

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@GarlandDaHero

RNG stuff like dice rolls, coin flips, and rock-paper-scissors are determined by the players.