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I am a fairly descriptive writer, often preferring advanced over casual. It has been a while since I have also written though I am willing to partake if the plot is interesting enough. Not much of a romance writer but science-fiction/fantasy, alternate history, drama, or other genres of fiction are something I could take considerable interest in.


Hm. Interesting. Would you like to discuss something in PMs if that’s the case?
I rather like the idea of brother against brother in a royal feud, and prefer the older brother so it works perfectly.


Weird. I never got the notification for this post. Let’s discuss this in PM
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I usually put them in the character description. I'm not a huge fan of listing them explicitely.


I prefer to do that. Since I know that people don’t always look at the profiles of people they rp with.
@Sini

Changed and I based the contents off of the template provided. I’ll probably reveal the other topics IC.

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I'll read up on your sheet too.


That’s fine. Here:

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Looking for a full review?


If possible yes
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God I really need to go back through the DoD part of the World Book. XD


Same honestly. Can you look at my profile above as well?



@lmpkio @Msmorningstar it’s done. I assume we’re fine now? I posted the final in the character’s section
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Hey dude! Well, you've got to wait until you're accepted to get into the IC. Other than that, there are a few issues I've noticed with your sheet.

The first being the plasma: I'd nerf that just a little, making it capable of blasting through about ten feet of steel rather than annihilating total mountains. I think that's a pretty fair nerf. Other than that, I'd take out one of your manipulations, either electricity or earth.

If you do those, that seems like an acceptable character in my mind. Wait for Lmp's two cents though!


Gotcha. Anyways, I’ll change what you stated about plasma. While I’m fine with removing one of the two manipulations, would you be fine with instead of manipulating electricity, that my beast simply is able to conduct it. As he’s able to exert it through its body but defensive purposes only but not really use it offensively.
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